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Tahir got my heart 💖 I love love this book author please keep updating everyday 🙂
This is the author here!. I'm rating myself a 5 star and using this medium to clear some question or small talks going round. Please this book is not a fanfic of My vampire system. i did get some inspiration from it. My MC isn't based on Quinn. my MC is based more on Zoro of once piece. the multiple personalities is based on moon knight. the system is a combination of lot of system book i have read including MVS. My MC isn't just a vampire by the way, also most of this book inspiration comes from animes i have watched. please bear with me in the errors as English isn't my first language, if you notice any error or got any idea, please let me know and I'll make sure to repeat it in my next chapter. again. you might see some similarities in this book and some system books but that was bound to happen from time. this is a system book and the host is a vampire. i hope we can build one big family over here. The author TMT. I'll also appreciate if you drop a power stone so that i can stand up to the power rankings. Arigato 💚
I'm big fan of system books and this one is great read I mean Shawn and Bruce killer names.
This book is interesting. got me hooked on the first chapter in fact the book reminded me of a book i read once. there's some similarities between them. anyway keep it up author cant't wait to see how Tahir grows.
The first chapter is fire and so where the consecutive chapters. I hope to see where this books goes because I love itttttt and I'm hooked already. 💓
Nice story. I really love the world building and your writing style is explanatory and unique. It got me hooked from the very start and I am very interested to see how this turns out. Please keep updating this book. I love your work!
I'm not really into system books but this one got me hooked from the first chapter. kudos author👍, Keep it up
Wonderful! Nice work... The writing quality is superb. I'll come back for another review after reading five chapters
altogether a good read. Started out like MVS but took a different turn along the way. The author should try giving better details of the MC. Good work! I'd love to see more updates
Read the first chapter and i got hooked untill the third. However, had to stop there to write. Anyways, The world background, character development, as well as the story development is all good. Just the grammatical and typographical errors. Anyways, nice story keep it up author. I would really love it, if Tahir does gruesome revenge for his parents, they deserve it.
it was really a great read especially from the first chapter. keep up the good work author 💕❤️
Best...! I don't know what to say just this is epic... not much chapters and it's almost like typical genres like most online novels but hey, it's among the trending types of genre, let's just see if author has plot twist that might blow our mind
A really great read with some minor grammar errors but still okay, the paragraphs are not lined well but except that, the book is great. Inspiration came from: My Vampire System Well, i also wrote a book like that; Blood Monarch System.
I like the adventure of the characters, keep up the good work Author. I like this kind of genre, this is very entertaining and captivating. I'm looking forward for more chapters, keep writing. Kudos to you Author for making this masterpiece 🔥
Been liking this story so far. Well defined world background, story development and pacing is great, the characters are all well portrayed so far as well. I should point out that there are a few grammatical errors though. Overall, nice story. gladly following Tahir's story and sticking around to see where this goes.
Tahir got my heart 💖 I love love this book author please keep updating everyday 🙂
This is the author here!. I'm rating myself a 5 star and using this medium to clear some question or small talks going round. Please this book is not a fanfic of My vampire system. i did get some inspiration from it. My MC isn't based on Quinn. my MC is based more on Zoro of once piece. the multiple personalities is based on moon knight. the system is a combination of lot of system book i have read including MVS. My MC isn't just a vampire by the way, also most of this book inspiration comes from animes i have watched. please bear with me in the errors as English isn't my first language, if you notice any error or got any idea, please let me know and I'll make sure to repeat it in my next chapter. again. you might see some similarities in this book and some system books but that was bound to happen from time. this is a system book and the host is a vampire. i hope we can build one big family over here. The author TMT. I'll also appreciate if you drop a power stone so that i can stand up to the power rankings. Arigato 💚
I'm big fan of system books and this one is great read I mean Shawn and Bruce killer names.
This book is interesting. got me hooked on the first chapter in fact the book reminded me of a book i read once. there's some similarities between them. anyway keep it up author cant't wait to see how Tahir grows.
The first chapter is fire and so where the consecutive chapters. I hope to see where this books goes because I love itttttt and I'm hooked already. 💓
Nice story. I really love the world building and your writing style is explanatory and unique. It got me hooked from the very start and I am very interested to see how this turns out. Please keep updating this book. I love your work!
I'm not really into system books but this one got me hooked from the first chapter. kudos author👍, Keep it up
Wonderful! Nice work... The writing quality is superb. I'll come back for another review after reading five chapters
altogether a good read. Started out like MVS but took a different turn along the way. The author should try giving better details of the MC. Good work! I'd love to see more updates
Read the first chapter and i got hooked untill the third. However, had to stop there to write. Anyways, The world background, character development, as well as the story development is all good. Just the grammatical and typographical errors. Anyways, nice story keep it up author. I would really love it, if Tahir does gruesome revenge for his parents, they deserve it.
it was really a great read especially from the first chapter. keep up the good work author 💕❤️
Best...! I don't know what to say just this is epic... not much chapters and it's almost like typical genres like most online novels but hey, it's among the trending types of genre, let's just see if author has plot twist that might blow our mind
A really great read with some minor grammar errors but still okay, the paragraphs are not lined well but except that, the book is great. Inspiration came from: My Vampire System Well, i also wrote a book like that; Blood Monarch System.
I like the adventure of the characters, keep up the good work Author. I like this kind of genre, this is very entertaining and captivating. I'm looking forward for more chapters, keep writing. Kudos to you Author for making this masterpiece 🔥
Been liking this story so far. Well defined world background, story development and pacing is great, the characters are all well portrayed so far as well. I should point out that there are a few grammatical errors though. Overall, nice story. gladly following Tahir's story and sticking around to see where this goes.