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I was excited when iIread the title and summary, i thought there would be a lot more science involved. sadly, there were only a few mentions here and there. pacing is pretty slow, as of chapter 140 it's still in the 3rd world Shinobi war. mc doesn't have much personality and has no goals. the humor is quite good sometimes. the translation is generally pretty good, but there are glaring mistakes. yamashiro aoba became yamakage, then yamanaka, then suddenly became shikamaru nara. kurenai suddenly became yugao. zabuza was described as one of the 7 swordsmen of the mist when he should not have joined at this point.
people have sooooo many things to complain about, is it so hard to jusf enjoy the story heck there isnt even much things to really complain about, anyways the story is doing great and i hope the stories quality stays consistent.
There's no science 🧪😔 stuff mc just discovered all stuff through lightning jutsu like magnetism only there's no invention Worthy to be expected. BLA BLA BLA BLA BLA BLA BLA BLA
So far so good. But the only Science I've seen was only using lightning(ch 56), I was expecting him to create some chakra based technology.
I'm not too sure about update stability, but the writing quality is to forced charter design, which is ok a bit narcissistic. Story dv is ok ish world background isn't bad. the world background should be researched a lot more so they can correct their errors
What to say if you a slow reader and is patient to follow along with the authors pace then this story is for you my friend .If you want a clear explanation and a good pace with interesting characters and good development to the story as a whole then this story is not for you because even the translator knows nothing about this story and that says a lot .Plus side there hardly any chinese poison being pushed in this story it's just boring and a bit lazy written that all not good and not bad just boring
still pretty chinese, and some things happen that have no description or explanations. like when they use the sealing technique. there was a boom. but it doesn't say the land exploded or the land was gobbled up by the seal. it just says that the land was changed.... not HOW it was changed just that it was. AND still to this point i dont know what cheat, gift, skills, or abilities were given to him by the god other then his handsome appearance. So my opinion. You need to re-edit and include more info and explanations. We the readers shouldn't be having to infer or guess and basic story points past chapter 10.
It was great at the beginning but then he went to war and all the limits the author put on him before went right out the window. And he started pulling chakra out of his *ss as if he was the main man Madara him self. For me that ruin everything. He is not op and are fighting tailed beast at 10 years old. The translation is fine
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I like everything except the glazing of hiruzen and how he is compared to madara and hashirama as a god of shinobi...
this review is written after reading to chapter 54. Overall and quick? worth a try. give it a try and see if u like it. the story is alright and interesting enough as well as the translation. Now i was expecting more science and stuff so, hold back your expectations qhen you go in with accurate science representation in mind. The applications are there, but no explicit mentioned reasoning in most cases are the process of getting there. Overall, a good read
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Born as an orphan in the same class as Obito. Haori becomes a mysterious nin and the disciple of Kushina. The writing style is very pleasing to the ears. In world now dominated by AI, I can't express enough how I hate common AI phrases. As a fan fiction, It has the makings of a great one. It's not a recap canon and the characters feel familiar.
What are the A-rank skill and S- rank talent? On which chapters is it explained? ................................................................
it's been a while seeing very good Naruto fanfic, especially on webnovelt
thanks for the translation keep up the great work looking forward for your next chapters 😊
If You Like Interesting Story To Keep You Away From Being Bored, The This Is One's Interest Shit & The Author/Translator Responsibility To Complete This Grand Shit. 😎👍
easy 5 star because it caught my interest and how to understand Science (Ignore this shit: woman at the same time)
Could you reply it's Chinese fanfic name.cause it's really nice novel and I feel like I have read it but can't remember it...................................................................
Shixie here, you're free to read my shitty translation, drop a review and comment if you like it
Writing is 10/10 BUT the grammar is so horrible I usually skip sections bc they make zero sense
I was excited when iIread the title and summary, i thought there would be a lot more science involved. sadly, there were only a few mentions here and there. pacing is pretty slow, as of chapter 140 it's still in the 3rd world Shinobi war. mc doesn't have much personality and has no goals. the humor is quite good sometimes. the translation is generally pretty good, but there are glaring mistakes. yamashiro aoba became yamakage, then yamanaka, then suddenly became shikamaru nara. kurenai suddenly became yugao. zabuza was described as one of the 7 swordsmen of the mist when he should not have joined at this point.
people have sooooo many things to complain about, is it so hard to jusf enjoy the story heck there isnt even much things to really complain about, anyways the story is doing great and i hope the stories quality stays consistent.
There's no science 🧪😔 stuff mc just discovered all stuff through lightning jutsu like magnetism only there's no invention Worthy to be expected. BLA BLA BLA BLA BLA BLA BLA BLA
So far so good. But the only Science I've seen was only using lightning(ch 56), I was expecting him to create some chakra based technology.
I'm not too sure about update stability, but the writing quality is to forced charter design, which is ok a bit narcissistic. Story dv is ok ish world background isn't bad. the world background should be researched a lot more so they can correct their errors
What to say if you a slow reader and is patient to follow along with the authors pace then this story is for you my friend .If you want a clear explanation and a good pace with interesting characters and good development to the story as a whole then this story is not for you because even the translator knows nothing about this story and that says a lot .Plus side there hardly any chinese poison being pushed in this story it's just boring and a bit lazy written that all not good and not bad just boring
still pretty chinese, and some things happen that have no description or explanations. like when they use the sealing technique. there was a boom. but it doesn't say the land exploded or the land was gobbled up by the seal. it just says that the land was changed.... not HOW it was changed just that it was. AND still to this point i dont know what cheat, gift, skills, or abilities were given to him by the god other then his handsome appearance. So my opinion. You need to re-edit and include more info and explanations. We the readers shouldn't be having to infer or guess and basic story points past chapter 10.
It was great at the beginning but then he went to war and all the limits the author put on him before went right out the window. And he started pulling chakra out of his *ss as if he was the main man Madara him self. For me that ruin everything. He is not op and are fighting tailed beast at 10 years old. The translation is fine
Reveal Spoiler I like everything except the glazing of hiruzen and how he is compared to madara and hashirama as a god of shinobi...
this review is written after reading to chapter 54. Overall and quick? worth a try. give it a try and see if u like it. the story is alright and interesting enough as well as the translation. Now i was expecting more science and stuff so, hold back your expectations qhen you go in with accurate science representation in mind. The applications are there, but no explicit mentioned reasoning in most cases are the process of getting there. Overall, a good read
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Raw link please .................................................................................. .................................................................................
Born as an orphan in the same class as Obito. Haori becomes a mysterious nin and the disciple of Kushina. The writing style is very pleasing to the ears. In world now dominated by AI, I can't express enough how I hate common AI phrases. As a fan fiction, It has the makings of a great one. It's not a recap canon and the characters feel familiar.
What are the A-rank skill and S- rank talent? On which chapters is it explained? ................................................................
it's been a while seeing very good Naruto fanfic, especially on webnovelt
thanks for the translation keep up the great work looking forward for your next chapters 😊
If You Like Interesting Story To Keep You Away From Being Bored, The This Is One's Interest Shit & The Author/Translator Responsibility To Complete This Grand Shit. 😎👍
easy 5 star because it caught my interest and how to understand Science (Ignore this shit: woman at the same time)
Could you reply it's Chinese fanfic name.cause it's really nice novel and I feel like I have read it but can't remember it...................................................................
Shixie here, you're free to read my shitty translation, drop a review and comment if you like it
Writing is 10/10 BUT the grammar is so horrible I usually skip sections bc they make zero sense