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A good novel. But a request for author can you do one in dragon ball world.
Just Nuh Uh. Because of the intresting concept, I gave it 2 stars . but this novel still doesn't deserve it. The only good thing about this whole novel is The Idea and Cover of the book(amazing cover!) First of all Translation is very bad, even for a experienced MTL reader like myself. Even if I bear with Translation (like I always do) the plot is straight up trash. No explanation, no training, no creativity when it comes to jutsu. I get it, Author probably wanted to make Naruto super OP. But what's the point of being OP when he doesn't simply use his brain to fight. MC didn't even teached Sasuke properly . He is not even a good teacher. Unlike the strength through teaching or something, novel I read before. Hokage is simply dumb getting fooled by MC. if it was Danzo, MC with his bizarre abilities wouldn't have survived.(I don't like Danzo, But Hiruzen is extremely bad someonetimes) Overall the the story is extremely frustrating to me. I don't know about others .i don't recommend reading this, there is servel better MTL out there.
Good...... ................................mdmekeksndndkrlwlazmncndiwiskmxncnfuriowamnxncjtieosmnxhfjri3kwksndntjeolwmamxncjrowlamzndn.... .. ..
There’s a longer version on mtl with 330+ chaps so I can confirm he gets op slower than he should’ve
Reveal Spoiler
Ok so i did found this one by accident and i gotta say it is such a hidden gem than i legit think no matter how you feel about Naruto fics (if like or hate) it will be a very enjoyable Read That whole thing of rating chakra quality into kakashis its also hella hilarious I write this one at current 120 chapters
Now, no matter how you take the garbage and develop it, at most it will be recycled garbage. Same way in this novel. Also, he's not that good at editing.
I like the development of the characters and mc. It should be good to see the other chapters too. Like i said pretty good work and keep going.
A good novel. But a request for author can you do one in dragon ball world.
Just Nuh Uh. Because of the intresting concept, I gave it 2 stars . but this novel still doesn't deserve it. The only good thing about this whole novel is The Idea and Cover of the book(amazing cover!) First of all Translation is very bad, even for a experienced MTL reader like myself. Even if I bear with Translation (like I always do) the plot is straight up trash. No explanation, no training, no creativity when it comes to jutsu. I get it, Author probably wanted to make Naruto super OP. But what's the point of being OP when he doesn't simply use his brain to fight. MC didn't even teached Sasuke properly . He is not even a good teacher. Unlike the strength through teaching or something, novel I read before. Hokage is simply dumb getting fooled by MC. if it was Danzo, MC with his bizarre abilities wouldn't have survived.(I don't like Danzo, But Hiruzen is extremely bad someonetimes) Overall the the story is extremely frustrating to me. I don't know about others .i don't recommend reading this, there is servel better MTL out there.
Good...... ................................mdmekeksndndkrlwlazmncndiwiskmxncnfuriowamnxncjtieosmnxhfjri3kwksndntjeolwmamxncjrowlamzndn.... .. ..
There’s a longer version on mtl with 330+ chaps so I can confirm he gets op slower than he should’ve
Reveal Spoiler Ok so i did found this one by accident and i gotta say it is such a hidden gem than i legit think no matter how you feel about Naruto fics (if like or hate) it will be a very enjoyable Read That whole thing of rating chakra quality into kakashis its also hella hilarious I write this one at current 120 chapters
Now, no matter how you take the garbage and develop it, at most it will be recycled garbage. Same way in this novel. Also, he's not that good at editing.
I like the development of the characters and mc. It should be good to see the other chapters too. Like i said pretty good work and keep going.
too much china vibe