/ Urban / Musical Mafia Love
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" Ooohhh The fire is coming closer and closer I have to go but please tell Emma I love her and I'm sorry for disapponting her and give the twins a kiss on my forehead " and with that she hangs up.Like as if reading my mind the guys and I run out of the house and driving to the location and we are too late the explotion has already happened.
I was too late I fall to the ground in my knees and start crying.I notice something shining heading over to it to see that it's her accomplishment bracelet.
I smile at the memories of her how she always loved to smile and crack jokes all day long.The pranks she did on people.How she was always in the music room playing songs with James.
Her songs blasting around the house.She was my only way out of the darkness and now shes gone and isn't coming back.
-- Power
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Has a good story concept .Love how there is always drama in every turn of the story. Story has all exciting genres bundled up. Too bad grammatical errors spoils the whole story but that is something fixable. All in all great story.[img=coins]
really enjoyed the outcome of the story as well as the motive behind it, a lot of creativity can clearly be seen in this story. story would have been good if there was more gramatical improvement
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