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The grammar is not just bad but very bad. It makes reading the story unbearable. Also, there is too much repeatation of the same thing again and again while the system and leveling up makes no sense. Overall good effort but not worth time and money.
I only read around 29 chapters. The story is great so far, but the translation is severely lacking. I personally stopped reading it because of the bad translation, but I will look for it again in the future, maybe this problem will be fixed.
This book has an interesting plot setting with decent potential. However what detracts from the story is the poor grammar, diction and character development. It feels like the story was written by a school kid.
grammar flew and jumped off the cliff. hard to read. read hard ugabuga ugabuga book? grammar ded
grammar is rather lacking don't know if their first language is English or not at least it doesn't feel like it. story is a bit to slow for me even though the author stated it would be slow paced. to me the progress of his students is to slow and the leveling just doesn't make sense, there is never a point where there exp isn't at 0 it feels like when they advance through each level so it really doesn't make me feel like they're progressing chapter to chapter. also the students have S-S+ potential yet it's taken like 6+months just to get to beginner mortal Grade. isn't S+ supposed to be some super genius? I mean Sam had D rank potential yet got to elite tier by the time he was 25 while his students with S+ are barely on pace with that it literally makes no sense
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At first I consider this novel rather woeful. The author has explained his language issues yet I cannot condone the fact that he didn’t attempt to utilise a proofreader for this novel to help correct grammar and the many spelling issues. I find that rather in poor taste and lazy. I am sure there could have been a few volunteers who could assisted in some way to let readers have a smooth experience. Ok got that off my chest. The novel itself is interesting and I must admit captivating. The genre introduced here is a favourite of mine and I do enjoy how it is coming across. I admit I have to interpret things on the fly as the delivery is painful, however I manage to struggle through satisfactorily to enjoy what I have read. All in all it is a decent novel, just really really fix the writing (isn’t there programs out there that can assist, think Grammarly or the like is out there) and I suggest editing the earlier chapters. People haven’t got the patience to try and interpret what is being written if it isn’t clear enough.
I love this kind of novel. Hope you didn't drop this novel. Just don't make Sam's students too op. That will make this less interesting. Also, I would like to see Sam taking a student with low potential or average potential.
I like this novel. Well, author keep it up. You can use Grammarly to improve your grammer. I like how he can increase the status of his students. Well, hope you don't make his students to op.
if english is not this authors first language then I would hope the readers and critics will have a bit of understanding and try to give positive feedback instead of the trolling that I usually come across because that does more harm than necessary and ultimately prevents an author from finishing the story hampering their growth just to feed some egos that think they are better than others so PLEASE BE RESPECTFUL AND UNDERSTANDING 😁 thank you
Story is really interesting and entertaining, I had a great time reading, however I hope that author can fix the grammar mistakes because it ruins the immersion. It has great potential so keep up the good work!
Just three words "Oh my God!!" *I'm speechless* in a good way. Just in case you're a lover of an erotic, succubus themed story, then 'My perfect demon' is definitely a book you should read. Trust me, you'll love it.
Hey guys, I hope you will like this novel. English isn't my first language. But I am trying to improve myself in English. Also, if you have suggestions, do tell me about it.
The grammar is not just bad but very bad. It makes reading the story unbearable. Also, there is too much repeatation of the same thing again and again while the system and leveling up makes no sense. Overall good effort but not worth time and money.
I only read around 29 chapters. The story is great so far, but the translation is severely lacking. I personally stopped reading it because of the bad translation, but I will look for it again in the future, maybe this problem will be fixed.
This book has an interesting plot setting with decent potential. However what detracts from the story is the poor grammar, diction and character development. It feels like the story was written by a school kid.
grammar flew and jumped off the cliff. hard to read. read hard ugabuga ugabuga book? grammar ded
grammar is rather lacking don't know if their first language is English or not at least it doesn't feel like it. story is a bit to slow for me even though the author stated it would be slow paced. to me the progress of his students is to slow and the leveling just doesn't make sense, there is never a point where there exp isn't at 0 it feels like when they advance through each level so it really doesn't make me feel like they're progressing chapter to chapter. also the students have S-S+ potential yet it's taken like 6+months just to get to beginner mortal Grade. isn't S+ supposed to be some super genius? I mean Sam had D rank potential yet got to elite tier by the time he was 25 while his students with S+ are barely on pace with that it literally makes no sense
Reveal Spoiler At first I consider this novel rather woeful. The author has explained his language issues yet I cannot condone the fact that he didn’t attempt to utilise a proofreader for this novel to help correct grammar and the many spelling issues. I find that rather in poor taste and lazy. I am sure there could have been a few volunteers who could assisted in some way to let readers have a smooth experience. Ok got that off my chest. The novel itself is interesting and I must admit captivating. The genre introduced here is a favourite of mine and I do enjoy how it is coming across. I admit I have to interpret things on the fly as the delivery is painful, however I manage to struggle through satisfactorily to enjoy what I have read. All in all it is a decent novel, just really really fix the writing (isn’t there programs out there that can assist, think Grammarly or the like is out there) and I suggest editing the earlier chapters. People haven’t got the patience to try and interpret what is being written if it isn’t clear enough.
I love this kind of novel. Hope you didn't drop this novel. Just don't make Sam's students too op. That will make this less interesting. Also, I would like to see Sam taking a student with low potential or average potential.
I like this novel. Well, author keep it up. You can use Grammarly to improve your grammer. I like how he can increase the status of his students. Well, hope you don't make his students to op.
if english is not this authors first language then I would hope the readers and critics will have a bit of understanding and try to give positive feedback instead of the trolling that I usually come across because that does more harm than necessary and ultimately prevents an author from finishing the story hampering their growth just to feed some egos that think they are better than others so PLEASE BE RESPECTFUL AND UNDERSTANDING 😁 thank you
Story is really interesting and entertaining, I had a great time reading, however I hope that author can fix the grammar mistakes because it ruins the immersion. It has great potential so keep up the good work!
Just three words "Oh my God!!" *I'm speechless* in a good way. Just in case you're a lover of an erotic, succubus themed story, then 'My perfect demon' is definitely a book you should read. Trust me, you'll love it.
Hey guys, I hope you will like this novel. English isn't my first language. But I am trying to improve myself in English. Also, if you have suggestions, do tell me about it.