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I'm sorry for taking so long to review the update (too much homework and so on)I need to read each chapter so I can understand well.Long story short, I feel and the storyline feels so well and makes me curious.A little advice from me, giving too much detail or explanation to the dialogue or the beginning of the paragraph sometimes makes reading quite messy, meaning that focusing on reading can be a little messy. Practice writing explanations that are minimal but give a good impression and can be enjoyed by readers. Like enjoying the night breeze that blows gently.maybe that's all from me. keep on writing, ok! 😊✨️
I'm sorry for taking so long to review the update (too much homework and so on)I need to read each chapter so I can understand well.Long story short, I feel and the storyline feels so well and makes me curious.A little advice from me, giving too much detail or explanation to the dialogue or the beginning of the paragraph sometimes makes reading quite messy, meaning that focusing on reading can be a little messy. Practice writing explanations that are minimal but give a good impression and can be enjoyed by readers. Like enjoying the night breeze that blows gently.maybe that's all from me. keep on writing, ok! 😊✨️