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In my opinion this novel is complet garbage, i mean what's the point of it? An overpowered mc,no real action, and plot, what is it?๐ณ
Had to revise my review. The story has zero point. The MC is completely irrelevant. the story does not develop. nothing actually happens in this story. id hate to be the parent of who ever wrote this pointless story. trash. garbage. author definitely has zero friends. probably the lowest rating for a review I've given. MC useless, he's never done anything. Plot useless, there isn't one. story development, useless, nothing has developed. world background useless. no world background fleshed out. id give zero stars if possible for those categories because they are completely missing from this story. its embarrassing. your parents are embarrassed. only decent thing is updating speed.
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The translation is fine, If people have a problem with it blame the original author he's from China. Now that ain't a bad thing... I've read many translated Chinese books such as Black bellied miss, The good for nothing 7th young lady and many more, So the point I'm trying to make is if you don't like Chinese humor nor can you understand Chinese slang then stop reading and not giving bad reviews. Now Stability of updates is 5 because it is updated every single day so far. Story development... This is golden list there isn't any story development so it gets five anyway. Character Design Yasuo is very mysterious and I know very little about him... He's like that shadowy figure that no one knows anything about so I guess that will be a five. World Background is already created by the creator of Naruto so that's 5. All in all it's a perfect five. So basically if you aren't used to chinese novels/fanfictions or not a Chinese book/fanfic enthusiest then just don't read it if you are just going to complain. Not everything has to be from America or other nations not from Asia. If you don't like this fafic then go and start and read, Good for Nothing Seventh Young lady and other chinese novels so you can get used to the slang and everything else.
While there is an entertaining aspect to this story there is literally no plot. everything that happens doesn't change canon. actually the story basically just plays in the background while people get rewards. possibly the dumbest premise in the world.
currently read ch 20 At first, I was quite interested in this story, especially from its synopsis where the author uses characters from a famous anime. But it was a deception because this is cing cong paradise. Wich The anime is mediocre; cultivation is the peak argument. The story is heavily imbued with Chinese cultivation item nonsense so if you're expecting a Naruto fanfic mixed with other anime, you'll be disappointed. it's just sinopsis scam Plus, most of the material isn't clear where it's sourced from. I hope the author adds a cultivation tag so I don't have to taste this poison beforehand.
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Listing things instead of showing them is the laziest thing I can ever see. I'm Superman, I'm Batman. I'm Spider-Man. Oh, am I supposed to show you my powers? no, you're supposed to believe me.
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What a bad idea for a story, although our cultures are different, I don't see how they can get the idea of โโdestroying all logic and established plot just for nothing. All the nonsense shown goes nowhere, there is no story.
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It's very great Naruto fanfiction!! I like it!!! ๐๐๐ It have a great plot/storyline and quite good translation/english.. It's like 'Golden List in One Piece'.. I love that fanfiction, so I like this story too.. I hope the story will different from the original Naruto story.. It will be interesting to see how different it will be ๐๐ Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great job ๐๐๐๐๐
The MC is the literally to most OP salty fish like person I've ever seen any author who had written a Naruto fanfic before by a long shot like we are only seeing a small percentage of the power that this MC Has and he already had the power to take over the narutoveruse without much effort yet he's still being low-key for some stupid reason when he probs already have the strength to defeat the entirety of the otsutsuki clan already unless the Mc is planning on traveling to other universes and is acquiring more power to survive there idk why he hasn't sloved them yet done so yet
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In my opinion this novel is complet garbage, i mean what's the point of it? An overpowered mc,no real action, and plot, what is it?๐ณ
Had to revise my review. The story has zero point. The MC is completely irrelevant. the story does not develop. nothing actually happens in this story. id hate to be the parent of who ever wrote this pointless story. trash. garbage. author definitely has zero friends. probably the lowest rating for a review I've given. MC useless, he's never done anything. Plot useless, there isn't one. story development, useless, nothing has developed. world background useless. no world background fleshed out. id give zero stars if possible for those categories because they are completely missing from this story. its embarrassing. your parents are embarrassed. only decent thing is updating speed.
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The translation is fine, If people have a problem with it blame the original author he's from China. Now that ain't a bad thing... I've read many translated Chinese books such as Black bellied miss, The good for nothing 7th young lady and many more, So the point I'm trying to make is if you don't like Chinese humor nor can you understand Chinese slang then stop reading and not giving bad reviews. Now Stability of updates is 5 because it is updated every single day so far. Story development... This is golden list there isn't any story development so it gets five anyway. Character Design Yasuo is very mysterious and I know very little about him... He's like that shadowy figure that no one knows anything about so I guess that will be a five. World Background is already created by the creator of Naruto so that's 5. All in all it's a perfect five. So basically if you aren't used to chinese novels/fanfictions or not a Chinese book/fanfic enthusiest then just don't read it if you are just going to complain. Not everything has to be from America or other nations not from Asia. If you don't like this fafic then go and start and read, Good for Nothing Seventh Young lady and other chinese novels so you can get used to the slang and everything else.
While there is an entertaining aspect to this story there is literally no plot. everything that happens doesn't change canon. actually the story basically just plays in the background while people get rewards. possibly the dumbest premise in the world.
currently read ch 20 At first, I was quite interested in this story, especially from its synopsis where the author uses characters from a famous anime. But it was a deception because this is cing cong paradise. Wich The anime is mediocre; cultivation is the peak argument. The story is heavily imbued with Chinese cultivation item nonsense so if you're expecting a Naruto fanfic mixed with other anime, you'll be disappointed. it's just sinopsis scam Plus, most of the material isn't clear where it's sourced from. I hope the author adds a cultivation tag so I don't have to taste this poison beforehand.
googoo gaga.................................................................................................................................................
Listing things instead of showing them is the laziest thing I can ever see. I'm Superman, I'm Batman. I'm Spider-Man. Oh, am I supposed to show you my powers? no, you're supposed to believe me.
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Reveal Spoiler What a bad idea for a story, although our cultures are different, I don't see how they can get the idea of โโdestroying all logic and established plot just for nothing. All the nonsense shown goes nowhere, there is no story.
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It's very great Naruto fanfiction!! I like it!!! ๐๐๐ It have a great plot/storyline and quite good translation/english.. It's like 'Golden List in One Piece'.. I love that fanfiction, so I like this story too.. I hope the story will different from the original Naruto story.. It will be interesting to see how different it will be ๐๐ Love your story author sama.. Keep up the great job ๐๐๐๐๐
The MC is the literally to most OP salty fish like person I've ever seen any author who had written a Naruto fanfic before by a long shot like we are only seeing a small percentage of the power that this MC Has and he already had the power to take over the narutoveruse without much effort yet he's still being low-key for some stupid reason when he probs already have the strength to defeat the entirety of the otsutsuki clan already unless the Mc is planning on traveling to other universes and is acquiring more power to survive there idk why he hasn't sloved them yet done so yet
Does anyone like this fanfic and admire it?........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!?!!!!!!!!????ยฟ!!!!!!!!!!!!