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The world is a pretty big place. But for Jumpers, people who can go to other worlds and planes of existence it's a small spick of sand to what they see. And a city filled with talking potted plants, whales swimming in the sky, and gangs all across the city who are all Jumpers. Shit, this is as normal as it gets. After all when the unordinary is ordinary, what excitement to be had. Welcome to Fini Hajimar.
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I can tell this novel is going to be so good! So far there’s lots of action and its the kinda gritty I can get into. these characters feel real too. I can’t wait for more!
Apart from those grammatical errors Such a compelling story!! So interested to know what will happen next. From the synopsis, I’m very intrigued. Well done author keep ongoing...
Honestly,it could be great if you fix and improve your grammar and spellings. It could be more interesting and good. Keep it up and have a good day.
This one is interesting. I hope the plot progress will maintain the drive since its thrilling to read some criminals doing stuffs. Keep ot up author and good luck.
The story is good but a little bit complicated. I love All the characters but the one I love the most is SeerI. I wonder what type of power he has. And hopefully we see his powers soon an the novel.
It’s really good and descriptive so far. However John seems like “Yeah I have super powers. Cool. I can also clone myself for some reason. Cool. I’m in an Isekai. Cool. This is totally normal.”
I liked how into detail you went in this story, I hope you expand more on the universe in the future. I think somethings like different names for the clones would be good, but other than that I can’t wait for chapter 2! :)
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The flow of the story is somewhat constant. The characters are alright but need a little work. The background and how he leads to events are good.
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The World background was really complex and alot of things weren't answered and the main character seems really non-shalont about the entire situation as a whole and some characters seem unnecessary to the story and John just seems to get everything straight off the bat, leaving no possible character development in abilities and I'm pretty sure John Doe is a game of thrones character (sorry this might sound aggressive)
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