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In a world where rank, blood-ties and religion are intertwined; Silika Everest lived an idyllic life as the third child of the Marquess of Oblon, spending her time causing trouble for the estate servants and playing with her siblings to her heart's content.
Until a fateful day when a game of hide and seek turned into tragedy. When she woke up, her life had turned on its head, everything she had now slipping away from her.
That day her quiet life began— an unforgiving life where all odds are stacked against her.
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Write a reviewWell. I wrote my first review and Webnovel decided not to take it. Rude website. Anywho. Let me start, or restart, by saying that I am head over heels for this story. The way you write allows your reader to paint the portrait with guidelines and I greatly enjoy that. You pull the reader in with the sweet tender beginning and then sweep them for a wild and emotional ride. As a mother, I can say with certainty that I would never allow my child to go through such horrors; I literally cried for the MC and grew enraged at every member of her family. Goldie excluding of course. I felt every wound and wanted nothing more than to comfort that sweet child. If I could, I would put myself into the story just so I could give her all the love and care she deserves. As well, you bring a light to disabilities that I don't think many people understand, and for that I bow to you. For critiques, I can only say that I recommend to take each chapter individually and make adjusts where needed on repeat of words, run on sentences, grammar and punctuation. Most of the time I can't read a story when that is bad so I want to assure you there isn't that much here because I devoured all of these chapters. Her relationship with Jade is adorable by the way. As a sage heckin wisdoms, I guess, I can say that the more you write in a public setting the more you will become accustom to doing those edits after you write each chapter. I too get sucked up in the flow of my writing and have to remember to go back and edit; which does get hard because you read it so much. Please take a moment to congratulate yourself on a story well written. I am looking forward to more.
Reveal SpoilerIinteresting characters , nice flow of story , interesting title thou needs a few changes to grab readers' attention , need few fixes on grammar and punctuation .
Lemme just say, my heartstrings have only felt such pain with three books. This book has become number four. I love this book.💖 The writtiing style is engrossing. The characters are very well developed. You learn to love and hate them. The setting is also very well thought out. The work is wonderful. Good job author, please continue your amazing work.😄
Beautifully written story! The main character, a sweet little girl, Silika, is a very precisely designed personality. I hope she will overcome the trauma she survived... The plot is intriguing! Well done! Good luck with the contest!
Reveal Spoilersuch a good story, the plot is unique and interesting. your writing is really good, you described the story very well , when it would be Silika's POV the chapters were mainly about her thought because of her special situation (maybe cuz i am not used to see chapters without dialogue) but the switching to another POV made the story have more movement. the prologue was quite long, maybe you just need to cut some part and put the interesting one (just a suggestion) and if you would insert the person POV at the beginning of the chapters it will be more comprehensive, but till now it has Just 2 pov beside Silika so maybe in the future if it will include more pov. it was really a nice story, all the best in your writing.
Great stuff! The author writes a meaningful and emotional story that focuses on the characters. The novel is a slow-burner, but once you get invested in the story, all the development pays off. The world-building is also quite commendable, especially how the author crafts the social system and the deities. Theres just something about this story that hits deep, and I can tell that the author has put their heart and soul into writing this fantastical yet grounded world. I wish that more people could read this novel!
The story has a amazing hook and original characters. It feels like I’m actually there with them and not reading a novel. Very good dialogue as well
I really enjoyed the fact that it was different from what I have read on webnovel. Also loved the way you describe how the character was feeling and how you made me feel sad in some of these chapters because of the treatment. In my opinion, it's the beginning of a really good story. Wishing you all the best
Great story. I love the way you set your characters up. It really is interesting to see each of their characteristics. Waiting for big chapters and updates...
Nice! This story is just amazing... There's literally never a dull moment the characters are lovable too. The pacing is also quiet decent...
This story have some good quality ideas and I like the household family complex within the house and the way each character is setup from the start. keep going.
Omg i just love Silika. The way when she acts all cute my heart just skips a beat. It breaks my heart when I see what she goes through with her family, but I know she will get through it. Kudos to the author for pulling the story in such a way. I can bet my all saying that it will reach great heights. Keep going! All the best!
Nice start with a great time within the household. Silika is cute and also likable with her personality. You can feel her when she is in trouble Good job and keep it up!
Yay! First one to review this wonderful story!😁 What an exciting beginning! My heart was breaking for poor Silica every time her family treated her like that!🥺 Author, keep up the good work, wanna know more about what happens to Silica next! Something tells me that this story would be full of emotions! I hope that Silica doesn't change her youthful and playful nature![img=recommend]
Ayy, already wrote a review on rr a month or two again, and whoa found this novel here too! Real good, since it brought me to tears and not many novels can; and I don't even like drama normally. I wish the author would return from prolonged hiatus though.
Pain, love, anger, hatred, so many emotions are flowing in this work. The more i read the more i feel. This work is totally different then all the works i have ever read. Full of emotions and charms. The way it is written and describe is just too amazing. The story, the plot, the creativity. Everything is just too mind blowing. Truly fell in love with this work. And will recommend for everyone to read this atleast once.
I've seen this novel from before! I knew this novel is going to bring me a rollecoaster of emotions! I commented all of the things that I think needs edits and such! Definitely worth the read, and will continue reading from where I left from the story! [img=recommend]
By goodness, I wanted to kill her family myself! With the exception of Dalton of course, poor kid. This story is so interesting! It kept me so inthralled that I didn't even realise that my name was being yelled. Your story is most definitely going places! I actually won't be surprised if this became a manga. This also kind of reminds me of one of the reasons why I'm an atheist. I know that religion has come a long way since the middle ages, but the history is still freaking repulsive. I also just hate how people go along with it like sheep to a flock. Anyways, this story was amazing!! You had a few errors when it came to grammar, but all in all, it was fine. Keep up the good work, dear author!!!
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Thank you for readin My quiet life! Please leave a review and let me know what you think of the story! I would love to know what you liked and where I could improve :)