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Plot holes that are bigger than this planet, like, holy cow, not only that but everything is so forced and so stupid that is beyond normal, it actually had potential, however author just destroyed everything like a child using ultimate generation phone and putting it in a microwave to see what would happen. Not only that but the amount of edginess in this fic is crazy, like, is so edgy that could probably split atoms, is just edgy for the sake of being edgy.
please don't drop it and if you do at least give us the original this is good
Olá queria , escreve esse mensagem para a autor/autora , sua fanfic e bem única gostei da história, gostei de como as coisas estão indo e como o MC lida como suas questões, espero que que ele posso evoluir ainda mais para ficar mais forte e que ele tem pelo menos um bom final, não posso da muito opinião pq não sia quase nada de histórias, mas espero que continue com a história e não abandonea . Obrigado pelas capítulos
I've read 24 chapters of this, all that are currently available, this story has so much potential it's crazy... but the flow of the story is all off, Mc's personality changes at the drop of a hat, there's more plot holes then chapters, the every choice the author makes makes me like this story less
The story in itself aint bad. There is a lot of time skips and they arent well explained. The powers are nice, the concept too.
I really like the idea of darkening some of most famous ones like Minato and jirariya and lightening up characters like hiruzen and Itachi. the story is progressing nicely and plot holes are very less though I would've liked more stories, just keep up writing till the end author San and don't pull a hiatus out if nowhere
A good and new point of view story in Naruto and what if this is good thanks author
The mc isn’t actually a curse but a b and can’t really do anything with himself because he’s a emotional person that’s forced to care about others It’s funny because if the story was more about the mc feeling lonely and going through something rather than him being a curse or acting like one I don’t recommend the story because the people the mc was supposed to dislike was suddenly important to him and that’s forced besides that the mc should at least be influenced by being a curse but isn’t so it’s like you’re supposed to be this person that only does things for himself but what you get is someone who doesn’t really care about himself and does things for others
So much drama for a fic revolving around super powered ninjas going to war like you’d think author was writng a fanfic on a sitcom with the way he forces plot development ruins original characters and creates plot holes the size of Authors weird fetish to make his mc the most hideous creature alive
pls more updates but the book is great. stop edging us and GIVE US MAHITO AND GOJO AND SUKUNA PLSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS I NEEEEED IIIIIIIIIIIIT. moar moar moar moar moar moar
Great story, I truly hope you don’t drop it and continue it. I mean at the pace your going it shouldn’t take to long to get to the end
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I'm am very much enjoying this story, really hope to read more of it when more is written.
so good, only 17 chapters and I don’t think there gonna be anymore anytime soon. Only thing I didn’t like was him crying at the end after saying he didn’t actually care at all ( I don’t like dramatic character development in the mc personally ) honestly I wanna see more death and destruction
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Данная работа мне очень понравилось, очень хотел бы прочитать дальше, если выйдут главы. А я очень редко когда читаю новые главы, чаще всего изза того что просто забываю либо становится уже скучно. Я пишу на русском языке так как английский я не знаю, а читаю это через гугл перевод )
What kind of snot and tears, what kind of forced drama, what kind of beta mc, what a disappointing main character, I hope after this he will become calmer and more indifferent, and kill his parents, including Jiraiya and all the residents and ninjas in the village, otherwise this fic complete disappointment and I'll have to throw this fic in the trash
Really good, reccomend. Only negative point is that the author only updates once every 3-5 days, but at least the quality and story itself is done very well in my opinion. Keep it up author and please don't quit, I really like it :)
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I think the author made a mistake with the template and how much influence it has on the mc, it affects his personality as well as his appearance. Chaoter 7 and he has black teeth, blue skin and jogos eyes 💀💀, he also seems to be despising humans
Finally a Naruto story that has a coherent power level! not people placing ninjas that can't even handle 5kg properly! I discovered this story today and I'm loving it, and I really liked the writing style! Besides, it's been a while since I read an AU that has Minato and Jiraya as a villain!.... and finally, to top it off, the story just didn't get 5 stars due to the instability I'm seeing when posting chapters
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My God, this author must be a newbie to make so many plot holes and forced plots, the guy doesn't even respect the original characters.....................................
