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Synopsis
A young man dies and is offered the chance to reincarnate with the powers of 3 characters.
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This is not my novel it's REAPER91.
The Original name of this novel is "Mi Vida en marvel". I'm just translating the novel.
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3.37
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His power was quite good. The proceedings are good. But I don't like catching girls like Pokémon. Usually I like harem but this one doesn't.
Not bad, but you need to find a good beta reader. The writing quality is pretty below average. Especially dialogues are badly done. Thank you for the translation .
good power concept, bad MTL and cringe dialouge, and catching pokemon, u should do better translation or not doing it at all 🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦
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The story is great but please change the name of the Mc. I literally chocked on my coffee when I saw the name....................................
rubbish story , rubbish translation . Pokemon hunting harem without any deep engagement. messy universe even though it's AU it is still messy, what op? he's training inside his "mind" how the f he get the battle experience ?
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I'll give it to ya, you did a good job with translation. The story is great too, and I want to read more. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
overall not bad but a few things stand out in a negative way. 1. The story need heavy editing or maybe a rewrite to structure it better. The POV chapters look and feel disjointed from the story or are basically 60% copy of the MC perspective. 2. The Romance is handeld pretty badly, so far he just collects girls everywhere and the MC seems to struggle with the kind of guy he is, sometimes he acts like a gentleman Pervert, sometimes like a guy who has no filter. The very raw English doesn't help to convey what the MC really means. 3. The MC has a very disjointed character profile, very vague Goals if any and sometimes tips over the line of being just plain stupid or nonsensical. So for all the Time and chapters the MC had to flesh out a charter build he still seams unfinished. 4. The plot and world seams to get more convoluted and while that is normaly not a big deal, the fact that the writing quality is so spotty makes it really hard to enjoy the story.
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Its pretty good just alot of cringe moments where im sitting their thinking what did i just read? [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=faceslap]
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To THE TRANSLATOR- 1. Writing Quality - It is average but can be best if it can used it proper grammer like we don't know somtimes how MC or Male/Female characters becomes SHE/HE(GENDERBENDER?🤮) and if there is a scene in future where MC or any character shouts his/her attacks please change it(Chunni?🤮)- *For you are Translator right- kindly make it better in quality as well as story than the original Novel. 2.Story development - Quite good going in a medium pace is best. 3. Character Design - I mean everything is going on well Especially on MC's Martial Arts, Shinobi Arts, Shinigami+Hollow side but Why has not HE(MC) learned Magic and Chi yet or is it not there in the original story? It would have been a feast to read that if the MC creating a new techniques like absorbtion+Copy skill(Absorbing criminals or harming people and copying only the people around like gaining all their abilities and memories) also creating technique like- with all he has learned+adding Magic,Cosmic energy,Chi and all other energies combine like a cultivation technique. *MC making earth resource infinite and saving nature(Eliminating pollution) , making the planet Larger+connecting all land masses together with infinity stones for future development taking preparation in advance for population control etc., 4. Updates Stability - Very Stable 5/5. Atleast you get one day rest. 5. World Background - Good but would have it better with good writing quality and little modification if the translator can! I know Translator can do it. For THE TRANSLATOR CAN make it better than the original Novel. Thanks- Reader.
Needs very, Very, heavy editing in regards to dialogue and point of view...............................................................................