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Well this is the last chapter(chp 22) I will be reading. It was good for a while but the translation has been going downhill and now it's outright bad. After the author got some popularity he seems to have started slacking.
Literally begging for supplies form poor ordinary people, konaha the most richest village, then how the other village(poor) is fighting. The Gold Fruit isn't weak. It allows the user to control gold. If the user has 300 kg of gold, then he can convert it into fine needles or kunai to kill people. However, here the Gold Fruit is only useful for collecting gold. Why would it require tons of gold to have any fighting power? Apple some logic in writing.
The MC is pretty lame, obsessed with money in a world money doesn't matter much. The translation quality is typical MTL quality, so it also sucks.
Hi there i have been reading this book and i think it is a fantastic book that has the potential to grow a lot more so if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my platform please contact me and we can further negotiations details. this is my Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline]
Stupid protagonist, instead of concentrating on gaining strength he prefers to earn money, I don't know what the future is like but that thought already put me off reading the novel.
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Me gusta el libro vamos no te desanimes tu puedes π₯°πβΊοΈπππ€€ππππβΊοΈππππππππ€£πππππ ππ₯ΉβΊοΈπππππβΊοΈππππππππππ₯°πππ€«πΆβπ«οΈπ₯Ίπππ ππ₯°ππ₯ΉπππππβΊοΈππππππ π
Reveal Spoiler NEVER GIVE UP BROTHER YOU ARE FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really got into the story, it's original for once that we don't have an MC OP but rather an intelligent one. and who cares about the development of the whole village. I hope the story will continue for a long time
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Overall, this novel is good, but there are few things I need to point out: The gold fruit in this story is not the original fruit from One Piece. In this version, it can turn things into gold, while the OG fruit couldn't, only control existing gold. The grammar is okay (who cares anyway), but there are few translation errors. Since there are only 11 chapters right, it should be easy for the author to correct them. (or just ignore them) MC might or might not change the storyline. Personally, Iβm not putting much hope in him. π The MC is 6-7 years older than Tsunade, so we can expect him to participate in the First Great Ninja War and make a name for himselfβhopefully. (psst.. MC has system, so don't be a failure)
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Well this is the last chapter(chp 22) I will be reading. It was good for a while but the translation has been going downhill and now it's outright bad. After the author got some popularity he seems to have started slacking.
Literally begging for supplies form poor ordinary people, konaha the most richest village, then how the other village(poor) is fighting. The Gold Fruit isn't weak. It allows the user to control gold. If the user has 300 kg of gold, then he can convert it into fine needles or kunai to kill people. However, here the Gold Fruit is only useful for collecting gold. Why would it require tons of gold to have any fighting power? Apple some logic in writing.
The MC is pretty lame, obsessed with money in a world money doesn't matter much. The translation quality is typical MTL quality, so it also sucks.
Hi there i have been reading this book and i think it is a fantastic book that has the potential to grow a lot more so if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my platform please contact me and we can further negotiations details. this is my Instagram [yurichi_adrenaline]
Stupid protagonist, instead of concentrating on gaining strength he prefers to earn money, I don't know what the future is like but that thought already put me off reading the novel.
MORE MORE MORE MORE!MORE MMORE MORE MORE MORE!MORE MORE MORE MORE!MORE MORE MORE MORE!MORE MORE MORE MORE!MORE MORE MORE MORE!MORE MORE MORE MORE!ORE MORE MORE!
goooooooooddddedeee πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Me gusta el libro vamos no te desanimes tu puedes π₯°πβΊοΈπππ€€ππππβΊοΈππππππππ€£πππππ ππ₯ΉβΊοΈπππππβΊοΈππππππππππ₯°πππ€«πΆβπ«οΈπ₯Ίπππ ππ₯°ππ₯ΉπππππβΊοΈππππππ π
Reveal Spoiler NEVER GIVE UP BROTHER YOU ARE FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really got into the story, it's original for once that we don't have an MC OP but rather an intelligent one. and who cares about the development of the whole village. I hope the story will continue for a long time
β β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β β β β β β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β β β β β β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β β β β β β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β β β β β β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β β β β β β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β β β β β β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β β β β β β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β β β β β β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β β β β β β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β β β β β β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β β β β β β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β β β β β β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β β β β β β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β β β β β β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β β β β β β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β β β β β β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β β β β β β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β β β β β β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β ββ β β β β
Good good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good good good Good good good
keep update broπ½[img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]
Overall, this novel is good, but there are few things I need to point out: The gold fruit in this story is not the original fruit from One Piece. In this version, it can turn things into gold, while the OG fruit couldn't, only control existing gold. The grammar is okay (who cares anyway), but there are few translation errors. Since there are only 11 chapters right, it should be easy for the author to correct them. (or just ignore them) MC might or might not change the storyline. Personally, Iβm not putting much hope in him. π The MC is 6-7 years older than Tsunade, so we can expect him to participate in the First Great Ninja War and make a name for himselfβhopefully. (psst.. MC has system, so don't be a failure)