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16.66% Naruto- Amaterasu / Chapter 5: The Caged Bird

Chapter 5: The Caged Bird

Hyuga Hiashi was a man of a build of a swimming athlete and while he is the older one of the two he looked young.

"Hiashi" HIzashi said as both had the staredown of their life.

"Kuroko and you, come to the 2 floors of the house in the right room to the stairs, it's time for the seal of the clan".

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seriously dude, what with the nineties kinda talking. anyway as me and my dad follow Hiashi and come to the said room, I see a couple of old dudes and that's kinda it.

I go and sit on the most open futon.

I seriously have no idea why all of a sudden the elders were staring at me and my dad looking at me with a smirk on his face. What's with all these looks huh, not like I was supposed to bow to them or anything...

well shit, I kinda had to, or on second thought I could care less about the bowing, let them think whatever they want to.

"Haven't you taught manners to this kid Hizashi," one of the elders in a red kimono said.

"he is but a child lord Ushayama, please forgive him"

"hmmph, whatever, as I did ever get angry at the remark of a slave'"

Did this just guy just call me a slave, how dare he a mere elder call ME a slave, so I did the best thing anybody would do in this situation, one word, "Amaterasu" and the elder died. Hiashi had the look of panic on his face and my dad just looked truly confused.

.......

or so I thought while I stared at the futon, after all, I can't exactly kill an elder of the Hyuga clan....yet.

.......

"lie down Kuroko," said Hiashi and then the caged bird seal ceremony started.

Hiashi took a brush and painted on my forehead and it kind of tickled, it took around five seconds and then there was a small itching sensation and that was it, of course, it wasn't activated yet.

then me and my dad just kinda went home, my dad looked like somebody killed his favourite puppy or something and well, to be honest, and I might have said this too many times but I could care less about this caged bird, as the moment I went out of the range of the byakugan users of the Hyuga clan, I Amaterasu'd my brain and well the fuinjutsu seals which had engraved themself on the nerves of my brain just vanished....right now I only got green paint on my forehead, and to be honest, the design ain't all that bad. ( now I know this sounds too easy but hey, it is not like everything is supposed to be tough, Amaterasu is just a big cheat)

my next goal- becoming stronger.

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(1-year time skip) MC age- 6

Another year has passed and I have really started to enjoy this world more, I have eaten different foods here, tried different clothes so I could check which one suits me the best.

My dad has gotten over the fact that I had a seal engraved too and while he is sad, He has me so c'mon, he couldn't exactly be sad forever.

he is still kinda guilty about it even though it's not his fault but sigh what can I do about that.

my training though had gotten up by a notch, heck notch is an understatement to be honest.

I had very good talent in the taijutsu section, now, the keyword is 'good', not prodigious, I didn't have talent in it like Neji but hey, something is better than nothing, I have learned the sixteen trigrams eight palms of the gentle fist.

the thing about gentle fist is, it's not just the special attacks that make the gentle fist, those attacks just make gentle fist more potent, what makes the gentle fist so good is its principle of redirecting opponents' move and closing their chakra nodes, a normal taijutsu user can never win against gentle fist as the attacks are redirected before they could reach the opponent.

I also noticed my body is way stronger than people my age and so did Hizashi, I mean not by a big range, my strength could only be said to be around a person of age 7 or something, but what the unique thing was, one night of sleep was enough to take care of my fatigue and my stamina was way above what people could imagine.

my chakra had also grown during this time, and I have learned tree walking and water walking. ( Now I know his talents sounds too outrageous, so just so you know, he has an adult's mind so comprehending taijutsu moves is easier and the logia body helps with the stamina and strength, plus learning water walking took a lot of time).

my shuriken jutsu also improved. I can now hit 10 shurikens with both hands at once but there is not a 100 per cent hit rate yet...but not anything i can't improve.

