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can we agree that if a novel hasnt been updated in 7 months it shouldnt be suggested to you?
Good novel, but is it dropped? I really wanted to see some face slapping to all the people who hurt and insult him before
I would have preferred to see him actually get stronger to the point where he could have taken over the monsters himself. It's still a good read and really makes you want to see the MC get stronger
3stars for the update stability sry author but overall great story unique in its own way ..............................................
Dońt get fooled by the food rating I would avoid the story at all costs it is a diluted version of arifureta The writer is moving from arc to arc and keeping the reunion of the main protagonist without real reason
Great novel. Binged all 90 chap in one go. Please author update new chapter. Many are waiting for them. Story has great potential [img=recommend][img=update]
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one of the best novels but please author even 1 chapter a week you don't provide 😭 i feal this has potential to be a great novel just please upload more often and plz send mc back to school i relly wanna see everyones reactions 😇 author u best not have mc forgive the girl 😡
a really good novel, but I'm not sure as to whether the author has dropped it or gone on hiatus as it has been a while since they updated.
Slow paced and very insular. As with all novels, great potential but development is paced. Free chapters don't do it justice so don't be afraid to use a few coins.
I love this story. I literally read what chapters were available within two days. I’ve read a bit of this authors other books that get updated more frequently and they are good too but they don’t hold my interest like this one. So author I hope you update this story a bit more frequently then you have been. I don’t need daily updates but maybe once or twice a week would be lovely. Now, writing quality is very good. Few errors here and there but nothing that detracts from the reading experience. Writing stability, as I have only read this a few weeks ago but there has only been one update since. Refer to my initial paragraph of I’s love a slightly more frequent update schedule. Story and world development is really good. The world is what I would hope of the genre this novel is. Flawed. The society is literally a toilet and our MC learns it the hard way. His main desire is to just go back to his grandfather and live in ambiguity. Which I relate to on many levels. Character design isn’t anything special at the beginning of the story. Our MC is relatively plain in the beginning but the changes he goes through from story development make him interesting. All other characters are what I consider the basic anime palette. Now as this is a system novel I feel it deserves a mention. It literally involves trading, a skill I think is valuable especially for someone who doesn’t usually handle money or hang around “civilized” society. It’s the perfect system for the MC what happens to him. This a worth while story! I highly recommend it.
Do not be confused by this 3* I would have no problem recommending someone this book. Is this a "must read"? no I wouldnt say so. There are some key moments that the author kinda seems to skip over which leads to a kind of confusing plot and character development. However I wouldnt be surprised at all if this author was writing 4 or 5 star material by his next novel or even this one. He/she gets a lot of things right in my opinion. Heres more specific feedback 1. I wish I could see the character changing, instead of the end results. I kind of missed the specific moments where he evolves emotionally, then I get told later that it did. 2. The perspectives of the different characters do a lot here. Its completely underutilized in other novels and I cannot express how much I appreciate it. It helps me understand how the character is influencing the world around him. Thanm you author. 3. emotional extremes. kick him while hes down, hype him when hes supposed to win. While I think its been going fine so far, imo it could be taken a step farther. That one could totally be personal preference though.
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Its a good story, but very similar to “From common place to worlds strongest”. its fallows the same premice and plot to a t.
Great novel. Had alot of potential,however, I don't like mc that is basically an emotionaless robot. So I am dropping this. But since it had a great start,and many people might still enjoy it, so I will ati give an almost 5star rating.
good story so far! hope this continues. It's not too cliche, and the starting plot is cool. The side characters are realistic. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
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Very small chapters a d uploading is very very slow. Book is very nice story development and quality of writing is also great. +====+==++=+==+=+=+=+==+=++=++=+===
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This is one of the best novels I've ever read I like the character development ,it has a good background story, I also like the story development .
Great novel will come back in a year where hopefully there will be a stock pile of chapters. Hope he stays in the dungeon for a long time. also hope MC doesn't just go back to help humans after how he was treated and what he witness of society. no one likes a goodie to shoes mc.
hey author do you mind actually writing on your old books because I'm sure people are getting tired of buying advanced chapters ( for such a large price) only for you to stop updating your novels thanks
This is so good, why is it so underrated!!! M It is way too good!!!!!!! You must read!!!!!!!!!!! Support author!!!!!!! Reject humanity, return to Monke!!!??
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can we agree that if a novel hasnt been updated in 7 months it shouldnt be suggested to you?
Good novel, but is it dropped? I really wanted to see some face slapping to all the people who hurt and insult him before
I would have preferred to see him actually get stronger to the point where he could have taken over the monsters himself. It's still a good read and really makes you want to see the MC get stronger
3stars for the update stability sry author but overall great story unique in its own way ..............................................
