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A story of two sisters Zera and Mavis, who are actually the children who were chosen by the two god dragons, the imperial white dragon, and the imperial black dragon as their descendants after their death.
The girls had no clue about the great powers they have and live don't even know the existence of each other.
when they were young they get separated because of the death of their parents.
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The story is quite interesting and does have quite interesting plots. It does have quite decent grammar and vocab but it still has scope to improve. In conclusion, despite the writing, I really love the story.
Hey readers, This story is about two sister's journey of facing and solving hardships together. For now, their main objective is to find the truth about their parents' death but will their objective change?... Will they forgive? or Will they Revenge?..
I found your story interesting and very engaging. I love the mystical and very original creative background. Overall amazing the creativity of it. Keep that going! I do recommend editing, I spotted some mistakes. I know as a reader, it would bug me to see those. I have learned to overlook them as well. I know many authors's on here don't edit as much. I've personally shared a thread on the forum for this. I've offered my help, and I will offer my help here as well. Overall good work, keep it up, love the characters, and the plot. Very mystical and I love the dragon background!