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Messy.No order.Everything is all over the place.Litteraly it's all over the place.Imagine have to work a kitchen by urself in a restaurant and ur preparing different orders at the same time.The Mc is running from world to world speed running 🏃 just to achieve minimal success in every world.Its all a mess.Everythings going by fast and it seems that the Mc isn't even part of the Naruto world he lives and showers in a freaking RV lmao.Its all just messy.
Started reading thus with apprehension but truly loved it. Good hope to see more chapters asap
This is good story imo, it has some of his faults like the MC being a bit too "arrogant" and "Intelligent" over fictional characters, but I would say that it's not a big factor to make this story unreadable
Messy.No order.Everything is all over the place.Litteraly it's all over the place.Imagine have to work a kitchen by urself in a restaurant and ur preparing different orders at the same time.The Mc is running from world to world speed running 🏃 just to achieve minimal success in every world.Its all a mess.Everythings going by fast and it seems that the Mc isn't even part of the Naruto world he lives and showers in a freaking RV lmao.Its all just messy.
Started reading thus with apprehension but truly loved it. Good hope to see more chapters asap
This is good story imo, it has some of his faults like the MC being a bit too "arrogant" and "Intelligent" over fictional characters, but I would say that it's not a big factor to make this story unreadable