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Nagaraju_6978

very irritating while reading because too many grammer mistake in every chapters

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Robert_C_7044

This thing out all potential awesome Costell could be great but why goodness the Walter there’s so many typos so many things it’s hard to decipher and you can barely read it. It’s bad it is bad. People got names out like such as milk. Goddamn grandmother’s name is milk I don’t know what the offer was doing. He was smoking some good stuff. There’s a whole bunch of bad grammar in here and it kind of jumps around little bit. Like I said it could be good it is not.

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Cyrnean
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The story itself is good, but the translation for English is horrible. I got up to chapter 13 before I had to stop. It gets really confusing with the name changing, unclear genders, and poor grammar.

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Maria_Andersson_8078

interesting plot but atrocious English. Of course the usual gender confusion (not only he-she, his-her but boy-girl) and a number of different name versions for the same characters, literal translations that no sense to the non-Chinese speaker. often one has to guess the meaning from context. it gets rather humorous though with e.g. a grandmother alternately referred to as the milkman and the sun.

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Rose_Bush_7428

although the grammar is bad, I still like the general plot of the story. it just needs more editing and proofreading before published

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oppy4real

Terrible translation. Stopped reading after the 1st chapter.

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Chang_mie

I really tried to understand this and read. But I cannot go on like this. It is really hard to understand this. Great story but so many grammar mistakes. 😌

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Desiray_Mueller

This seems like a great story but it’s so much grammar errors that’s I dropped it. Storyline was good but Please get a editor immediately.

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SassyRiah

honestly, it has potential to be a decent read, but the grammar and sentence structure was awful reading it and trying to decipher it gave me a headache so I gave up reading from chapter 3 I hoped the translation would have improved but it got worse.

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jaygrandson

i can't omg i'm so angry why is the mom so slow and stupid and the father is annoying and blinded by filial piety plus the words are messed up and the names change i'm so confused and frustrated sorry but i don't recommend.....

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TessaFabz

Good Story VERY VERY BAD TRANSALTION.The plot is good but the translations, the grammars and sentence construction are very bad and confusing. Definitely not recommended unless the grammar construction would be fixed.

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books_n_coffee

This is impossible to read. How in heaven's name is it at number 56?The idea is great, but honestly even for free (today) it is impossible to understand. You can never work out who is talking to who, or who they are referring to. Names and pronouns change continually. bah

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Roasai_Willow

I really liked the premise of the novel. Unfortunately the grammar was too much of a challenge, it was just too confusing to following which overshone what seemed to be a really good read. It just wasn’t worth struggling through. If this is ever edited I would definitely give it another chance.

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Sysy28194962

i like the story but it is confusing, shes'sa girl so u should use She not He🥱

1yr
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MGlory92

Please, please, get an editor! I would love to read this book, but grammar is terrible.

1yr
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Reeves_1911

The original writing should be good, however, the translation is going to get a 2.5. There were so many errors since the beginning of the book that sometimes you wouldn't know what book you're reading anymore. The most glaring was the names the worst being "Wang's disease" and "cephalo-" (for the name of a person; at least in the first 20 chapters), the names also often change, the pronouns are sometimes wrong, and the phrases and words are translated incorrectly, among others. It's been a year or so already but they haven't fixed it, so I don't think they will. It's such a shame since the story seems to be good.

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TerriLynn32

The Grammar is crazy. It hard to understand.

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Daoistn0CBbf

Apologies, the trans are bad. If the translations are cleaned up, I may increase up the rating. [img=faceslap]. The rating should be 1, I was unable to post without rating the rest.

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samten

I have tuff time understanding the story . too many Grammer mistake.

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Shachin83

plz find a editor n fix it's grammar. I would really like to read it coz I think d plot is really good.

1yr
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churima

The flow of the story is good. The only flaw is the grammar and construction of sentences. This story needs a serious proofreading. I'm having a headache the longer I read. haha

1yr
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Lyn_Trasmonte

The translation ruined the story. I got a headache after reading on this app.

