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STOPPED! LACK OF CREATIVITY. 08/08/21
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writing quality 3* not because it is not good but I have seen lots of writings, so.. overall it's okay, with tolerable grammatical errors. For story development, I would like to give 3* but I give 4* as it's still not enough chapter. for character design, 4*, white hair is too commonly used. although I'm bored to see white hair again, I'm still okay with it. for updating stability, idk.. so here is ur 4* for world background, 5* for being Naruto fanfic. :)
Reveal SpoilerI hope to improve! If you have any ideas for further development, please comment. I already have some ideas for the future, but if any are better than mine, I can change
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I like the story and hoping it doesn't get dropped.dhghjfewdchjtfcghryhjkgfcdfvjjfswsfcxssdgjkoppouytewqasfghkklmnbcxxgfhhhgffdhjjjgfgyfghkgf
Although this is not the best naruto Fan-Fic out there and not the best grammer, it is entertaining enough for me to keep reading Btw SHUNXHANABI #noharem
Reveal SpoilerAuthor JiangChen73
This is a candid review of everything I’ve seen about the work, but unfortunately the review may have some errors in the writing making it difficult to read, so if you’re going to read pay attention. The author is apparently someone 'beginner' so to speak, he does not leave the work too detailed or does most of the basic signs that almost all authors with at least some experience do, in a way is a negative point in the work. The work itself is quite 'incredible' so to say, is not the best about Naruto but is still interesting, you can spend time and enjoy reading. You need to be patient and remember that the author is not paid to write the work, so you can read it without getting really bothered and having fun with it. There is a lot of room for improvement(Increase the details, improve character development and many other things), but it is a readable work so if you see reviews with 'this work is garbage' or 'worst work of Naruto', it is just exaggeration. I’m not good enough to write a review, but I think it should be enough to make you go read and draw your own conclusions.