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Waking up in the body of a standard Genin, a village invasion on the horizon and a count down until to a full out apocalypse only a few years away, what's a lad to do? There was only one thing he could do, cheat. Thankfully, this game system that instigated all of this in the first place, was quite helpful in that regard. Gamer Insert.
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Here we go boys, here we fucking go! I finally sold out and started a System story. Let's see if I can actually make it be something worth reading instead of a pile of crap. And if not, come lambast me for it!
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
this book is good, not that bad, but knowing this will be dropped a few days later on saddens me, i mean that's what the author does to his other books but i wish he'll finish this book, that would be quite an achievement for him since i have seen that his books doesn't have any completed in one of them, you guys should check out his other books, but i doubt you'll like it since they're dropped, or maybe he just got mindblocked idk, still i wish for this book to be completed, that's all thanks
First of all, this is my personal viewpoint of this fanfic and is not a downright hate review. The story started of good and was quite fun to read at first, however the quality has dropped significantly ever since the Chunin exam arc (that has been stretched for way to long). One strength of this was that there were new ideas that had been utilised (A different Kekai Genkai instead of the usual Sharingan and 'sage body') instead of the oversaturated cliches that are common in Naruto fanfics. The Mc who despite his flaws was tolerable to read now acts like an aloof idiot at every moment. Whereas the conversations feel awkward to read and sometimes are just downright weird. In conclusion this started of good but fell in quality. I'll be back in 6 months and give my final review then.
This book was originally a one piece fanfiction but its now made the transition into a Naruto one so the current reviews for the most part are not accurate. This fanficition if completed (currently on chapter 18) will easily be one of the top 5 best naruto fanfictions on Webnovel, I have extremely high hopes and I hope the author fulfils it :))
The best system strory in this site, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop
Thank you author for the excellent novel! 1- World scenery (5 stars) 2- Strength of the protagonist (5 stars), he gradually grows as he continues his journey, this part is very important in naruto fanfic. Why? I can't read something like a 12 year old protagonist with the strength of a Kage.... Shiruzen has 50 years to reach his peak... so imagining protagonists reaching that even with kage bushin loses interest. 3- Author's Writing (5 stars) 4- Protagonist mentality (5 stars) not arrogant, knows where to train and ask for help. Smart, but knows he still has a lot to grow. 5 - Updates of the novel (5 stars) today there were at least 2 chapters. Even 1 a day is very good! Have a good day! Author- san
One of, if not the best one piece fan fiction on the site even though were only four chapter in it has already striked my fancy. I sure do hate the 140 Word requirement
Someone tell me if it's worth reading on, because I see in the chapters that "the chunin exams" is already in part 62 of that arc and I don't think even in the anime it took that long.
very good, very good writing, very good story, very good /fast/stable updates. PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP
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Another masterpiece by the masterpiece master grandmaster of masterly masterpieces. Also known as the blueball edging novel drop masta. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦💦🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
a VERY good Naruto fanfic with an intelligent Mc 🧠 who REALLY uses all his knowledge of the original work to gain advantages so far I've only read 8 chapters but it's very promising so I invite you to check it out and to the read👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Bruv...update yeah...don't be moving discombobulated and all that yeah...update!!!!!!!!!?!!!👌👌👌👌👌👌🤕🤕🤠👌👌👌🤠🤠👌🤠🤕😶😶😶😶😶😶😶
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Fk this Author, another masterpiece then dropping it. did you Drop the pokemon Fanfic?? 🙄🙄🙄🙄[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Me encanta estos fanfic, alguien puede recomendarme a autores parecidos a Jordino? .......................................................................
I hate this, the author is going to make another masterpiece, and then abandon it at 30 chapters to make another masterpiece Anyway, 5/5, best thing i ever read, like always