1yr
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sharon_wanjiku

This book is called Rural vixenish wife raising and farming the author is Mu XiXi its on babel novel if you want to read a better version of it.

1yr
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Angeline_Lee_3871

The translation is so bad that you need to know Chinese to guess what’s going on. The MC from the first episode does a complete 180 from the old persona. Usual tropes like doing CPR, selling medicinal materials are used, nothing new & the execution is not that exciting either. decided to give up after 10+ episodes as reading it is as bad as MTL

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zhangsan

Can find at mtl farmer's pampered wife : farming crops to raise a bun

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Tenerking

I would give it more stars if it wasn’t so hard to follow. The grammar is really bad and it makes for confusion when trying to follow the story

1yr
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shanishan

From what i read so far, the overall story is really interesting. The only downside of this, is on how the novel was poorly translated, it gives a lot of confusion, i'm a patience type of reader so i can read and understand it through it's sentences context but it really mess up my thinking, i just hope they would proofread the novel someday. anybody wants to know the other english t-i-t-t-l-e of this? [img=fp]

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Yeby
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I read this like i’m play puzzles. Spoil my mood and i don’t want to continue again. I’m feeling dizzy, honestly. i always asking myself am i in the correct track of storyline? MIxing characters and gender, and different names for suddenly. 🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️

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jyang0508

I dropped this book at chapter 13. At first I wanted to keep reading because I understand translating and editing into English can be hard. However it was just too much for me. I like it until the grammar started getting in the way of reading. Good luck to those who read this novel. 🫡✌🏻

1yr
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ZoMeow

gave this rating only because of the translation pleas do proofread. waiting for it to read again. hope the author and apps will see this and give us perfect translation of story. thanks and sorry in advance

1yr
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Nagaraju_6978

very irritating while reading because too many grammer mistake in every chapters

1mth
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Robert_C_7044

This thing out all potential awesome Costell could be great but why goodness the Walter there’s so many typos so many things it’s hard to decipher and you can barely read it. It’s bad it is bad. People got names out like such as milk. Goddamn grandmother’s name is milk I don’t know what the offer was doing. He was smoking some good stuff. There’s a whole bunch of bad grammar in here and it kind of jumps around little bit. Like I said it could be good it is not.

1mth
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Cyrnean
LV 15 Badge

The story itself is good, but the translation for English is horrible. I got up to chapter 13 before I had to stop. It gets really confusing with the name changing, unclear genders, and poor grammar.

8mth
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Maria_Andersson_8078

interesting plot but atrocious English. Of course the usual gender confusion (not only he-she, his-her but boy-girl) and a number of different name versions for the same characters, literal translations that no sense to the non-Chinese speaker. often one has to guess the meaning from context. it gets rather humorous though with e.g. a grandmother alternately referred to as the milkman and the sun.

8mth
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Rose_Bush_7428

although the grammar is bad, I still like the general plot of the story. it just needs more editing and proofreading before published

10mth
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oppy4real

Terrible translation. Stopped reading after the 1st chapter.

11mth
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Chang_mie

I really tried to understand this and read. But I cannot go on like this. It is really hard to understand this. Great story but so many grammar mistakes. 😌

11mth
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Desiray_Mueller

This seems like a great story but it’s so much grammar errors that’s I dropped it. Storyline was good but Please get a editor immediately.

1yr
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SassyRiah

honestly, it has potential to be a decent read, but the grammar and sentence structure was awful reading it and trying to decipher it gave me a headache so I gave up reading from chapter 3 I hoped the translation would have improved but it got worse.

1yr
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jaygrandson

i can't omg i'm so angry why is the mom so slow and stupid and the father is annoying and blinded by filial piety plus the words are messed up and the names change i'm so confused and frustrated sorry but i don't recommend.....

