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Nitocris Hashibira (a demon slayer story about a demon)
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Earth, beautiful planet. Birds are singing, demons eating humans. Demon slayers killing demons, and other joyful things. How many different stories have been written about majestic demon hunters. But how many stories have been written about demons? A little. It's time to change that. I present to you a story about the new sister Inosuke. She's not just an ordinary demon, she's a demon that can survive without eating people.
First of all, I DON'T own demon slayer story, and I DON'T own this cover art.
Also, this is my MC's new life with even more nerfed system.
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The Grammar is Horrible in some parts, You cant Tell when people are talking all it looks like is: Jimmy was walking down the path, looking left and right when he encountered a stranger walking towards, him in a strange manner. Hey you over there what are you doing do you need help I can help you if you need to. Argh my brain hurts I can't think straight please mister help me. Jimmy proceeded to walk closer to the strange figure, whe it suddenly lashed at him. - End of Example- What it should look like: Jimmy was walking down the path, looking left and right when he encountered a stranger walking towards, him in a strange manner. "Hey you over there what are you doing do you need help I can help you if you need to" 'That man sure is acting strange, but if he needs help I will provide it' With that thought in mind Jimmy proceeded to get closer to the stange man. "Argh my brain hurts I can't think straight please mister help me" Jimmy proceeded to walk closer to the strange figure, when it suddenly lashed at him. - End of Example- As you can see the Lack of "" makes it very hard to tell when characters are talking to each other and the lack of ' ' makes it hard to tell if the character is thinking to themselves. That and the Lack of Adiquite spacing is also very bad, combine all thoes things and you get an almost un-readable story. O and dont forget that the Grammer gets Super bad out of nowhere mid paragraph sometimes. Gave character design 4 stars cuz Nitocris.
if you are not good at history/myths then it is advisable not to continue unless you have knowledge of the myths that you put into your fanfic. because writing a good Fate fanfic isn't just about looking at the wiki and sticking to it you should take inspiration from the ones on nasuverse too even if it's not the main world. I suggest you read the national fgo first to get a rough idea of a good fate fic, I think it's one of the best, you also have to make plot twists along the way.