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In a world made up of four divided races, there is one girl who has the resolve to unite the four of them. But will she succeed with threats hanging from the corner or will she prevail in her quest?
This is NOT a romance novel
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I love the whole concept of the book. The book has an intriguing description and I find it very attractive...I wasn't planning to read on but I would definitely continue because what I've read so far is worth it. Please author, I really think you should choose a nice book cover to suit the book.
The first chapter needs action so it can draw the attention of readers. There's too much narration in the first chapter, making the book look boring.....................................
You have excellent grammar and have very creative ideas for your book's world and characters. Keep it up author. You're doing quite well so far. [img=recommend]
It was mentioned that humans are weak. But, isn't the FL basically a human? I mean, the fact that she is a caster doesn't change the fact that she is a born human. Yet, the humans and casters being mentioned as a separate race is super confusing.
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First, I think you really need to put a proper book cover to entice potential readers to your book. I am going to be blunt but the first 4 chapters were boring. The first chapter lacks a powerful cliff-hanger but the plot/world background had sold me to read Chapter 2, so I hope you can edit the first chapter and make it as interesting as to convince a reader to read further. The narrations were too long, although the grammar and spellings were decent except some instances wherein there were no space after '.' I strongly recommend to minimize describing everything and everyone in detail, especially filler characters like hair colors and the colors of their outfits. Try introducing new characters slowly but interestingly, create mystery around those characters to hook up your readers' attention. Honestly, the story were too fast-paced and all scenes were too simple, like for chapter 2 wherein the main character was introduced. I wish the author could have put more gravity to the scene wherein she discovered that she was a caster and that she was adopted. Also, I agree to one of your reader's review about the Japanese names. Since this is fantasy, you can use fictitious names for places because it was really weird for a character living in Syria having a Japanese name. Lastly, I do look forward to your growth as a writer. Continue writing and improve in your craft. 🤗
it really hooked me up but the cover needs to be worked on added it to my library