Dońt get fooled by the food rating I would avoid the story at all costs it is a diluted version of arifureta The writer is moving from arc to arc and keeping the reunion of the main protagonist without real reason
Great novel. Binged all 90 chap in one go. Please author update new chapter. Many are waiting for them. Story has great potential [img=recommend][img=update]
plzz author more chaps 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------_--__--_--__-__-_--__
one of the best novels but please author even 1 chapter a week you don't provide 😭 i feal this has potential to be a great novel just please upload more often and plz send mc back to school i relly wanna see everyones reactions 😇 author u best not have mc forgive the girl 😡
a really good novel, but I'm not sure as to whether the author has dropped it or gone on hiatus as it has been a while since they updated.
Slow paced and very insular. As with all novels, great potential but development is paced. Free chapters don't do it justice so don't be afraid to use a few coins.
I love this story. I literally read what chapters were available within two days. I’ve read a bit of this authors other books that get updated more frequently and they are good too but they don’t hold my interest like this one. So author I hope you update this story a bit more frequently then you have been. I don’t need daily updates but maybe once or twice a week would be lovely. Now, writing quality is very good. Few errors here and there but nothing that detracts from the reading experience. Writing stability, as I have only read this a few weeks ago but there has only been one update since. Refer to my initial paragraph of I’s love a slightly more frequent update schedule. Story and world development is really good. The world is what I would hope of the genre this novel is. Flawed. The society is literally a toilet and our MC learns it the hard way. His main desire is to just go back to his grandfather and live in ambiguity. Which I relate to on many levels. Character design isn’t anything special at the beginning of the story. Our MC is relatively plain in the beginning but the changes he goes through from story development make him interesting. All other characters are what I consider the basic anime palette. Now as this is a system novel I feel it deserves a mention. It literally involves trading, a skill I think is valuable especially for someone who doesn’t usually handle money or hang around “civilized” society. It’s the perfect system for the MC what happens to him. This a worth while story! I highly recommend it.
Do not be confused by this 3* I would have no problem recommending someone this book. Is this a "must read"? no I wouldnt say so. There are some key moments that the author kinda seems to skip over which leads to a kind of confusing plot and character development. However I wouldnt be surprised at all if this author was writing 4 or 5 star material by his next novel or even this one. He/she gets a lot of things right in my opinion. Heres more specific feedback 1. I wish I could see the character changing, instead of the end results. I kind of missed the specific moments where he evolves emotionally, then I get told later that it did. 2. The perspectives of the different characters do a lot here. Its completely underutilized in other novels and I cannot express how much I appreciate it. It helps me understand how the character is influencing the world around him. Thanm you author. 3. emotional extremes. kick him while hes down, hype him when hes supposed to win. While I think its been going fine so far, imo it could be taken a step farther. That one could totally be personal preference though.
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Its a good story, but very similar to “From common place to worlds strongest”. its fallows the same premice and plot to a t.
Great novel. Had alot of potential,however, I don't like mc that is basically an emotionaless robot. So I am dropping this. But since it had a great start,and many people might still enjoy it, so I will ati give an almost 5star rating.
good story so far! hope this continues. It's not too cliche, and the starting plot is cool. The side characters are realistic. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
I am the exp of my sword… Webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood… I have created thousands of useless reviews… Unknown to authors, nor known to readers… Have withstood pain to create thousand of reviews… Yet these hands never type anything… SO I PRAY UNLIMITED EXP WORKS!
its a good story just not my cup fo tea really. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
More chapter please ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
I am the exp of my Holy Scripture Review. Webnovel is my body, Exp is my blood . I have created over a thousand useless reviews . Unknown to dream, nor known reality. I have withstood Pain to create many reviews. Yet this hands will never tap Anything . So as I pray ..... Unlimited Exp Works.
Very small chapters a d uploading is very very slow. Book is very nice story development and quality of writing is also great. +====+==++=+==+=+=+=+==+=++=++=+===
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
This is one of the best novels I've ever read I like the character development ,it has a good background story, I also like the story development .
Great novel will come back in a year where hopefully there will be a stock pile of chapters. Hope he stays in the dungeon for a long time. also hope MC doesn't just go back to help humans after how he was treated and what he witness of society. no one likes a goodie to shoes mc.
hey author do you mind actually writing on your old books because I'm sure people are getting tired of buying advanced chapters ( for such a large price) only for you to stop updating your novels thanks
This is so good, why is it so underrated!!! M It is way too good!!!!!!! You must read!!!!!!!!!!! Support author!!!!!!! Reject humanity, return to Monke!!!??
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author need to update this novel 😭🤔😭🤔😭😞😭🤔😞😭🤔😭🤔😞😭🤔😭 💬😭🤔😭😞😞🤔🤔😞😭🤔🤔😭🤔🤔😭🤔🤔🤔