Bachelor's party
All his friends met in a nearby hotel as it was his wedding eve. This was the last night as a bachelor and so his best friend Tonny had organise a suprise appetizer as they called it.
"Keith take these bunch of keys and head to room 106 i have a suprise gift for you" said Tonny. Keith was perplexed since he guessed what Tonny had prepared for him as a suprise but men will always be men Keith felt his body burning up. He rushed to the suit but once at the door he hesisted on opening the door and started to contemplate if to enter or not. Keith made a final decision to walk away and not to break the trust he had for Kim but after walking ten steps away from the door he started imagining how could he loose this golden opportunity given on to him by his best friend and so he rushed towards the door and opened. After opening the door he did not see anything or anyone in the room even though he didn't have anything in particular that he was looking for.
Keith entered the suit and closed the door behind him then went and sat on the bed and while cursing his best friend Tonny for tricking him. Since his mind was set on doing it as this was the bachelor's night culture once he was given the key he laid on the bed and while breathing very fast that a person next door could hear his heartbeat. Keith eyes were full of lust that he started trembling not knowing what to do when he couldn't hold it anymore he rushed to the washroom and released himself, and when he was good he came back and sat on a sit next to the coffee table that was on the left side of the bed. On top of the table their was a telephone set and under the telephone their was a piece of paper. Keith looked at the paper before he could pull the paper out. His phone blinked twice he picked it up to check who was texting him at that time back in his mind he was really wishing the message to be from Kim oooh the heavens had answered his prayers " have fun babe as from tomorrow you will never enjoy thats freedom again."
Keith started to think what to do next and with the go ahead from her beloved darling he could do what he wanted. while he was in deep thoughts his phone rang this time it was Tonny who was asking him what was his selection, Keith did not understand so he asked Tonny to clarify at that point tonny started to get argittated by his response and he told him to look under the telephone set.
He then pulled the piece of paper and to his suprise there was a paper of different beautiful brazillian girls who were on their mid 20s. Keith started to salivate for the girls and he could not choose one and so he decided to call Tonny and ask him if he could have them all.
Tonny choked and started to cough on the other end of the call he could not believe his ears if this was his friend that he has known for more than he can remember a friend who was always shy to talk or meet girls now he want 4 girl all to himself this was serious Tonny thought something was wrong . Tonny offered him a posibility of only two girls although Keith was not okay with his friends plan their was nithing he could do but only accept since it was even a rare opportunity.
While waiting for them he decided to go and have a warm bubble bath and warm his body since it was his last day as a bachelor hence would be a very busy night. Since he was shamelessly thinking of the adventure he would be having with thw girls he lost the count of time and even fell asleep in the bath tab. knock ! knock ! knock! the sound of the door woke him up just to realise he was in slumber land inside the bath tab the water was already very cold to the extend where his lower body part was numbe.
he could not allow such a rare opportunity to slip away so struggled to get out of the tub so that he can go and open the door.
as luck was on his side he managed to get out of the tub when he was at the door he had again thr sound of someone knocking the door
Knock! knock! knock!
so he covered himself with a towel while his hair was dripping water on the floor.
then he opened the door and when he was about to say something words could not come out of his mouth only his eyes were doing the talking it was.....
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