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Naruto knew he was different from others. At a very young age, he was smarter than his peers, so he could see the different in treatment between them and him. He questioned his treatment only to be ruthlessly shot down. He grit his teeth as his conviction and ambitions grew. Though a meeting with a certain heiress seemed to certainly slow down his plans.
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Naruto x Ino
Drama
Romance
Action
Adventure
Strong to Stronger
Hiding True Abilities
Age Progression
Fluff
Slow
Slice-of-Life
Handsome Male Lead
Beautiful Female Lead
Love Interest Falls in Love First
Genius Protagonist
Hardworking Protagonist
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Write a reviewYou've intrigued me shounen. I'm so done with the bad third hokage trope even though Kishimoto himself didn't intend Hiruzen to be seen in that light. What's more a slice of life and fluff fic? Tsundere and smart Naruto? Chakra chains and the sensory ability?
I swear I’ve read this story before on fanfiction.net. Maybe it’s my imagination or something I don’t really care. Romance is weird and is a bit forced, but can mostly be ignored. It’s just a small annoyance while reading really. The main thing that annoys me are the characters in the story. The fact that every shinobi just crumples into guilt and self-loathing as soon as they see Naruto cry is cringy to me. No one was actually really close enough to Naruto to elicit that type of reaction out of themselves when they see him cry. Naruto hasn’t even seen Kakashi yet, and yet he’s close enough to Kakashi to make him cry. All the characters just goes into little balls of depression and guilt whenever they see Naruto sad. Which is kinda awkward not gonna lie. These extremely jaded people crying over some orphan child they barely know. Sure said orphan is the son of their friend, but they never actually interacted with him to form any attactchment whatsoever. I’m going to make a comparison to real life now. When I see those ads about starving children in Africa or something I feel sad, but I’m not going to cry about it. Honestly we’ve probably seen hundreds of ads about charity, but realistically only .01% of us actually donate a substantial amount of money to help someone.
Im obsessed now of this because of 1 romantic scene so take my reiview and all of my upcoming stones.......................................................................................
I would say this story is going pretty good so far. And I like character development. You could enjoy it and in my opinion a worthy fanfiction.
This fic is very good! Keep writing autor-san as this is a great naruto verse fanfic. I love the fact that his naruto is more a mix of his parents than just looks, and I also love him being a tsundere, lol. And long live Ino, a great romantic couple!
It’s Just a basic naruto fanfic only kinda different thing is that the 3rd isn’t evil and naruto is a tsundere the writing Quality is decent and the conversations between characters is ok but nothing really special about it
Ayo, I just wanted to say this is such a solid story. I reread this multiple times. The way the characters interact aren’t robotic and is actually natural. While reading it I can also feel the characters emotions which is a plus. I recommend this to anyone who sees this review. A few things to keep in mind however, first it’s an au. Second, Naruto’s personality Is different and is more powerful too. Third, it’s a slice of life fic. It’s a slow burn so it would progress slowly. Fourth, it’s an Ino x Naruto fanfic. Ino being the female lead. I see some comments pushing for the author to make it a harem, but either way it’s good even without one. And plus I totally think a harem would ruin this
good story so far. the ultra rare tsundere naruto is perhaps the most interesting spin on naruto's character I've read in fanfiction. also appreciate that 3rd hokage isnt written off as evil in this story.
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Absolutely love the story. Would love to read more. Please keep updating the story. I am also looking forward to reading the meeting between tsundere Naruto and tsundere Kurama.
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I love personality of Naruto and Ino, I think that is better than the originals. The story is not boring, so I am waiting to the next chapters.
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The human interaction between various people is much better done than usual for a fanfic and it makes for a better read. I do hope to see some progression tough. It really is really slow. Unless the author is one in thousands that actually completes their stories, the current position progression rate would not see him graduate before chapter 40... Etc etc etc. So I do hope there will be some timeskips coming.
Oh legit one of the best written Naruto fan fics i have read. First off NaruIno ship is best ship so thats a massive bonus. Yet the story is so fricking good. The author has talent for storytelling and has me invested in this fan fic hard. My only wish was there was more to read legit fantastic work Author Thank you
Author UchihaFanatic
Interesting because it's so hard to find fluffy romance type of Naruto fics on webnovel. Usually it's mostly action or harem type of novels. Oh god, also the gamer or system ones. Finding a slow paced, slice of life, with fluff on the tags is a nice change of pace. Don't butcher this fics, I have high hopes...