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Muy buena historia es una de las mejores que e leído de este tipo lastimosa mente no hay muchas y si hay es solo de konoha o del clan uchiha,Senju o Uzumaki nunca de otro clan es muy buena historia me gusta que estés dando protagonismo a clanes que fueron olvidados pero que tenían mucho para dar sabes que falta un clan con dojutsu si quieres una idea podrías reclutar años chinoike es un clan con mucho potencial
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Very good, there is a detailed description of the world of shinobi during the clan war period. Which plays into the story’s favor and that’s what hooked me on this story
writing quality is pretty average, but this kinda falls into the trope of the 5-year old kage level gang. Nobody takes kids seriously, especially in the ninja world, they are nothing more than cannon fodder in the warring states. It is not possible for every local hotshot to be madara-hashirama level. Please frame your story better. And I personally think that basing the story on a system is just lazy writing.
gem! I found a gem! Best naruto book I've read this 2024. I'm so glad I found it. I just hope the author won't drop it, though, cause it would be a waste. Best regards to the author and keep up the good work.
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rating this book once again , because the author decided to continue it , hopefully the novel is not dropped this time and quality is still amazing 👍👍
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One of the best, Naruto fanfics I have readied. Best mizukage story, also Karatachi clan. The funniest part is that at the end of chapter 16? As he bless the whole Karatachi clan he some how get shorter 🤣. Hey! Theory here! The more powerful a Karatachi is, the shorter they’re!😂[img=recommend]
Good story, currently in chapter 17. Keep up the excellent work Author-San. [img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I can’ wait for more don’ drop please. This story has a lot of potential I’ll look forward to this fan fictions successful future👌👌👌👌👌👌
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La historia está buena una recomendación de un clan podría unirse sería el clan chinoike que en ese tiempo de la historia ya debería haber Sido desterrado por los uchiha 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼 para cuando actualizas .......... H j b b b b b b b b b b b b b b b b b b b b b b b bn bn bn. Bn que ladilla con esto que uno tiene que escribir tanto obligatorio
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Very good, there is a detailed description of the world of shinobi during the clan war period. Which plays into the story’s favor and that’s what hooked me on this story
writing quality is pretty average, but this kinda falls into the trope of the 5-year old kage level gang. Nobody takes kids seriously, especially in the ninja world, they are nothing more than cannon fodder in the warring states. It is not possible for every local hotshot to be madara-hashirama level. Please frame your story better. And I personally think that basing the story on a system is just lazy writing.
gem! I found a gem! Best naruto book I've read this 2024. I'm so glad I found it. I just hope the author won't drop it, though, cause it would be a waste. Best regards to the author and keep up the good work.
Yo Aurhor is back! [img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift]
rating this book once again , because the author decided to continue it , hopefully the novel is not dropped this time and quality is still amazing 👍👍
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One of the best, Naruto fanfics I have readied. Best mizukage story, also Karatachi clan. The funniest part is that at the end of chapter 16? As he bless the whole Karatachi clan he some how get shorter 🤣. Hey! Theory here! The more powerful a Karatachi is, the shorter they’re!😂[img=recommend]
Good story, currently in chapter 17. Keep up the excellent work Author-San. [img=recommend] [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I can’ wait for more don’ drop please. This story has a lot of potential I’ll look forward to this fan fictions successful future👌👌👌👌👌👌
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
La historia está buena una recomendación de un clan podría unirse sería el clan chinoike que en ese tiempo de la historia ya debería haber Sido desterrado por los uchiha 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼 para cuando actualizas .......... H j b b b b b b b b b b b b b b b b b b b b b b b bn bn bn. Bn que ladilla con esto que uno tiene que escribir tanto obligatorio
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