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Its a excellent fanfic. Its kind of realsitic and i love the way mc handle things it also shows logical poltical things that happens i guess.Many probably like the mc views naruto but what he said is true wether i or you like it or not
fic should be called : That time i got reincarnated into sasukes body and became a training mainiac lul fic is still pretty good :)
Your story explors plot points from a rational but still realistic view point. It is not overly antagonistic towarts a singel group or person, many fanfics make that mistake, but insteat critical towards all parties. Your fanfic follows the basis prinsipals of benifits!!! There are no 5 chapters of mental breakdown just because blood has been spilled, no saviours complex, the 'old world' is not described as heaven (lets be honest our world is not al flowers and sunshine), the story is not built on the illusions that a smile or two could magically stop old timers from following there plan which they have been brooding for decades and tops for no harem :):):) It juist said a lot of things I nedded to hear when I was about te give up the fandom. You got my suport.
I just started reading the book so I don't know much about the updating stability but the book is amazing I can't wait fir Sasuke/Karin to take place and I can't wait for more chapters
Well nice story ____===___===___===___===___===___ ____===___===___===___===___===___ ____===___===___===___===___===___ ____===___===___===___===___===___
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Great job Author i think you put a very interesting concept and opinion on naruto. This book is very well writen and the character development is especial good. ps Author don’t let they hate get to you, you have made A enjoyable story
I say your fanfic is the best Sasuke fanfiction I've read I hope you keep going and I give stones I like your take on this 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎👍👍👍👍
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Good day. I am very interested in your fanfiction. In particular, I would like to translate your fanfiction into my own language and publish this translation on the local fanfiction site. Are you interested in something like this?
welcome back 😀😀😀😀😀😀 I have been waiting for you 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁welcome back 😀😀😀😀😀😀 I have been waiting for you 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
The story is good so far... If it had been me, I would've made Sasuke place a subtle EMS brainwash on orochimaru to goad hiruzen into admitted all his crimes against Naruto and Sasuke during the fight... Not knowing that the battle area was rigged with 'projection seals' that informed not just the whole village but also other guest and ninjas how low konoha had fallen... It will be the biggest blow to the whole of konoha.. even better, he admits it in front of his Edo tensei'd hokages
i really like this idea and hope you post more chapters the grammar is not as bad as you think and i think you are doing well and will keep updating in the future and dont listen to the hate and those who are not the author this is s good fan fic very interesting story hope you like it and have a nice day or night.
Hai penulis, aku salah satu penggemar tulisanmu! Aku hanya ingin mengatakan bahwa tidak perlu memperhatikan komentar yang tujuannya menjatuhkan. Akan lebih baik jika penulis mengabaikan komentar seperti ini. Semoga penulis melanjutkan ceritanya.
__________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ Waiting for next chapter im love this book __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________
Very good very good very good keep it up boy you'll achieve great things keep it up boy you'll achieve great things keep it up boy you'll achieve great things keep it up boy you'll achieve great things
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not sure how this story has a decent rating. must be from deleting reviews because getting past the first chapter is a struggle. I mean you are warned the grammar is bad but at this level it's truly horrendous.
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It's a great story but i think you should not increase sasuke's strength too early and too fast. It will not be that fun. otherwise the story is good and it fun reading it.
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I like the concept of the fanfic and you developed the story well although Sasuke is getting stronger too fast but i am having fun reading it. I hope the romance is good. You should improve your writing quality, a lot of grammar errors and misspelling. Good and enjoyable story overall.
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Its a excellent fanfic. Its kind of realsitic and i love the way mc handle things it also shows logical poltical things that happens i guess.Many probably like the mc views naruto but what he said is true wether i or you like it or not
fic should be called : That time i got reincarnated into sasukes body and became a training mainiac lul fic is still pretty good :)
Your story explors plot points from a rational but still realistic view point. It is not overly antagonistic towarts a singel group or person, many fanfics make that mistake, but insteat critical towards all parties. Your fanfic follows the basis prinsipals of benifits!!! There are no 5 chapters of mental breakdown just because blood has been spilled, no saviours complex, the 'old world' is not described as heaven (lets be honest our world is not al flowers and sunshine), the story is not built on the illusions that a smile or two could magically stop old timers from following there plan which they have been brooding for decades and tops for no harem :):):) It juist said a lot of things I nedded to hear when I was about te give up the fandom. You got my suport.
I just started reading the book so I don't know much about the updating stability but the book is amazing I can't wait fir Sasuke/Karin to take place and I can't wait for more chapters
Well nice story ____===___===___===___===___===___ ____===___===___===___===___===___ ____===___===___===___===___===___ ____===___===___===___===___===___
fun to read . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .
Great job Author i think you put a very interesting concept and opinion on naruto. This book is very well writen and the character development is especial good. ps Author don’t let they hate get to you, you have made A enjoyable story
I say your fanfic is the best Sasuke fanfiction I've read I hope you keep going and I give stones I like your take on this 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎👍👍👍👍
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Good day. I am very interested in your fanfiction. In particular, I would like to translate your fanfiction into my own language and publish this translation on the local fanfiction site. Are you interested in something like this?
welcome back 😀😀😀😀😀😀 I have been waiting for you 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁welcome back 😀😀😀😀😀😀 I have been waiting for you 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
The story is good so far... If it had been me, I would've made Sasuke place a subtle EMS brainwash on orochimaru to goad hiruzen into admitted all his crimes against Naruto and Sasuke during the fight... Not knowing that the battle area was rigged with 'projection seals' that informed not just the whole village but also other guest and ninjas how low konoha had fallen... It will be the biggest blow to the whole of konoha.. even better, he admits it in front of his Edo tensei'd hokages
i really like this idea and hope you post more chapters the grammar is not as bad as you think and i think you are doing well and will keep updating in the future and dont listen to the hate and those who are not the author this is s good fan fic very interesting story hope you like it and have a nice day or night.
Hai penulis, aku salah satu penggemar tulisanmu! Aku hanya ingin mengatakan bahwa tidak perlu memperhatikan komentar yang tujuannya menjatuhkan. Akan lebih baik jika penulis mengabaikan komentar seperti ini. Semoga penulis melanjutkan ceritanya.
__________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ Waiting for next chapter im love this book __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________
Very good very good very good keep it up boy you'll achieve great things keep it up boy you'll achieve great things keep it up boy you'll achieve great things keep it up boy you'll achieve great things
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not sure how this story has a decent rating. must be from deleting reviews because getting past the first chapter is a struggle. I mean you are warned the grammar is bad but at this level it's truly horrendous.
😍😍😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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It's a great story but i think you should not increase sasuke's strength too early and too fast. It will not be that fun. otherwise the story is good and it fun reading it.
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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I like the concept of the fanfic and you developed the story well although Sasuke is getting stronger too fast but i am having fun reading it. I hope the romance is good. You should improve your writing quality, a lot of grammar errors and misspelling. Good and enjoyable story overall.
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