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Chapter 4: Chapter 4

- Deity's Dimension

"Hmm~ Now what type of personality should I give my avatar I mean I am going to give it its conscience and it will go with Naruto when he leaves I can use it as my eye to see how good this little project goes and how much he changes his timeline that I saw before taking him," The deity said as it looked through a bag of some kind a pulling orbs one by one and placing them in front of themselves as choosing a good one with a see-through portal under the floating orbs.

As they pull out orb after orb they think about which one could help Naruto once he leaves this world and goes back to his, but not everything goes to plan especially when this deity likes to gamble as he pulls out a Pinkish black orb. By some unknown force, the deity sneezes and drops the orb into the portal falling into Hita giving her her personality and conscience or moral compass.

"Shit, what the fuck. How could this happen man that was the worst choice I can't take the *@^@&@ back it will mess up any other *@^@&@ that goes to the avatar damn it." They said angrily standing up they walked to another room with many more avatars from young to old, fat to extremely skinny but none like the avatar he left to sleep in the forgotten land. 

"Why do I have this hit luck forget it let's just hope nothing too bad happens I should stop her aging until Naruto slays all the colossi. We don't want too much of an age gap do we especially with that *@^@&@ man I hope nothing too bad happens with that essence," They said as they closed the portal to Hita and walked back to his chair and watched Naruto who is close to the next colossi.

- Forgotten Land's

As Naruto rode through a one-way path surrounded by stone walls of stone he made it to a pond of some kind getting off Argo he raised his sword and saw that the now golden light pointed at the top of a round platform in the middle of the pond.

"Damn look like I have to get wet," he said as he walked into the water not seeing any other way he swam to a part that was protruding out next to the round platform making it to it he walked up it getting to a broken platform he get a running start and jump across making it he grabs on to the ledge he sighs in relief and climbs along the ledge until his back is facing the round platform he takes a deep breath and put his trust in his strength as he put his leg up and push himself off the ledge making with a roll to the platform.

Looking around he saw a staircase to his left walking towards it he got to the top of the platform he could see the colossi sleeping walking close he heard its rhythmic breathing stop as it stood up with armor and a long stone sword of some kind it roared into the heavens Naruto gulps as he wonders how he is going to take down this colossus?

Standing still Naruto thinks of a plan but the colossi are not waiting for anyone it raises it's slamming it down where Naruto stood without thinking Naruto rolled to his right as the sword slammed to his left just a few feet away from him. The shockwave of the sword hitting the ground threw him a bit further than where he landed putting chakra to his feet he stood up then ran fast around the colossi looking for any weakness not find any he looked around him and saw the middle of the platform he sees a metallic round object in the platform he comes up a with an idea.

Pulling out his bow he shot the colossi in the arm where it had further as it ran at him Naruto stood in the middle of the colossi not thinking back up and raised its sword slamming it where Naruto once stood as he jumped out of the way once he saw it raise it stone sword. *DONG* and *CRUMBLE* its armor that covers most of its body cracked and broke falling to the ground Naruto smiled at his plan that worked.

The colossi recovered and were angered they looked at Naruto and walked towards him Naruto was confused waiting to see what it would do once closed enough it turned its stone sword and slammed the point into the ground Naruto again jumped away once it started turning its sword now need a way to climb the colossi. Remembering how it took the colossi some time to pick up its stone sword when it first attacked him he got away from it just enough to where the colossi could slam the edge of the sword at him after a few minutes of circling the colossi raised it sword so Naruto crouch down ready to jump out of the way. 

Smiling Naruto jumped a few feet away as the colossi swung its sword down making the platform shake, Naruto ran up the sword making it to its forearm he started climbing it further making it to a platform for its broken armor before he could make it further the colossi tries to shake him off but Naruto holds on tight almost falling when it started but held on to its fur before he could fall. Once it stopped he climbed onto the back of the colossi he took a quick break he felt tired, but was ready to hold onto the fur once he caught his breath he ran to the top of its head seeing the sigil he smiled but the colossi started to lean forward and tries to shake him off again but Naruto holds on tight.

Again once it stops he raises his sword he stabs it in the head making it roar in pain as black smoke spurts out he quickly raises his sword and stabs it again in the colossi then again but before he could get his fourth stab in the sigil dissapeares from the head confusing Naruto. Before he could look around the colossi shook again making him fall when he was about neck high he saw the sigil on the stomach of the colossi he fell into the colossi catching the fur on its arm again The teh colossi turned to its left Naruto sighs in relieve.

 He climbs the Colossi but this time he heads down when he makes it to the back of the Colossi tries many times to shake him off but Naruto is not going to make the same mistakes twice so he holds on tighter than usual making his way down to the around platform on the colossi he runs to the front grabbing on to the fur of it stomach he raises his sword and stabs it in the sigil as the wound spurt out black smoke he stabs it twice more quickly as the colossi razors and then most of it falls to the ground Naruto jumps off landing on his feet eh run to the edge of the platform he waves to Argo who was waiting for him at the edge of the pond but before he could do anything he again gets assaulted by the black shadows who throw him off the platform as he falls he blackouts.

To Be Continued. . . 


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