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Sinceramente no me gustó para nada el poder del MC osea que tengas una enfermedad que te este matando y que el maldito sistema y dios (autor) se te quieran cagar de risa haciendo que la misma enfermedad se convierta en una habilidad que incluso pide tiempo de vida para funcionar me pareció la idea más estúpida que eh visto en todo webnovel, Wattpad y fanfiction.
Yes, is mtl Chinese... but is good story. 1.- Mc isn't Luffy's dog. 👍 2.- Mc isn't hero stupid. 3.- The characters desing is good 👍. .[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
at this point idk who's who. the name change is so consistent that i think you're doing it on purpose.
IDK how it was before when those other reviews were written, but all recent chapters have had good translation with very few spelling or grammar errors. The story itself is pretty good. Not mindblowing, but engaging and interesting nonetheless
Too slow, 160 chapters and MC is still in North Blue and most of the story after he joins Doflamingos family feels like a filler, especially the system tasks. Also the quality of the translation drops drasticly in later chapters, feels like the translator lost motivation to keep going and is simply posting slightly edited mtl here. MC himself is likeable so I find it to be a shame that the story progresses slowly and the system tasks are mostly boring.
It's a good read. The stability of the updates speaks of itself. The translator doesn't give up. The translation may be lacking but it's not unreadable.
if you have developed the ability to read mtl than this is slightly better than that maybe.... I think the quality was much better in the start later translator just started using mtl and probably changing a thing or two. people being called different names tsuru was called different names one of which was even kureha 🤦🤦. law is called Luo sometimes obviously translator didn't even bother to read read those chapters and the quality is basically mtl level. now about the story the premise is interesting that villain tag is only there to attract readers mc can be described as an anti hero. the original story was written by a Chinese so you can also expect the young master and courting death stuff ..... MC is soft enough to nanny a girl because she started crying once MC threatened to kill her after she asked to be killed. Also you will get to enjoy some of that cultivation, Dantian and chi goodness here too in one piece ff 🤦. The translation quality is cancerous sometimes it's hard to understand what's happening at all.
Bumping it back to 4 stars,its a good fanfic so it deserves at least that ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
very interesting story but awful translation. Persons have been reposting old chapters for over a week. Maybe in 6 months there will be an actual new chapter. They're also random old chapters, not even in order and not improved.
Here's my humble review, Spoilers below I have read the entire book, and I will give it a good 3/5, the end was very anticlimactic and very short, not a lot of action, the fight with Shiva was super bad, short, and overall disappointing, but the one with Imu was good, a lot of One Piece lore was skipped over, nothing on the Void Century, but he isn't Oda. There was more that could be added, like a world hop to like bleach and lot of things left unfinished, but it's a decent read, and has its moments. Also what was the point of the Shiva fight, it did literally nothing. Anyways there's more but I don't fell like adding much more. Also no development on the achient moon civilization besides the fact they made Uranus, nothing on sea beast, devil fruit origins, ect.
It's a translation from Chinese and you barely understand anything, it's basically a story with new characters................................ .
The story flow and idea is great but execution is not so good. The trading thing could be done better.
Most of review here seems fake. Who the Fudge is Alu i search tried to search the original and find out it was Toriko DF bruh, if you gonna post MTL that's fine. BUt your asking money for trashy translation come on, be better. At least correct the names of the characters this is some new low. I never felt so disgusted.
Good fanfiction and story development is good [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
One of the best one piece fanfic out there with constant releases. I come here delivering 3 power stones when I can to show support for the author.
If I go back in time and kill my parents I won't exist, so who killed my parents?
I hope the author will update more chapters. This is the honest answer to this great FF. The way system works is marvelous and different as this really adds a new experiences to my days. THank you for sharing this wonderful piece.
The main character got too strong too fast, he’s only 10 and is stronger than Lao g.
Love the Story The Grammar in the early chapters is not good but it gets better around chap 100+ (same with the name chaos) There are also some repeated chapters around 80-95 somewhere But apart from that a very good story
The story is very good, but the translation is bad (names can be switched for some reason, look at the context to differentiate them). If you can try to skip chapters (if I remember correctly 83,84,85,86,87 and 88) because they are repeated, but with better translation (probably better, not sure)
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kureha instead of tsuru,pica instead of senor pink,jion instead of gionne,Luo instead of law.... I don't understand this. Like I admit you are putting in 'some' effort in translating the fic, but this is such a bad translation and you post your Patreon link. It's like asking people to buy a bad/broken product. Not to mention all thses 5 star reviews, I admit the story itself is good but when you constantly put wrong names for people it just becomes such a mess.And this is coming from someone who read 98 chapters. (btw about 6-7 chapters were repeated)
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very good and don't stop translating and posting this fanfic/////////://///////:://::////////////////////////////////////////////://////:;///:::::::::://////////////////////////////////////////////
More people should be reading this. //////////////////////////\//////////////////////////////////////////////////////\///////////////////////////////
Sinceramente no me gustó para nada el poder del MC osea que tengas una enfermedad que te este matando y que el maldito sistema y dios (autor) se te quieran cagar de risa haciendo que la misma enfermedad se convierta en una habilidad que incluso pide tiempo de vida para funcionar me pareció la idea más estúpida que eh visto en todo webnovel, Wattpad y fanfiction.
