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Why is this so bad? Seriously, the translation is garbage. The novel is also garbage.
Bro where are the new chapters?? Was it "kamui"ed or something?? Also laughter fairy? seriously? laughter fairy?? bruh now I have to write 140 character just because I have to tell this minor detail!!
The story isn't horrible, it can be fun at times but the translation is pretty bad, if you read a lot of bad translations it might not matter but if you are new to bad chinese translations maybe stay away from this
The story is not bad, it's very generic and has much in common with dozens of other Fanfic System story's. The Plot is also generic but at least we haven't gotten randome OP enemy so far or braindead Young Masters Pooping up all over the Place, so at least the story has the low key OP MC going for it. The biggest issue is the Translation Quality, Battles are hard to follow because it get borderline incomprehensible at times, funny scenes or Humor dies a sad death because the ideoms, or jokes don't translate well. Even the character Names change from time to time. For someone who has read a fair share of Maschine Translations it's ok but it takes away from the story. It's not bad and it's not really good, it's a run of the mill fanfic for a slow afternoon with nothing better to do.
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IDK, easily one of the worst fanfics I have ever read on this site probably. Let's just ignore anything grammatical and focus on the fanfic itself... I don't think the author has ever read/watched Naruto and the way the author portrayed the mc and his intelligence was absolutely horrendous. The MCs thinking is probably as the level of a 5 years old or maybe even less honestly. Pretty terrible read overall.
The story is good but after chapter 70 the translation gets so bad that you can't make sense of anything. The names are changed, though the translator puts some of the equivalents at the top, but you can't really tell what's what.
this is a good story.... I love it Anyway take your time to continue this story 😉 I am waiting for the next chapter.... 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Very awesome novel. But need some grammar correcting and names of the characters are sometimes weird. Overall the novel is very good, keep up the good work!!
I tried but I cant read this anymore... story is great but I wish there would be someone to rewrite this whole thing... its a mess..........
This is a reposted story. There are three exactly the same stories, one in russian, one in chinese (where I guess this translation is from) and the other under the name "billions of rewards". For the record, the last two have 882 chapters. Billions of rewards is a machine translated version, which acknowledges that it is only a translation. Its grammar is only slightly worse than this, so a human had to go over the version on webnovel, but they did a horrible job. 99% of text is the same, only the routine "replace words" tool is used. It is annoying to read, two sentences completely contradicting each other. Besides that, there are a lot of unexplained chinese references, like saying 666, poorly translated proverbs and all that. Would not recommend.
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I have tried reading this book three times now, but the grammar is killing me, the book is so fricking hard to read, i don't recommend trying to read this unless you want to lose brain cells, as a person who studied Chinese i know exactly why the words are so butchered ( they have a different grammar system and direct translating characters aka MTL won't work) its very painful, also the story till where i read felt very generic, the people felt very very out of character, like seriously have can you imagine Naruto saying "what's wrong with you, you have autism?" no way dude I just can't, the Naruto i know doesn't speak xianxia. I don't understand how this fanfic came so high in the rankings, but if you are a about to read this, let me tell you that you have been warned
Novel isn’t bad but the horrible grammar mistakes are headache inducing and him being friends with Naruto is kinda disappointing since he is a little moron
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its a not bad story if you can get past the chinese sentences and name changing
when you look for a naruto fanfic and finally see one, only to find out it was a xian-xia in disguise. BIG OOF This is just to fill the word count. This is just to fill the word count. This is just to fill the word count. This is just to fill the word count.
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Tenia algo de futuro al principio pero comenzo a tomar decisiones un poco cuestionable en torno a como los demas reaccionan al protagonista. Esta bien 100 veces mas talento y todo lo que le pusiste al principio pero el sharingan y 1000 veces talento rompe todo en el fanfic lo arruinaste y mucho y ni si quiera se esforzó por darle algo nuevo a la hostoria
Ok here is thing 1st story is good 2nd just like anime there are many fillers. I mean he literally writes a chapter about Hinata vs neji, gara vs lee. I mean if people want to see that they will go watch anime why would they read it.
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Хорошая работа, можно отвлечься читая её, продуманный сюжет и харизматичный герой + часто выходят новые главы, плюшки от системы хоть и выглядят дисбалансно, но гг нужно разрабатывать их, а не просто получать все сливки, хоть с чакрой я думаю он уже монстр
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(Google translator) at first this fic was cool but then it got boring a perfect example of it, everything mc does becomes a reason for admiration, shock... (mc learns something before the other students (and they could research) reason for surprise, mc feeds from a healthy way something that makes everyone's jaw drop, mc breathes differently "wow this student is a genius, future Hashirama 😮😮😮" it was very boring bro not to mention some clichés that seem ridiculous, I'm even sad about it, the story had a future
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Why is this so bad? Seriously, the translation is garbage. The novel is also garbage.
