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Long Tian is your everyday average person who just wants to lead a normal & peaceful life. But things just don't tend to go our way in life, suddenly receiving a System that seems to be a shameless combination of all the systems from the various overrated System Novels that he hates, his peaceful life is now a pipe dream. Let us follow Long Tian in this refreshing journey and see what fate has in store for him.
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wow the clichรฉs in this are so well written that I don't know if it's satire. Anyways, Amazing novel
I have been looking for great novels like this one for a long time. It came to the point where I went to various apps and websites to find a novel that would satisfy me. And this novel just did! It is a nice story, with great plot, character setting and world background. It's like a gem hidden on different diamonds, what you just need is to look for it to see it clearly. And luckily, I found it. But I ask the author for more chapters please, if possible? It was so great that reading this only took me minutes to finish. I look forward for a lot more chapters. Thank you author and please don't drop it and continue to update chapters. Lovelots๐โฅ๏ธ๐
It's a good novel, It reminds me of most Chinese novels .................................................................GL..............................................
gooooood story I advise you to read this work, although its idea was repeated,it was really well written.[img=update][img=update][img=update]
Time goes fast reading this, in shorter words it's a cliche book with a sense of satisfaction that isn't from cringing from the 1000 face slapped characters in books like these.
I don't know what to say. Rating i gave has nothing to do with how i view this novel. I am just messing around but story is fun to read. .
Really well written. Keep up the great work. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
5 star for the novel not because of the grammar or other. the 5 star are for the enjoyment that I feel chapter after chapter and I like how the story is going and that's enough for me to give this novel a 5 star.
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Enjoyable read. Goes from disliking cliches to enjoying it. The MC liberally uses his system without any significant consequences (so far). Light hearted, and pleasant. I didn't notice the time pass as I read this. Much better than many other stories that I struggle and read just to curb my addiction. If this story was a food it would be convenient store chocolate pudding. Creamy, smooth and definitely not enough.
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Narcissistic Author Review. Well, I'm supporting my work. This novel will have simultaneous character developments of characters other than the MC. Nobody mentioned will be forgotten, they will have a role to play in the future. I like the JACK OF ALL TRADES type of MC, so the MC in this novel will Omnipotent, just like me the "Narcissist Immortal". Thank you for your love and support.๐๐ค๐๐