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disappointed MC is a reincarnation of aizen but he has fully lost his previous life memories so it's literally just a random kid and not aizen.
i just really want you to do a omniscient reader viewpoint fanfiction please if you can
Why on earth are root operatives out there using each others real names while masked and on mission? Things like that whittle away at the immersiveness the author has otherwise worked hard to create. And is that a harem I see brewing? If it is, I'll probably see myself out. I'm 48 chapters in and if it turns out I wasted my time and there was a tag all along, I would have deserved it for not checking!
this novel is better than 'uchiha with glasses' right? because that wasn't satisfying enough! and is their world travel also? I don't like world travels!
this is okay if you look away from all the plot holes. and there are many, like many. if you just put you brain along with all your knowledge of the Naruto canon on a shelf you could enjoy this.the power of the MC is fine and i dont'tminde a OP MC. but he join the roots. go on the first root mission without even being at the HQ, then pull agro of 100 people(Naruto style) not stealth at all. trains with might dai and learn the 8 gates from him when they are both 9 (in canon dai invented it)the root member keep saying his real name to and not his code name on missions and so on and so on.
This fanfic is Chinese so it has more than a thousand chapters but the problem is that it is on hiatus ............................................................ Read at your own risk
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i dont really like the story , but its fine _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am sad. I translate the same thing but you post this earlier. Sigh. Well my fault not post it earlier. Keep it up for you. Hope you can translate this until the end.
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respectfully, this is trash in every single way except for the translation. can't say much about the story since its a fanfic but the mc is trash, and whatever the fk the zanpakuto and hogyoku is being written as is stupid. the author feels like he's putting his own hrny fantasies into this. The mc is not relatively like aizen, he's like a classic dumb japanese Isekai mc
disappointed MC is a reincarnation of aizen but he has fully lost his previous life memories so it's literally just a random kid and not aizen.
i just really want you to do a omniscient reader viewpoint fanfiction please if you can
Why on earth are root operatives out there using each others real names while masked and on mission? Things like that whittle away at the immersiveness the author has otherwise worked hard to create. And is that a harem I see brewing? If it is, I'll probably see myself out. I'm 48 chapters in and if it turns out I wasted my time and there was a tag all along, I would have deserved it for not checking!
this novel is better than 'uchiha with glasses' right? because that wasn't satisfying enough! and is their world travel also? I don't like world travels!
this is okay if you look away from all the plot holes. and there are many, like many. if you just put you brain along with all your knowledge of the Naruto canon on a shelf you could enjoy this.the power of the MC is fine and i dont'tminde a OP MC. but he join the roots. go on the first root mission without even being at the HQ, then pull agro of 100 people(Naruto style) not stealth at all. trains with might dai and learn the 8 gates from him when they are both 9 (in canon dai invented it)the root member keep saying his real name to and not his code name on missions and so on and so on.
This fanfic is Chinese so it has more than a thousand chapters but the problem is that it is on hiatus ............................................................ Read at your own risk
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i dont really like the story , but its fine _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am sad. I translate the same thing but you post this earlier. Sigh. Well my fault not post it earlier. Keep it up for you. Hope you can translate this until the end.
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respectfully, this is trash in every single way except for the translation. can't say much about the story since its a fanfic but the mc is trash, and whatever the fk the zanpakuto and hogyoku is being written as is stupid. the author feels like he's putting his own hrny fantasies into this. The mc is not relatively like aizen, he's like a classic dumb japanese Isekai mc