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Bro nine cloud make another soul land 1 fanfic since your other fanfic is becoming less n less attractive maybe you make a fanfic where mc reincarnated as tang san and gained a system causing many other martial soul well dont put wincest in that but make bibi dong a harem member please i hv read many novel but all of em are all about getting ass of tang san not a single have my respect but your work are top teir so please make one please and also if you can reply me if you would make or not😊
One of the few authors that has stayed the same while also being very good at keeping plot together. Theirs no dumb shit and if theirs a nerf it goes away quick while plot is intense it's rewarding unlike new novels where mc just faces constant setbacks and nerfs while author slapping the OP protag tag on it. Yeah this novel did OP protag good no wonder I never shit talked this author.
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De mis favoritas vale realmente la pena me gusto de principio a fin Lo recomiendo mucho :) ........................................................................................ Lo lei hasta el 380 espero más capítulos muy recomendado
Thank you for the story i enjoy it, It is just me but i think the yandere are not yandere enough
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well why there are no negative reviews...well whatever. work is great , op MC and harem well its all go I guess.but why he is giving his mother so much attention I don't hate but for some reason I can't connect with her other harem members are more likeable to me I mean she is doing nothing but still she got all the benefits and became most powerful , management is done by someone else , training is done by someone else , work where required power is done by MC ,why is she there if she is why she got best of all things I mean just act spoiled all day and even her love is made up of illusion she was yandere for his father but after mind wash by illusion she got hota for MC. Her love is real or not i don't even know. why did she become the main wife. also the character of MC is confusing the author shows MC love his harem so much but if he gets serious on side he starts complicating things like in one chapter when matter of wife comes he indesively dodge the topic why did he do that I mean he sleep with them he love them but why he can't accept them what is he a Playboy .....all other things are great I guess...nothing to complain.
good, but the author made Dalu's douluo strength level, even though I think the douluo strength level is low
Интересный фанфик с полный чудесный системы удач, жду драка бога тана сана.)))))))))))))))))))))))))))) ))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
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Hey author, was wondering if I could borrow that SYSTEM idea of yours? Really great btw:) Hoping to use it in my fic. Just letting you know:))
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it's a great fanfic, nice to pass time,,,,,,,,, but after returning from dxd it felt strangely boring like his interaction with those shrek kids, cause he is a very powerful and i dislike the tag hiding your true strength. Also miss the upgrading ticket.
This novel is awesome, but the only problem is, the woman, because this author seems to have a certain issue. Pain is not a sensation one can derive pleasure from, particularly when it pertains to women, as they typically do not derive any enjoyment from it. The fact that all the female characters in his novel exhibit a masochistic disposition is rather illogical. It would be more coherent if they were all inclined towards sadism rather than masochism.
I think you should change the cover of the novel yelan is good but I already have her as a character in game ,those who know her will lose their interest after seeing that photo because everyone wants something new bro cheer up and change it to something that looks beautiful and much sexier
Bikin Ngakak namanya wkwk ..........................................,.......................................................................................
I expected it to be a fierce action and light harem novel until chapter 69 and some "Broken Mind" chapters trully shocked me☠️ Although I don really have a problem, please reduce the hardcore😅
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bro i want you to post more this such a interesting story hope u continue been following this since mid 2022............................................................
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The H as well as a new born babies are you to go to church and fresh, e text you raised me know if I can be all of our own levels and it was walking around the lord always be there in the wilderness of god and wind to the lord always been a while since I've seen you raise m manga goblin
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I gave all five other than Updating Stability. We all know why. Though it is not a problem. For those who want to read Duolou Dalu fan fic, this one is one of the best. by the way, author, this book image, is it Kafka?
Bro nine cloud make another soul land 1 fanfic since your other fanfic is becoming less n less attractive maybe you make a fanfic where mc reincarnated as tang san and gained a system causing many other martial soul well dont put wincest in that but make bibi dong a harem member please i hv read many novel but all of em are all about getting ass of tang san not a single have my respect but your work are top teir so please make one please and also if you can reply me if you would make or not😊
One of the few authors that has stayed the same while also being very good at keeping plot together. Theirs no dumb shit and if theirs a nerf it goes away quick while plot is intense it's rewarding unlike new novels where mc just faces constant setbacks and nerfs while author slapping the OP protag tag on it. Yeah this novel did OP protag good no wonder I never shit talked this author.
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De mis favoritas vale realmente la pena me gusto de principio a fin Lo recomiendo mucho :) ........................................................................................ Lo lei hasta el 380 espero más capítulos muy recomendado
Thank you for the story i enjoy it, It is just me but i think the yandere are not yandere enough
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well why there are no negative reviews...well whatever. work is great , op MC and harem well its all go I guess.but why he is giving his mother so much attention I don't hate but for some reason I can't connect with her other harem members are more likeable to me I mean she is doing nothing but still she got all the benefits and became most powerful , management is done by someone else , training is done by someone else , work where required power is done by MC ,why is she there if she is why she got best of all things I mean just act spoiled all day and even her love is made up of illusion she was yandere for his father but after mind wash by illusion she got hota for MC. Her love is real or not i don't even know. why did she become the main wife. also the character of MC is confusing the author shows MC love his harem so much but if he gets serious on side he starts complicating things like in one chapter when matter of wife comes he indesively dodge the topic why did he do that I mean he sleep with them he love them but why he can't accept them what is he a Playboy .....all other things are great I guess...nothing to complain.
good, but the author made Dalu's douluo strength level, even though I think the douluo strength level is low
Интересный фанфик с полный чудесный системы удач, жду драка бога тана сана.)))))))))))))))))))))))))))) ))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
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Hey author, was wondering if I could borrow that SYSTEM idea of yours? Really great btw:) Hoping to use it in my fic. Just letting you know:))
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Putra XD ajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja
like this.............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
it's a great fanfic, nice to pass time,,,,,,,,, but after returning from dxd it felt strangely boring like his interaction with those shrek kids, cause he is a very powerful and i dislike the tag hiding your true strength. Also miss the upgrading ticket.
This novel is awesome, but the only problem is, the woman, because this author seems to have a certain issue. Pain is not a sensation one can derive pleasure from, particularly when it pertains to women, as they typically do not derive any enjoyment from it. The fact that all the female characters in his novel exhibit a masochistic disposition is rather illogical. It would be more coherent if they were all inclined towards sadism rather than masochism.
I think you should change the cover of the novel yelan is good but I already have her as a character in game ,those who know her will lose their interest after seeing that photo because everyone wants something new bro cheer up and change it to something that looks beautiful and much sexier
Bikin Ngakak namanya wkwk ..........................................,.......................................................................................
I expected it to be a fierce action and light harem novel until chapter 69 and some "Broken Mind" chapters trully shocked me☠️ Although I don really have a problem, please reduce the hardcore😅
Reveal Spoiler bro i want you to post more this such a interesting story hope u continue been following this since mid 2022............................................................
Reveal Spoiler The H as well as a new born babies are you to go to church and fresh, e text you raised me know if I can be all of our own levels and it was walking around the lord always be there in the wilderness of god and wind to the lord always been a while since I've seen you raise m manga goblin
Bang cepat updatenya lagi seru bang update nya 2 bab bang yang panjang Ppppppppppp ppppppp Ppppppppppp ppppppp Ppppppppppp ppppppp Ppppppppppp ppppppp
I gave all five other than Updating Stability. We all know why. Though it is not a problem. For those who want to read Duolou Dalu fan fic, this one is one of the best. by the way, author, this book image, is it Kafka?