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Друзья я нашел оригинал он называется дрифтинг на фанфикшне Осос от атеращщуьцонесоптньзкзагсттклцщущсоттеевждвдвлоутктшшсрммклушу8а7грко4883
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It's not really bad, I just think the strength is a bit unbalanced, is he already facing a Gato? And he is apparently 10 years old, another confusing thing is the passage of time, and also some dialogues. It can improve with time, I would give it a 7.5 out of 10, I also found it strange how he learned his unique "jutsu"
Друзья я нашел оригинал он называется дрифтинг на фанфикшне Осос от атеращщуьцонесоптньзкзагсттклцщущсоттеевждвдвлоутктшшсрммклушу8а7грко4883
Good Book sensei[img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]
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It's not really bad, I just think the strength is a bit unbalanced, is he already facing a Gato? And he is apparently 10 years old, another confusing thing is the passage of time, and also some dialogues. It can improve with time, I would give it a 7.5 out of 10, I also found it strange how he learned his unique "jutsu"