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One of the fics that could be "it", shame the author's passed on. RIP and my condolences to the family
Jajaja qué estoy leyendo?? Esta buenísimo. Espero que se los coma a los otsotsuki. Tengo ganas de que se ponga alguna ropa tipo actual pero que se vea como divinidad ❤️
Really nice OP fanfic. Love MC bulldozing the entire shinobi world with kaguya powers. Good for a fun timepass read between books, highly recommend it.
Lol, I want Kaguya to become the ultimate Otsutsuki Goddess with several vessels running around.
The story is very good, keep going ..................................................................................................................................
This is nice another otsutsuki fanfic hope you don't drop this author-sama also great fanfic and keep up the good work.
Shameless Author Review! Since MC is reincarnated as Kaguya during the Fourth Ninja War, there will be no need of Boruto being the protagonist! HAHAHA! LOL
This.... is amazing. I can't tell you how long have i wish to read a fanfic like this. 10/10
It's something quite new and interesting...it reminds me of a fanfic that I read years ago where a spirit of a girl is summoned by Kaguya when she ate the fruit of the chakra and with the passage of centuries she is worshiped as a goddess and does very good mischief
Well, the concept is interesting, though with the mc being the mother of chakra I am quite nervous about the story's future, however, that's what make this story interesting, because I, as a creative writer will never consider Kaguya as my MC. Goodluck with this, brother.
this is surprisingly good....I don't know MC is girl or boy before?wait for more chapters to see developments of your story[img=recommend]
I really, really didn't expect this story to turn out to be as good as it is. Though considering that I've only read 2 chapters so far (1st chapter was word count filler), I'm not sure if this story will continue to remain good in the future. In fact, I would be very surprised if there's not a sudden decline in the story's quality considering how overpowered our main character is. With that said, I do hope that this author will prove me wrong and continue to write more interesting chapters in the future.
The writing quality, story development and character design is all right, I can't go into too much detail due to there being only a single chapter. The writing is ok, I haven't checked if the author has any other works or if its their first but its ok and easy enough to read(4/5). The story is progressing a little too fast for me personally and I generally enjoy a somewhat quickly paced story(4/5). The main character's reaction to randomly becoming Kaguya is a bit unbelievable but its easy to ignore(4/5). I'm unable to really discuss the Updating stability and World background because of the fact that there is only one chapter so ill just give (5/5) for both.Hey author this is my first time doing a review, probably shouldve waited for more chapters but I've never seen someone actually continue a Kaguya story before, and I'm hoping my review gives you some encouragement to continue. I'll be around and waiting for more chapters.
Overall, the grammar really needs work.i suggest getting a beta reader, also the characters feel OOC but it's fine for this story and i quite like it.
One of the fics that could be "it", shame the author's passed on. RIP and my condolences to the family
Jajaja qué estoy leyendo?? Esta buenísimo. Espero que se los coma a los otsotsuki. Tengo ganas de que se ponga alguna ropa tipo actual pero que se vea como divinidad ❤️
Really nice OP fanfic. Love MC bulldozing the entire shinobi world with kaguya powers. Good for a fun timepass read between books, highly recommend it.
Lol, I want Kaguya to become the ultimate Otsutsuki Goddess with several vessels running around.
The story is very good, keep going ..................................................................................................................................
This is nice another otsutsuki fanfic hope you don't drop this author-sama also great fanfic and keep up the good work.
Shameless Author Review! Since MC is reincarnated as Kaguya during the Fourth Ninja War, there will be no need of Boruto being the protagonist! HAHAHA! LOL
This.... is amazing. I can't tell you how long have i wish to read a fanfic like this. 10/10
It's something quite new and interesting...it reminds me of a fanfic that I read years ago where a spirit of a girl is summoned by Kaguya when she ate the fruit of the chakra and with the passage of centuries she is worshiped as a goddess and does very good mischief
Well, the concept is interesting, though with the mc being the mother of chakra I am quite nervous about the story's future, however, that's what make this story interesting, because I, as a creative writer will never consider Kaguya as my MC. Goodluck with this, brother.
this is surprisingly good....I don't know MC is girl or boy before?wait for more chapters to see developments of your story[img=recommend]
I really, really didn't expect this story to turn out to be as good as it is. Though considering that I've only read 2 chapters so far (1st chapter was word count filler), I'm not sure if this story will continue to remain good in the future. In fact, I would be very surprised if there's not a sudden decline in the story's quality considering how overpowered our main character is. With that said, I do hope that this author will prove me wrong and continue to write more interesting chapters in the future.
The writing quality, story development and character design is all right, I can't go into too much detail due to there being only a single chapter. The writing is ok, I haven't checked if the author has any other works or if its their first but its ok and easy enough to read(4/5). The story is progressing a little too fast for me personally and I generally enjoy a somewhat quickly paced story(4/5). The main character's reaction to randomly becoming Kaguya is a bit unbelievable but its easy to ignore(4/5). I'm unable to really discuss the Updating stability and World background because of the fact that there is only one chapter so ill just give (5/5) for both.Hey author this is my first time doing a review, probably shouldve waited for more chapters but I've never seen someone actually continue a Kaguya story before, and I'm hoping my review gives you some encouragement to continue. I'll be around and waiting for more chapters.
Overall, the grammar really needs work.i suggest getting a beta reader, also the characters feel OOC but it's fine for this story and i quite like it.