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Synopsis
One-piece =Moria style of shadow adding and Modified Soru
similar ideas ;
Shadow Illusion=from Kyōka Suigetsu {Nurarihyon no Mago }
Shadow puppet=One piece and Solo leveling
Kugi punch=Toriko{modifying soru into punching power}
Shadow drive=fairytail
Shadow knight -Igris=solo leveling
A guy transmigrated to Naruto world with no system no golden finger with chakra problem and obviously isn't a genius,
come and see how he becomes from an ordinary boy to the worlds first shadow lord
and other than the character of my own other characters fully belong to the creator of Naruto so hope it won't be abolished due to copyright
Now ;the next fanfic
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Write a reviewi found this novel today and mann is it good. Most naruto san books give the mc the sharingan a system with blood lines but here all he gets is knolwedge from his past and he has to work from the ground up and its great
i really like the idea ( i know that shadows powers arent new but they still are cool) , the nara clan can give a lot of posibilities. i would suggest you to write more dialogues bettwen the characters ( even if the dialogue is only a chat bettwen friends , with his family or with the love interest 😏) to make us feel the OC more integreted and feel the world more real. This is just my personal preference , anyways , great job and a very good fanfic. (if you read some error , i am spanish xd)
Reveal SpoilerA Very good naruto fanfiction. Plot premise and plot progression are very good. Mc's characterization is excellent. Fanfic is completed which is always a plus. There are two main problems with this fanfic. They are : Character interactions & grammar Character interactions are average. Grammar is below average.
The Character is good but the writing quality is pretty bad, simple stuff is missed like Captializon........................................
The concept is great. That said there are a lot of situations that make me question my sanity for reading as far as I have. In general expect canon from the story, a four man genin team and grammar that will seriously cause you to want to give up on the story regardless of what happens. All in all, the concept is great but needs to be revisited by the author or someone that will execute it better.
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well as of chapter 7 the grammar was pretty bad and horrible I had to focus on each and every line and decode whatever the fuc* the author was trying to say. other than that if you can understand what he was saying then it was pretty average fic.
For me undoubtedly this author is among top 5 this five stars are for the authors. action he not only just finished the novel but gave the whole novel in a very few installments .. lastly I will say this "The novel was a very satisfying read"
Currently one of the best naruto fanfic, highly recommended .----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Ooooooooooh! I just read all the tags. Are you gonna add nurarihyon’s Kyoka suigetsu to shikai’s shadow jutsu? That would be so cool!! Plus if you’re gonna add a modified version of soru you should add a modified geppou as well.
This story is filled with so many plot holes feel like I'm going to fall while reading this, and the MC is one of the stupidest ones have seen in my life, he always acts like he has 0 knowledge of Naruto but he does have it, I just don't get it. He also said the mc have low charka but can do things that require a lot of charka Honstly at this point the only point reading is for his darkness technique
This story is bad, it is full of plot holes, the MC is bad, he is in love with a 8 year old even though he was 22 before his death and was l**ting after her and thinking of gr**ming her, he also knows the plot of Naruto but a lot of the time he does stupid stuff that makes it look like he doesn't. The english in this fan fic is bad, some times it feels like I'm reading an MTL, though it is bad I still understood most of it, so I didn't take down stars for it or it would have been 1 star. The story is at the level of being boring to enjoy it, but still interesting to keep reading, the interesting part is the shadow ability and what he will do with them, otherwise I wouldn't even get to chapter 15 reading this. Overall, I really wouldn't recommend reading this unless you have nothing else to read, it is fine to pass time if you have nothing else. This is just my opinion, give it a try if you want and you might enjoy this since it seems like some people do enjoy this story. I will drop for now and might continue it later and if I do continue with it, hopefully my next review will make me say that I was wrong and give it more stars.
great work, the protagonist is not a psychopath who only cares about power and has the cliché desire to be the strongest, he cares about family and friends and doesn’t go around stealing cells from the first kage or eye of the uchihas, he develops his own unique power, the only shortcoming is that the work is very short
Thanks for this story!🎉🍾 This story is so good with a true ending!!!!!!!😎😎😎😎😎👍👍👍👍👍👍👍☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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The story is not bad once you understand what the author wrote. Other than that, the plot is similar to any other naruto fanfic..............