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<author- I know the chapter sounds short, but next chap- NINJA ACADEMY>

also should i decrease the pacing or is this fine?????


next chapter

Chapter 6: The Selections

<author- I just thought the last chap was a little small so a second chap for you all>

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I am standing right now in front of the ninja academy and the field around it is HUGE. While I am one of the children of the clans so being in the academy is sure but they still have to do the placing and for that, we are gonna have a little test today, the thing is, this will happen only between clan members.

the ninja academy is actually a three-story building of peach colour and what surrounds it is a big field which is divided into three sections, with three different running grounds, shuriken and kunai training practice and other places for practising.

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" Kuroko, I have trained you for two years and now its time for you to show your progress so make your father proud, will you ?" while Hizashi said this, he himself knows how strong am I, so it isn't all that big of a problem to him.

"of course father, I am kind of looking forward to this,"

actually, I was really kind of looking forward to this, I haven't made any friends this whole year and the one previous to that, and the only people I know properly are the housemaids which are NOT so much of friends.

...................

My father has kinda left me and is standing in the parent's sections and in front of me is a BIG line of children of different shapes and sizes whose chakra is about to be checked.

"Hello, my name is Shizumaka Inuzuka,are you excited about this, I am telling you I am gonna ace the said exam"

his brown eyes bore into me and he looked way too excited, I mean way too much, his height was somewhere around mine only and his brown spiky hair looked like he used the gel on them or something, seriously, how the heck do people even have spiky here.

though it didn't look bad in any way.

"of course, I am excited but nonetheless, let me introduce myself my name is Kuroko Hyuga," I say with a neutral face.

"so, did you know my dad said, that there will be some taijutsu test here and I already prepared for that hehe"

"oye Inuzuka, don't tell others what will be happening here, it's our way to ace this exam and didn't you just meet him,"

Another voice said as I looked to find a girl around the same age as ours with looks matching the Inuzuka kid. Just hair a little longer and some changes on the face and they might look almost the same.

"hehe, sorry Shizu, but looks like I made a friend before the academy ever started"

oh, so this girl's name is Shizu, huh, and what is with the angry look on her face, she just looks adorable, I mean c'mon, these girls would be around the age of my daughter if I ever had any in the first place, nonetheless, its the emotions what matter.

and so we all started having a conversation about, whether chakra is even important or not, well I was just mostly spectating and bobbing my head a few times but hey, I still made friends alright, even if it's with people 1/5 my actual age...

and so I reached the checking booth where different people dressed in ninja attire and headbands on their forehead were standing.

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"Kuroko Hyuga" I came forward to the bulky six feet man and he put his hand on my stomach for checking my chakra quantity without any facial expressions, he wrote the marks and sent me forwards.

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The next training ground was made in a form of a track, a big marathon track to be exact.

groups of ten children were made and I was in the third group while the Inuzuka twins were in the fourth.

I looked around me to find children of Uchiha's, Akimitchi and other clans and no I could not find Itachi yet, sigh, when will I get my protagonist aura, the heck do I even have one at all?

the race was just a one-lap place as time was of matter and what they were checking is not stamina but the explosive speed and athletism of the child, of course, the Kurama clan and Yamanaka clan had special passes.

As I took the sprinting stance of mine which was just putting my right leg a little behind, and as the whistle rung I quickly accelerated, I lowered my centre of gravity and completed the one lap in around 5.5 seconds, a record which anybody hasn't made yet, of course, a certain Uchiha has yet to come but I don't know his level yet.

as I went to the third round, there were a lot of people here.

And as my chance came, I took around 10 kunai's and throw them one by one and all of them hit the target.

my total score was 28.5/30, I dont know where they took the 1.5 but they can't exactly give a full, I know I wasn't something so great that it could shock all the people here. I still came first though.

And by the time I was getting out of there, I saw the second score, 27.5, name- Itachi Uchiha.

and I did the only thing I could when I saw that,

I smirked.

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word count- 909


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