must say I'm very into this. A lot of flavors that mix together well and really add to the story
Plot holes that are bigger than this planet, like, holy cow, not only that but everything is so forced and so stupid that is beyond normal, it actually had potential, however author just destroyed everything like a child using ultimate generation phone and putting it in a microwave to see what would happen. Not only that but the amount of edginess in this fic is crazy, like, is so edgy that could probably split atoms, is just edgy for the sake of being edgy.
please don't drop it and if you do at least give us the original this is good
Olá queria , escreve esse mensagem para a autor/autora , sua fanfic e bem única gostei da história, gostei de como as coisas estão indo e como o MC lida como suas questões, espero que que ele posso evoluir ainda mais para ficar mais forte e que ele tem pelo menos um bom final, não posso da muito opinião pq não sia quase nada de histórias, mas espero que continue com a história e não abandonea . Obrigado pelas capítulos
I've read 24 chapters of this, all that are currently available, this story has so much potential it's crazy... but the flow of the story is all off, Mc's personality changes at the drop of a hat, there's more plot holes then chapters, the every choice the author makes makes me like this story less
The story in itself aint bad. There is a lot of time skips and they arent well explained. The powers are nice, the concept too.
I really like the idea of darkening some of most famous ones like Minato and jirariya and lightening up characters like hiruzen and Itachi. the story is progressing nicely and plot holes are very less though I would've liked more stories, just keep up writing till the end author San and don't pull a hiatus out if nowhere
A good and new point of view story in Naruto and what if this is good thanks author
The mc isn’t actually a curse but a b and can’t really do anything with himself because he’s a emotional person that’s forced to care about others It’s funny because if the story was more about the mc feeling lonely and going through something rather than him being a curse or acting like one I don’t recommend the story because the people the mc was supposed to dislike was suddenly important to him and that’s forced besides that the mc should at least be influenced by being a curse but isn’t so it’s like you’re supposed to be this person that only does things for himself but what you get is someone who doesn’t really care about himself and does things for others
So much drama for a fic revolving around super powered ninjas going to war like you’d think author was writng a fanfic on a sitcom with the way he forces plot development ruins original characters and creates plot holes the size of Authors weird fetish to make his mc the most hideous creature alive
pls more updates but the book is great. stop edging us and GIVE US MAHITO AND GOJO AND SUKUNA PLSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS I NEEEEED IIIIIIIIIIIIT. moar moar moar moar moar moar
Great story, I truly hope you don’t drop it and continue it. I mean at the pace your going it shouldn’t take to long to get to the end
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I'm am very much enjoying this story, really hope to read more of it when more is written.
so good, only 17 chapters and I don’t think there gonna be anymore anytime soon. Only thing I didn’t like was him crying at the end after saying he didn’t actually care at all ( I don’t like dramatic character development in the mc personally ) honestly I wanna see more death and destruction
Reveal Spoiler Данная работа мне очень понравилось, очень хотел бы прочитать дальше, если выйдут главы. А я очень редко когда читаю новые главы, чаще всего изза того что просто забываю либо становится уже скучно. Я пишу на русском языке так как английский я не знаю, а читаю это через гугл перевод )
What kind of snot and tears, what kind of forced drama, what kind of beta mc, what a disappointing main character, I hope after this he will become calmer and more indifferent, and kill his parents, including Jiraiya and all the residents and ninjas in the village, otherwise this fic complete disappointment and I'll have to throw this fic in the trash
Really good, reccomend. Only negative point is that the author only updates once every 3-5 days, but at least the quality and story itself is done very well in my opinion. Keep it up author and please don't quit, I really like it :)
Lololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololo Chapter 4 - dropped sh****
I think the author made a mistake with the template and how much influence it has on the mc, it affects his personality as well as his appearance. Chaoter 7 and he has black teeth, blue skin and jogos eyes 💀💀, he also seems to be despising humans
Finally a Naruto story that has a coherent power level! not people placing ninjas that can't even handle 5kg properly! I discovered this story today and I'm loving it, and I really liked the writing style! Besides, it's been a while since I read an AU that has Minato and Jiraya as a villain!.... and finally, to top it off, the story just didn't get 5 stars due to the instability I'm seeing when posting chapters
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My God, this author must be a newbie to make so many plot holes and forced plots, the guy doesn't even respect the original characters.....................................
must say I'm very into this. A lot of flavors that mix together well and really add to the story
it had a potential but you F'ed it up... trash ... GARBAGE 🗑️🗑️🗑️...