1yr
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TessaFabz

Good Story VERY VERY BAD TRANSALTION.The plot is good but the translations, the grammars and sentence construction are very bad and confusing. Definitely not recommended unless the grammar construction would be fixed.

1yr
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books_n_coffee

This is impossible to read. How in heaven's name is it at number 56?The idea is great, but honestly even for free (today) it is impossible to understand. You can never work out who is talking to who, or who they are referring to. Names and pronouns change continually. bah

1yr
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Roasai_Willow

I really liked the premise of the novel. Unfortunately the grammar was too much of a challenge, it was just too confusing to following which overshone what seemed to be a really good read. It just wasn’t worth struggling through. If this is ever edited I would definitely give it another chance.

1yr
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Sysy28194962

i like the story but it is confusing, shes'sa girl so u should use She not He🥱

1yr
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MGlory92

Please, please, get an editor! I would love to read this book, but grammar is terrible.

1yr
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Reeves_1911

The original writing should be good, however, the translation is going to get a 2.5. There were so many errors since the beginning of the book that sometimes you wouldn't know what book you're reading anymore. The most glaring was the names the worst being "Wang's disease" and "cephalo-" (for the name of a person; at least in the first 20 chapters), the names also often change, the pronouns are sometimes wrong, and the phrases and words are translated incorrectly, among others. It's been a year or so already but they haven't fixed it, so I don't think they will. It's such a shame since the story seems to be good.

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1yr
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TerriLynn32

The Grammar is crazy. It hard to understand.

1yr
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Daoistn0CBbf

Apologies, the trans are bad. If the translations are cleaned up, I may increase up the rating. [img=faceslap]. The rating should be 1, I was unable to post without rating the rest.

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1yr
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samten

I have tuff time understanding the story . too many Grammer mistake.

1yr
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Shachin83

plz find a editor n fix it's grammar. I would really like to read it coz I think d plot is really good.

1yr
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churima

The flow of the story is good. The only flaw is the grammar and construction of sentences. This story needs a serious proofreading. I'm having a headache the longer I read. haha

1yr
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Lyn_Trasmonte

The translation ruined the story. I got a headache after reading on this app.

1yr
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sharon_wanjiku

This book is called Rural vixenish wife raising and farming the author is Mu XiXi its on babel novel if you want to read a better version of it.

1yr
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Angeline_Lee_3871

The translation is so bad that you need to know Chinese to guess what’s going on. The MC from the first episode does a complete 180 from the old persona. Usual tropes like doing CPR, selling medicinal materials are used, nothing new & the execution is not that exciting either. decided to give up after 10+ episodes as reading it is as bad as MTL

1yr
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zhangsan

Can find at mtl farmer's pampered wife : farming crops to raise a bun

1yr
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Tenerking

I would give it more stars if it wasn’t so hard to follow. The grammar is really bad and it makes for confusion when trying to follow the story

1yr
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shanishan

From what i read so far, the overall story is really interesting. The only downside of this, is on how the novel was poorly translated, it gives a lot of confusion, i'm a patience type of reader so i can read and understand it through it's sentences context but it really mess up my thinking, i just hope they would proofread the novel someday. anybody wants to know the other english t-i-t-t-l-e of this? [img=fp]

1yr
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Yeby
LV 13 Badge

I read this like i’m play puzzles. Spoil my mood and i don’t want to continue again. I’m feeling dizzy, honestly. i always asking myself am i in the correct track of storyline? MIxing characters and gender, and different names for suddenly. 🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️

1yr
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jyang0508

I dropped this book at chapter 13. At first I wanted to keep reading because I understand translating and editing into English can be hard. However it was just too much for me. I like it until the grammar started getting in the way of reading. Good luck to those who read this novel. 🫡✌🏻

1yr
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ZoMeow

gave this rating only because of the translation pleas do proofread. waiting for it to read again. hope the author and apps will see this and give us perfect translation of story. thanks and sorry in advance

1yr
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