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This novel is very good, good work author!ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ ππππππππππππππππππππππ
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Overall the story is very interested , but there is a little error in the grammar writing . But it's okay you can't prove It more , for me your story' Is very interested
Overall, it was a decent read. I'm not a fan of present tense writing but this worked well with the flow of the story. The stability of updates can be improved; We need more chaps Author san! Nevertheless, I can see this book becoming a starlet for sure if the author keeps writing. Keep it up Author!
I like Ayame, but for me, Watama is the best! Also, your fan-fic is in the male protagonist rank, you can change it on the fan-fic settings, I don't know if it is intentional, but yeah.
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This novel is very good, good work author!ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ ππππππππππππππππππππππ
Soy vago..... soy vago..... Soy vago.....Soy vago..... Soy vago.....Soy vago.....Soy vago.....Soy vago.....Soy vago.....tendrΓ‘s que esperar a que alguien te pueda dar una buena reseΓ±a
It's ayame ojou-sama i don't know what else to sayγ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €γ €
Reveal Spoilerdochi dochi, dochi dochi, dochi dochi, gyaku, dochi dochi, dochi dochi, dochi dochi, gyaku, dochi dochi, dochi dochi, dochi dochi, gyaku dochi dochi, dochi dochi, dochi dochi, gyaku
Overall the story is very interested , but there is a little error in the grammar writing . But it's okay you can't prove It more , for me your story' Is very interested
Overall, it was a decent read. I'm not a fan of present tense writing but this worked well with the flow of the story. The stability of updates can be improved; We need more chaps Author san! Nevertheless, I can see this book becoming a starlet for sure if the author keeps writing. Keep it up Author!
I like Ayame, but for me, Watama is the best! Also, your fan-fic is in the male protagonist rank, you can change it on the fan-fic settings, I don't know if it is intentional, but yeah.