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So, if you like yuri and kinda lewd stories, this is good. Honestly better than most of its competition anyways. The characters are well defined. The world building haven't been really developed on but seem fine. By the way, I noted regularity 5 but I just bingeread it so I actually don't know.
Needs a lot of work before it can be called good. The sentences are barely readable, there's too much shifting between POVs and the pronouns character go by is never consistent. As for everything else, they're decent at best. The pacing is all over the place, the characters feel two dimensional and the romance is way too rushed.
The yuri is strong! I like this one! I don't walk on the path of yuri... I run for the finish line to obtain the victory!
YURI IS LOVE. YURI IS LIFE. (≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)
Its a good yuri novel just wish there was more character development because sometimes I forget whos who and have to double check but it has lost of good moments 4 stars
So, if you like yuri and kinda lewd stories, this is good. Honestly better than most of its competition anyways. The characters are well defined. The world building haven't been really developed on but seem fine. By the way, I noted regularity 5 but I just bingeread it so I actually don't know.
Needs a lot of work before it can be called good. The sentences are barely readable, there's too much shifting between POVs and the pronouns character go by is never consistent. As for everything else, they're decent at best. The pacing is all over the place, the characters feel two dimensional and the romance is way too rushed.
The yuri is strong! I like this one! I don't walk on the path of yuri... I run for the finish line to obtain the victory!
YURI IS LOVE. YURI IS LIFE. (≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)(≧艸≦*)
Its a good yuri novel just wish there was more character development because sometimes I forget whos who and have to double check but it has lost of good moments 4 stars