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Write a reviewThis is geared towards teenagers. and it's not good, and there are other things better... Kaguya's personality is weird and the writing belongs to the childish authors that there are in other fanfics that give power to the protagonists and have women behind them and the development is terrible... if you are looking for something serious, a good fanfic don't read this[img=bofetada]
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Well.... its a interesting story but the major drawback of this fanfic is just... seriously author. please add spaces 😂 add a space between dialogs, dont lump it together with the narration. Give it more "beauty" in the writing. and while its still just 12 chapters, do please correct ur sentences as some words are repeated. for example "that got that". I am very looking forward to this fanfic :)
I really like it thats all i gotta say about this.Now author when are you going to update “oni of the leaf”?
When will you update because it’s been very long lol and I just look at ur recent activity and ur not dead so what are you doing, Ik it may be stalker-ish to do that but if you don’t update I will find your ip and then find ur address fly or drive to you and force you to write 🤗
You been missing for a month longer than usual where did you take my 2 chapters I want themback you can’t just kidnap them!!!!
this is one of the best fan fics that i've read i really hope that it doesn't get dropped and kaguya in MHA is genius and unexpected❤❤❤❤❤❤❤💥💥💥💥
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The Kaguya that we all wished we had as a GF. Cute, Powerful, Smart, and Pretty. Pure reborn and with out her curse. Watch as we read the life of a Kaguya who tries to be a normal person, in a society that is in constant judgement and ridicule. Will she have the life of a normal person or take the best of humans traits to become a hero like no other, or will she condemn the world for her personal desires, or will she take her own path. Read it here, with good chapter development and story plot!
Shameless author review here. I know that this fanfiction is not the best but give it a chance. If you like it and give me collections, reviews, and power stones it will give me the motivation to keep going cause I know that you guys want more
those of you still reading this go and try advertising this on other naruto works... shameless i know but i wanna see this continue and it's looking kinda dangerous right now
Yes! Yes! Yes! And YES! This book is amazing! I just finished reading the most recent chapter and although it had its moments where a word was seemingly missing or a leter was left out/not capitalized, it’s a pretty great fanfic book so far. I’m sure future readers will really enjoy it...
Ahem, i just want to that the story is progressing smoothly so far without any problems and i like it.I believe that anyone would say the same (except the haters,man i hate those guys) take your time authur don't rush but don't take slow either (moderate pacing) thank you for the story don't drop.
It's good to see someone otherthan team 7 being the main character of the story in a naruto crossover ... Kaguya was mostly like last minute addition in naruto so it is good to see a story of her
this is great and I agree she was not evil but was forced to corrupt her self to survives ...................................................
This is geared towards teenagers. and it's not good, and there are other things better... Kaguya's personality is weird and the writing belongs to the childish authors that there are in other fanfics that give power to the protagonists and have women behind them and the development is terrible... if you are looking for something serious, a good fanfic don't read this[img=bofetada]
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Great book :.....................................................................................................................:
Well.... its a interesting story but the major drawback of this fanfic is just... seriously author. please add spaces 😂 add a space between dialogs, dont lump it together with the narration. Give it more "beauty" in the writing. and while its still just 12 chapters, do please correct ur sentences as some words are repeated. for example "that got that". I am very looking forward to this fanfic :)
I really like it thats all i gotta say about this.Now author when are you going to update “oni of the leaf”?
When will you update because it’s been very long lol and I just look at ur recent activity and ur not dead so what are you doing, Ik it may be stalker-ish to do that but if you don’t update I will find your ip and then find ur address fly or drive to you and force you to write 🤗
You been missing for a month longer than usual where did you take my 2 chapters I want themback you can’t just kidnap them!!!!
this is one of the best fan fics that i've read i really hope that it doesn't get dropped and kaguya in MHA is genius and unexpected❤❤❤❤❤❤❤💥💥💥💥
UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ!UPDATE PLZ! and ty :)
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The Kaguya that we all wished we had as a GF. Cute, Powerful, Smart, and Pretty. Pure reborn and with out her curse. Watch as we read the life of a Kaguya who tries to be a normal person, in a society that is in constant judgement and ridicule. Will she have the life of a normal person or take the best of humans traits to become a hero like no other, or will she condemn the world for her personal desires, or will she take her own path. Read it here, with good chapter development and story plot!
Shameless author review here. I know that this fanfiction is not the best but give it a chance. If you like it and give me collections, reviews, and power stones it will give me the motivation to keep going cause I know that you guys want more
those of you still reading this go and try advertising this on other naruto works... shameless i know but i wanna see this continue and it's looking kinda dangerous right now
Yes! Yes! Yes! And YES! This book is amazing! I just finished reading the most recent chapter and although it had its moments where a word was seemingly missing or a leter was left out/not capitalized, it’s a pretty great fanfic book so far. I’m sure future readers will really enjoy it...
Ahem, i just want to that the story is progressing smoothly so far without any problems and i like it.I believe that anyone would say the same (except the haters,man i hate those guys) take your time authur don't rush but don't take slow either (moderate pacing) thank you for the story don't drop.
It's good to see someone otherthan team 7 being the main character of the story in a naruto crossover ... Kaguya was mostly like last minute addition in naruto so it is good to see a story of her
this is great and I agree she was not evil but was forced to corrupt her self to survives ...................................................
I would really like this to be continued.