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the most pathetique, annoying, creepy, cringe MC AND SYSTEM i have ever seen. annoying AF!! i thought i was reading a chinese novel . . . . . . . . Good luck
MC let momo's brother be raped, and MC saw it for himself, this is another mental disorder that I found today, really a lot of mentally damaged writers on this site.
Dropping it... I can actually feel my brain dying and no not brain cells but my entire brain wants to die..........โฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆ.โฆโฆ.โฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆ I mean it seriously sucks
overall it's not worth reading. wasted an hour of my not so precious time reading it. in the end I was thoroughly disappointed. I mean it's all over the place, the story I mean. it's like the author wrote this without thought and direction. don't get me wrong the quality of chapters are acceptable no obvious grammar errors or anything. it's just like that the story is written by a person with a short attention span. super short. the MC comes out like a mental patient bordering Schizophrenia
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kante๐ no๐ฑ para de๐จ corre๐ฐ el balon๐ de๐ค oro๐ lo merece๐el y con mount๐ฅต para๐ฑ asistir๐คก el primer gol de havertz ๐ฅถ en la Champions leagueโ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ
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This is not for me . I personally don't like the world the MC goes but many others might like it . Extra text.....................................................................................................................................
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Well the story is great and all and very good for those who likes MC's that are very realistic but it is not my type.. The MC's personality has a slight touch of psychoticness which isn't really my type so for all those Anti-Hero fans that wants an MC that is really an Anti-Hero not a Emo hero acting all broody this is very good.
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you deleted yours so I'll del mine to but what i will say is the reason I said ntr was becouse you mentioned that she might be added to the harem ,and I found the entire rape scene to be unnecessary and disturbing,but you do you bro
I like your story at the moment, but i donโt like how our MC lets someone get raped just to get blackmail material, espacially seing how that woman is probably in the harem in the future, and even if shes not in the harem i still donโt like our MC, i mean i hate most MCs with the Gamers Body (Or was it mind?) considering that they lose most emotions and just let things happen for example the rape scene where he just let them continue and filmed it... btw you shouldโve added a RAPE tag
i want moar moar moar MOAR MOOAARR MOOOAAARRR MOOOOOAAAAAARRRR ............................................................................................................
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Let's hope this gets good.Let's hope this gets good.Let's hope this gets good.Let's hope this gets good.Let's hope this gets good.Let's hope this gets good.Let's hope this gets good.
can you release more chapters I think you should release at least 6 chapters and start decreasing at least 2 chapter's think about it story is great but you will get less views
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Moreeeeeee..... Morrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrre....... Mooooooooooooooore...... MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is a good one I WANT MOREEEEEEEEEEEEE??!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!
This will have a Lot of Smut This will have a Lot of Smut This will have a Lot of Smut This will have a Lot of Smut This will have a Lot of Smut
I enjoy this and you should too. Thanks for reading my in depth review.....................................................................
Beating Ghostyz? Now that's something I can accept. I support you sagey sage, please take down the heretic and claim the throne? I mean I guess it's a throne... meh
I'm just a Wanderer Reader....... but when I see the smut tag with a combination of the harem and anti-hero...... it makes me curious what route it's going to be.....but.." You know where this is going... simply according to the tag"๐๐.. Now... Time to read...
My fic so meh, I'll put 5 stars if I want. Beginning may seem a but rushed but it slows down after chapter 8, Technically chapters 1-8 were supposed to be one chapter for QQ lol. Ask questions here if you want
Not the best but already better than all the fic of ghostyz. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Not enough to write a proper review so I'll come back when there is enough, but I like it so farNot enough to write a proper review so I'll come back when there is enough, but I like it so far
Hello, I am the author of this Fanfic, I only started writing a few months ago and it has been a rough road... But I hope now that I kinda know what I am doing and also trying to write, That it is enjoyable. Thank you and ask questions if you want down below
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the most pathetique, annoying, creepy, cringe MC AND SYSTEM i have ever seen. annoying AF!! i thought i was reading a chinese novel . . . . . . . . Good luck
MC let momo's brother be raped, and MC saw it for himself, this is another mental disorder that I found today, really a lot of mentally damaged writers on this site.
