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Gostei muito da história, pena que não atualiza faz algum tempo. Eu até me dou ao trabalho de traduzir para o meu idioma para ler. Eu esperando ansiosamente para mais capítulos.
Grammar is retardedlllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
First of all the grammer is awful. The harem tag shouldn't be there because there is only one love interest, but the author didn't even try to develop romance between her and mc. Updating has become worse after the first 20 chapters so this isn't good either. Character design and world background weren't too bad but then it's a fanfic so it's not really unexpected.
high iq,harem,comedy writer dont know what is high iq haha dhdhshsjjdjdjdjjdjdjdjfkdjndndnfnfnjfjdkdjdndnjdjdjdjdjdjdjjddjdjjdndbdbdndndn
the writing quality is questionable and the sentence building is awfully translated, didnt even read 5 chp and quitted... its chinese taking a try at a western style story so no wonder
I ll just say that Mc is bit naive and for 8 yr old.. just imagine a scene of 8 yr talking about politics 😂😂. , also with that cheat kind of system I get the feeling that mc was pure idiot following those scenes.. if it was my SI mc then I would have just threatened Itachi with sasuke to kill hokage family and its allies family members 🤣HAHAHAH, As for how he do it, it's his problem.. BOSS just need to gives orders.
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I didn't read the fanfic but it looks nice i mean the description of it does... It's just that i don't really like the harem tag....and I'm not really into it ...however I think it's a good story for who want to read it (I actually read the first chapter and it was nice I'm not gonna read more tho...)this is my opinion so don't take it so serious ,not everybody has the same opinion... Anyways I wrote all of that to be able to share this review... . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . .
Read 4 chapter then dropped it. Just to sum it up the man character is an Uchiha and yet despite knowing and see Itachi kill his friends and family but still tries to get him back on Uchiha side. Like who the duk does that? I get that the original writer is probably an Itachi simp or something but just think logically if you see someone is going around kill everyone you know including your sister how could you even think of having that person by your side. Not only that even after convincing Itachi to give up you can still see Itachi cares more on the villages side then his own family and clan. To make worst the MC still wants to stay in Konoha even though the just tried to kill his entire clan. Just idiotic really.
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BOM PELO QUE EU PUDE PERSEBER A HISTORIA E BOA SO UM TANTO QUANTO FORÇADA, RECOMEDO AJEITAR ISSO ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
ayo even if there are only 28 chaps the pure quality of the novel is amazing and the effort put into it lets you understand everything that's going on also the fact that he's still a child gives you time to see how he grows as an mc
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Só mais uma fanfic chinesa de péssima qualidade, cheio de personagens idiotas e tramas ainda mais idiotas Só mais uma fanfic chinesa de péssima qualidade, cheio de personagens idiotas e tramas ainda mais idiotas
very good continue mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnmmmmmmmnmnnnmnmnnnnmnnmm...mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnmmnnnnnnnnnnnnn
This low rating was not for the quality of the translation but the storyline. I've finished this novel. and correction: No romance.. (Almost nothing) No harem btw (only hinata)
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novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
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OK so the world may not be the best as well as the character but everything else is amazing i have no problems with them. The problems i have are with the hokage currently because of how spoiled he acts.
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a very good and fun story, continue ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Good story with amazing view of it. Always wanted to see a story where uchiha almost rebelled. waiting for the rinnegan to appear then it will be op.
This is a great read. please don't drop it...........................................no dropping..............................................i said no dropping .......
Its really good. I like it!!! <140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140>
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Gostei muito da história, pena que não atualiza faz algum tempo. Eu até me dou ao trabalho de traduzir para o meu idioma para ler. Eu esperando ansiosamente para mais capítulos.
Grammar is retardedlllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
First of all the grammer is awful. The harem tag shouldn't be there because there is only one love interest, but the author didn't even try to develop romance between her and mc. Updating has become worse after the first 20 chapters so this isn't good either. Character design and world background weren't too bad but then it's a fanfic so it's not really unexpected.
high iq,harem,comedy writer dont know what is high iq haha dhdhshsjjdjdjdjjdjdjdjfkdjndndnfnfnjfjdkdjdndnjdjdjdjdjdjdjjddjdjjdndbdbdndndn
the writing quality is questionable and the sentence building is awfully translated, didnt even read 5 chp and quitted... its chinese taking a try at a western style story so no wonder
I ll just say that Mc is bit naive and for 8 yr old.. just imagine a scene of 8 yr talking about politics 😂😂. , also with that cheat kind of system I get the feeling that mc was pure idiot following those scenes.. if it was my SI mc then I would have just threatened Itachi with sasuke to kill hokage family and its allies family members 🤣HAHAHAH, As for how he do it, it's his problem.. BOSS just need to gives orders.
Reveal Spoiler I didn't read the fanfic but it looks nice i mean the description of it does... It's just that i don't really like the harem tag....and I'm not really into it ...however I think it's a good story for who want to read it (I actually read the first chapter and it was nice I'm not gonna read more tho...)this is my opinion so don't take it so serious ,not everybody has the same opinion... Anyways I wrote all of that to be able to share this review... . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . .
Read 4 chapter then dropped it. Just to sum it up the man character is an Uchiha and yet despite knowing and see Itachi kill his friends and family but still tries to get him back on Uchiha side. Like who the duk does that? I get that the original writer is probably an Itachi simp or something but just think logically if you see someone is going around kill everyone you know including your sister how could you even think of having that person by your side. Not only that even after convincing Itachi to give up you can still see Itachi cares more on the villages side then his own family and clan. To make worst the MC still wants to stay in Konoha even though the just tried to kill his entire clan. Just idiotic really.
Reveal Spoiler ............................................................... ....... Meh...... Meh.... ..... .meh... Meh............... .................
BOM PELO QUE EU PUDE PERSEBER A HISTORIA E BOA SO UM TANTO QUANTO FORÇADA, RECOMEDO AJEITAR ISSO ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
ayo even if there are only 28 chaps the pure quality of the novel is amazing and the effort put into it lets you understand everything that's going on also the fact that he's still a child gives you time to see how he grows as an mc
ಠ◡ಠಠ◡ಠಠ◡ಠಠ◡ಠಠ◡ಠಠ◡ಠಠ◡ಠಠ◡ಠಠ◡ಠ(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)(•‿•)◉‿◉◉‿◉◉‿◉◉‿◉◉‿◉◉‿◉◉‿◉◉‿◉◉‿◉◉‿◉
Só mais uma fanfic chinesa de péssima qualidade, cheio de personagens idiotas e tramas ainda mais idiotas Só mais uma fanfic chinesa de péssima qualidade, cheio de personagens idiotas e tramas ainda mais idiotas
very good continue mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnmmmmmmmnmnnnmnmnnnnmnnmm...mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnmmnnnnnnnnnnnnn
This low rating was not for the quality of the translation but the storyline. I've finished this novel. and correction: No romance.. (Almost nothing) No harem btw (only hinata)
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novel very good story I really like how you put work into the chapters you do thank you for everything and please don't stop your story like the others
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OK so the world may not be the best as well as the character but everything else is amazing i have no problems with them. The problems i have are with the hokage currently because of how spoiled he acts.
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a very good and fun story, continue ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
More chapter please ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Good story with amazing view of it. Always wanted to see a story where uchiha almost rebelled. waiting for the rinnegan to appear then it will be op.
This is a great read. please don't drop it...........................................no dropping..............................................i said no dropping .......
Its really good. I like it!!! <140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140><140>
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