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Rise of the Eternal flame
Raymond sins an Archmage who distroyed his previous world with his eternal flames is reborn into the naruto world.
You want to know what's the most powerful genjutsu?
- Obviously the one that can bend the REALITY itself.
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A different take on a lesser known clan. few chapters so far, but I've really enjoyed it.
33chaps in The story is better than i thought i could write. I like the story overall. Even after a lot of revisions and checking there are a few spelling mistakes that i didn't notice here and there in the story that i plan on fixing later, maybe, but it doesn't impact the story much. For a first proper story that i wrote i would say i did a good job.
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character actions, 10/10. power creep (thus far) 10/10. I love his squad interactions and hope it continues ๐ค
Author the story would be more fun if the boy gained the memories and experience instead of dying he would remain a boy but he would learn with the experiences of fighting and it would become more powerful with that I liked it a lot thanks for the chapter keep it up
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Just giving myself 5 stars for now, don't mind me. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Honestly for now, i have nothing bad to say about this story. I usually am really judgy, but maybe its because it has low chapters