Dropping it... I can actually feel my brain dying and no not brain cells but my entire brain wants to die..........โฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆ.โฆโฆ.โฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆโฆ I mean it seriously sucks
overall it's not worth reading. wasted an hour of my not so precious time reading it. in the end I was thoroughly disappointed. I mean it's all over the place, the story I mean. it's like the author wrote this without thought and direction. don't get me wrong the quality of chapters are acceptable no obvious grammar errors or anything. it's just like that the story is written by a person with a short attention span. super short. the MC comes out like a mental patient bordering Schizophrenia
๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฅบ๐คฅ๐๐๐ฐ๐๐ ๐๐ปโโ๏ธ๐๐ปโโ๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ปโโ๏ธ๐ฐ๐ฐ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ด๐ค๐๐ ๐๐ปโโ๏ธ๐ฐ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ปโโ๏ธ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ค๐๐ฅบ๐คฅ๐๐๐๐๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐๐ปโโ๏ธ๐๐ปโโ๏ธ๐๐ปโโ๏ธ๐ค๐ด๐๐๏ธ๐๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐๐ฅบ๐๐ปโโ๏ธ๐๐ปโโ๏ธ๐๐ปโโ๏ธ๐๐ปโโ๏ธ๐ด๐ด๐ด๐๐๏ธ๐๏ธ๐๐๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐๐โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ๐๐ฐ๐ฐ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ ๐งโโ๏ธ๐๐ป๐๐๐๐ปโโ๏ธ๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐ค๐ด๐ด๐๐๐๏ธ๐๏ธ๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐คฅ๐ฅบ๐๐ปโโ๏ธ๐๐ปโโ๏ธ๐ค๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ฐ๐ฐ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โฃ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ๐ฅณ๐ฅณ๐๐๐๐ ๐ ๐ค๐ด๐๐๐คฅ๐๐๐๐ฅณ๐๐๐ป๐ ๐๐๐๐๏ธ๐๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐ฅบ๐๐๐๐ฐ๐๐ ๐ด๐๐คฅ๐๐ฐ๐๐๐๐ฐ๐๐๐๐๏ธ๐๐๐๐ด๐ ๐๐ปโโ๏ธ๐โฃ๏ธ๐๐๐ปโโ๏ธ๐๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐ฆ๐บ๐๐จ๐ฒ๐ด๐ฐ๐ฆ๐ฆ๐๐ฆ๐๐ฆ ๐๐ฅ๐ฅฆ๐ฅ๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ฅ๐ฅฏ๐๐ฅฉ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฐ๐ช๐ฉ๐ซ๐ฌ๐ง๐ข๐๐ค๐ฅ ๐๐ง๐ช๐ช๐ฅง๐ฐ๐ฎ๐๐ก๐ก๐๐ฆ
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kante๐ no๐ฑ para de๐จ corre๐ฐ el balon๐ de๐ค oro๐ lo merece๐el y con mount๐ฅต para๐ฑ asistir๐คก el primer gol de havertz ๐ฅถ en la Champions leagueโ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ
โโโ โโโโ โโโโโโโ โโโโ โโโโ โโโโ โโโโ โ โโโโ โโโโ โโโโ โโโโ โโโโ โโโโ โโโโ โโโโ โโโโ โโโโโโโ โโโโ โโโโโโโ โโโโ โโโโ โโโโ โโโโ โ โโโโ โโโโ โโโโ โโโโ โโโโ โโโโ โโโโ โโโโ โโโโ โโโโ โโโโ โโโโ โโโโ โโโโ โ
This is not for me . I personally don't like the world the MC goes but many others might like it . Extra text.....................................................................................................................................
very good ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Well the story is great and all and very good for those who likes MC's that are very realistic but it is not my type.. The MC's personality has a slight touch of psychoticness which isn't really my type so for all those Anti-Hero fans that wants an MC that is really an Anti-Hero not a Emo hero acting all broody this is very good.
Reveal Spoiler you deleted yours so I'll del mine to but what i will say is the reason I said ntr was becouse you mentioned that she might be added to the harem ,and I found the entire rape scene to be unnecessary and disturbing,but you do you bro
I like your story at the moment, but i donโt like how our MC lets someone get raped just to get blackmail material, espacially seing how that woman is probably in the harem in the future, and even if shes not in the harem i still donโt like our MC, i mean i hate most MCs with the Gamers Body (Or was it mind?) considering that they lose most emotions and just let things happen for example the rape scene where he just let them continue and filmed it... btw you shouldโve added a RAPE tag
i want moar moar moar MOAR MOOAARR MOOOAAARRR MOOOOOAAAAAARRRR ............................................................................................................
GOD โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ โ
Let's hope this gets good.Let's hope this gets good.Let's hope this gets good.Let's hope this gets good.Let's hope this gets good.Let's hope this gets good.Let's hope this gets good.
can you release more chapters I think you should release at least 6 chapters and start decreasing at least 2 chapter's think about it story is great but you will get less views
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Moreeeeeee..... Morrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrre....... Mooooooooooooooore...... MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is a good one I WANT MOREEEEEEEEEEEEE??!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!
This will have a Lot of Smut This will have a Lot of Smut This will have a Lot of Smut This will have a Lot of Smut This will have a Lot of Smut
I enjoy this and you should too. Thanks for reading my in depth review.....................................................................
Beating Ghostyz? Now that's something I can accept. I support you sagey sage, please take down the heretic and claim the throne? I mean I guess it's a throne... meh
I'm just a Wanderer Reader....... but when I see the smut tag with a combination of the harem and anti-hero...... it makes me curious what route it's going to be.....but.." You know where this is going... simply according to the tag"๐๐.. Now... Time to read...
My fic so meh, I'll put 5 stars if I want. Beginning may seem a but rushed but it slows down after chapter 8, Technically chapters 1-8 were supposed to be one chapter for QQ lol. Ask questions here if you want
Not the best but already better than all the fic of ghostyz. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Not enough to write a proper review so I'll come back when there is enough, but I like it so farNot enough to write a proper review so I'll come back when there is enough, but I like it so far
Hello, I am the author of this Fanfic, I only started writing a few months ago and it has been a rough road... But I hope now that I kinda know what I am doing and also trying to write, That it is enjoyable. Thank you and ask questions if you want down below