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okay I'm liking this story ibreally liked the first chapter. having a legendary pokemon as a tailed beast this has me sold I hope the author doesn't drop it. author please give us more chapters this is a great story so far
Keep it up, first chapter and i'm already hooked............................................................................................
this is a Good First Chap so Far and with Kyogre as a Tailed beast THIS ALREADY HAS MY ERECT- I MEAN ATTENTION......Yea my uh.... attention but it is a good Concept tho but one thing is unclear where foes this Kyogre stand in power among (us) the Tailed beast.
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okay I'm liking this story ibreally liked the first chapter. having a legendary pokemon as a tailed beast this has me sold I hope the author doesn't drop it. author please give us more chapters this is a great story so far
Keep it up, first chapter and i'm already hooked............................................................................................
this is a Good First Chap so Far and with Kyogre as a Tailed beast THIS ALREADY HAS MY ERECT- I MEAN ATTENTION......Yea my uh.... attention but it is a good Concept tho but one thing is unclear where foes this Kyogre stand in power among (us) the Tailed beast.