Bro where are the new chapters?? Was it "kamui"ed or something?? Also laughter fairy? seriously? laughter fairy?? bruh now I have to write 140 character just because I have to tell this minor detail!!
The story isn't horrible, it can be fun at times but the translation is pretty bad, if you read a lot of bad translations it might not matter but if you are new to bad chinese translations maybe stay away from this
The story is not bad, it's very generic and has much in common with dozens of other Fanfic System story's. The Plot is also generic but at least we haven't gotten randome OP enemy so far or braindead Young Masters Pooping up all over the Place, so at least the story has the low key OP MC going for it. The biggest issue is the Translation Quality, Battles are hard to follow because it get borderline incomprehensible at times, funny scenes or Humor dies a sad death because the ideoms, or jokes don't translate well. Even the character Names change from time to time. For someone who has read a fair share of Maschine Translations it's ok but it takes away from the story. It's not bad and it's not really good, it's a run of the mill fanfic for a slow afternoon with nothing better to do.
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IDK, easily one of the worst fanfics I have ever read on this site probably. Let's just ignore anything grammatical and focus on the fanfic itself... I don't think the author has ever read/watched Naruto and the way the author portrayed the mc and his intelligence was absolutely horrendous. The MCs thinking is probably as the level of a 5 years old or maybe even less honestly. Pretty terrible read overall.
The story is good but after chapter 70 the translation gets so bad that you can't make sense of anything. The names are changed, though the translator puts some of the equivalents at the top, but you can't really tell what's what.
this is a good story.... I love it Anyway take your time to continue this story 😉 I am waiting for the next chapter.... 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
This is soooooooooo goooooooooooooooood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!❤️❤️❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️💜❤️
Very awesome novel. But need some grammar correcting and names of the characters are sometimes weird. Overall the novel is very good, keep up the good work!!
I tried but I cant read this anymore... story is great but I wish there would be someone to rewrite this whole thing... its a mess..........
This is a reposted story. There are three exactly the same stories, one in russian, one in chinese (where I guess this translation is from) and the other under the name "billions of rewards". For the record, the last two have 882 chapters. Billions of rewards is a machine translated version, which acknowledges that it is only a translation. Its grammar is only slightly worse than this, so a human had to go over the version on webnovel, but they did a horrible job. 99% of text is the same, only the routine "replace words" tool is used. It is annoying to read, two sentences completely contradicting each other. Besides that, there are a lot of unexplained chinese references, like saying 666, poorly translated proverbs and all that. Would not recommend.
Terrible translation but good FANFIC...................................... ........................,.......................................
I have tried reading this book three times now, but the grammar is killing me, the book is so fricking hard to read, i don't recommend trying to read this unless you want to lose brain cells, as a person who studied Chinese i know exactly why the words are so butchered ( they have a different grammar system and direct translating characters aka MTL won't work) its very painful, also the story till where i read felt very generic, the people felt very very out of character, like seriously have can you imagine Naruto saying "what's wrong with you, you have autism?" no way dude I just can't, the Naruto i know doesn't speak xianxia. I don't understand how this fanfic came so high in the rankings, but if you are a about to read this, let me tell you that you have been warned
Novel isn’t bad but the horrible grammar mistakes are headache inducing and him being friends with Naruto is kinda disappointing since he is a little moron
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its a not bad story if you can get past the chinese sentences and name changing
when you look for a naruto fanfic and finally see one, only to find out it was a xian-xia in disguise. BIG OOF This is just to fill the word count. This is just to fill the word count. This is just to fill the word count. This is just to fill the word count.
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Tenia algo de futuro al principio pero comenzo a tomar decisiones un poco cuestionable en torno a como los demas reaccionan al protagonista. Esta bien 100 veces mas talento y todo lo que le pusiste al principio pero el sharingan y 1000 veces talento rompe todo en el fanfic lo arruinaste y mucho y ni si quiera se esforzó por darle algo nuevo a la hostoria
Ok here is thing 1st story is good 2nd just like anime there are many fillers. I mean he literally writes a chapter about Hinata vs neji, gara vs lee. I mean if people want to see that they will go watch anime why would they read it.
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Хорошая работа, можно отвлечься читая её, продуманный сюжет и харизматичный герой + часто выходят новые главы, плюшки от системы хоть и выглядят дисбалансно, но гг нужно разрабатывать их, а не просто получать все сливки, хоть с чакрой я думаю он уже монстр
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(Google translator) at first this fic was cool but then it got boring a perfect example of it, everything mc does becomes a reason for admiration, shock... (mc learns something before the other students (and they could research) reason for surprise, mc feeds from a healthy way something that makes everyone's jaw drop, mc breathes differently "wow this student is a genius, future Hashirama 😮😮😮" it was very boring bro not to mention some clichés that seem ridiculous, I'm even sad about it, the story had a future
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continue...... it is a great story variety plot
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