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The quality of the writing is very simple. I assume the author is ESL, if so your english is at a decent level and I wish you the best developing it further through your writing. For native English readers, this will be a tough read, while the grammar is ok, the sentence structure and writing style are very raw.
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is this going to be dropped please no.. because it have a great potential it's just writing quality and regular update is required....,........
The quality of the writing is very simple. I assume the author is ESL, if so your english is at a decent level and I wish you the best developing it further through your writing. For native English readers, this will be a tough read, while the grammar is ok, the sentence structure and writing style are very raw.
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee33eeee
is this going to be dropped please no.. because it have a great potential it's just writing quality and regular update is required....,........