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Monument of a Labyrinthine Individual

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Author: Dzaava

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‘Monument of a Labyrinthine Individual’ is an amorphous story. Its universe is unpredictable and boundless in size and depth. All characters are round in construction and lifelike in reason. The major themes are the complexity of human nature and that of existence, expressed through the viewpoint of ever-growing individuals. This story is not meant for everyone.

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Marius_Burlacu

I love the way you portray the protagonist in the story, it resemble the harsh things a man has to go through in order to grow as an individual, though, you kind of forget his name in the absence of a remind.I feel that the description of the scenes is very graphic and illustrative, and it gives a full sense of reality and gloom.

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Stardreamer12

Wow, I like the way you wrote the story, especially your English. It was awesome and easy to understand. I also liked the way you described the story and portrayed the emotions of the characters and their backgrounds. However, I noticed that sometimes you didn't mention the name of the protagonist, which made me forget his name. The only names I remembered were Sofia and Sebastian. But overall, it was a good story. I especially liked chapter 3, which was full of emotion as the protagonist saw the corpse of Sebastian. If you update more often, you will probably gather many readers.

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Dzaava

You could update more frequently. [img=update] I wish I could upload more content but I lack the time to write... By the way, if you have any questions regarding this work, please contact me.

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