Yes, is mtl Chinese... but is good story. 1.- Mc isn't Luffy's dog. 👍 2.- Mc isn't hero stupid. 3.- The characters desing is good 👍. .[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
at this point idk who's who. the name change is so consistent that i think you're doing it on purpose.
IDK how it was before when those other reviews were written, but all recent chapters have had good translation with very few spelling or grammar errors. The story itself is pretty good. Not mindblowing, but engaging and interesting nonetheless
Too slow, 160 chapters and MC is still in North Blue and most of the story after he joins Doflamingos family feels like a filler, especially the system tasks. Also the quality of the translation drops drasticly in later chapters, feels like the translator lost motivation to keep going and is simply posting slightly edited mtl here. MC himself is likeable so I find it to be a shame that the story progresses slowly and the system tasks are mostly boring.
It's a good read. The stability of the updates speaks of itself. The translator doesn't give up. The translation may be lacking but it's not unreadable.
if you have developed the ability to read mtl than this is slightly better than that maybe.... I think the quality was much better in the start later translator just started using mtl and probably changing a thing or two. people being called different names tsuru was called different names one of which was even kureha 🤦🤦. law is called Luo sometimes obviously translator didn't even bother to read read those chapters and the quality is basically mtl level. now about the story the premise is interesting that villain tag is only there to attract readers mc can be described as an anti hero. the original story was written by a Chinese so you can also expect the young master and courting death stuff ..... MC is soft enough to nanny a girl because she started crying once MC threatened to kill her after she asked to be killed. Also you will get to enjoy some of that cultivation, Dantian and chi goodness here too in one piece ff 🤦. The translation quality is cancerous sometimes it's hard to understand what's happening at all.
Bumping it back to 4 stars,its a good fanfic so it deserves at least that ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
very interesting story but awful translation. Persons have been reposting old chapters for over a week. Maybe in 6 months there will be an actual new chapter. They're also random old chapters, not even in order and not improved.
Here's my humble review, Spoilers below I have read the entire book, and I will give it a good 3/5, the end was very anticlimactic and very short, not a lot of action, the fight with Shiva was super bad, short, and overall disappointing, but the one with Imu was good, a lot of One Piece lore was skipped over, nothing on the Void Century, but he isn't Oda. There was more that could be added, like a world hop to like bleach and lot of things left unfinished, but it's a decent read, and has its moments. Also what was the point of the Shiva fight, it did literally nothing. Anyways there's more but I don't fell like adding much more. Also no development on the achient moon civilization besides the fact they made Uranus, nothing on sea beast, devil fruit origins, ect.
It's a translation from Chinese and you barely understand anything, it's basically a story with new characters................................ .
The story flow and idea is great but execution is not so good. The trading thing could be done better.
Most of review here seems fake. Who the Fudge is Alu i search tried to search the original and find out it was Toriko DF bruh, if you gonna post MTL that's fine. BUt your asking money for trashy translation come on, be better. At least correct the names of the characters this is some new low. I never felt so disgusted.
Good fanfiction and story development is good [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
One of the best one piece fanfic out there with constant releases. I come here delivering 3 power stones when I can to show support for the author.
If I go back in time and kill my parents I won't exist, so who killed my parents?
I hope the author will update more chapters. This is the honest answer to this great FF. The way system works is marvelous and different as this really adds a new experiences to my days. THank you for sharing this wonderful piece.
The main character got too strong too fast, he’s only 10 and is stronger than Lao g.
Love the Story The Grammar in the early chapters is not good but it gets better around chap 100+ (same with the name chaos) There are also some repeated chapters around 80-95 somewhere But apart from that a very good story
The story is very good, but the translation is bad (names can be switched for some reason, look at the context to differentiate them). If you can try to skip chapters (if I remember correctly 83,84,85,86,87 and 88) because they are repeated, but with better translation (probably better, not sure)
Good _-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-__-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-__-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_,_,_,_,_-_-_-_-_-//--//-/-/-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-__-_-_-_-_-_-_-_,___-_,_-_-_,_-_,_,_,_,_,_-__-__-_-_-_-_-_-__-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-
kureha instead of tsuru,pica instead of senor pink,jion instead of gionne,Luo instead of law.... I don't understand this. Like I admit you are putting in 'some' effort in translating the fic, but this is such a bad translation and you post your Patreon link. It's like asking people to buy a bad/broken product. Not to mention all thses 5 star reviews, I admit the story itself is good but when you constantly put wrong names for people it just becomes such a mess.And this is coming from someone who read 98 chapters. (btw about 6-7 chapters were repeated)
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very good and don't stop translating and posting this fanfic/////////://///////:://::////////////////////////////////////////////://////:;///:::::::::://////////////////////////////////////////////
More people should be reading this. //////////////////////////\//////////////////////////////////////////////////////\///////////////////////////////
A good novel. nothing bad for time pass.