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Monkey King is a Mafia Lord
4.87 (18 ratings)
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Beloni better known as Babylon is the capital city of dreams and nightmares. It is divided into three sections, the third and outermost part being not only the slums but home to a boy who strongly believes that the government is hiding superpowers.
Monke is a boy who once lived in the inner circle of Babylon, but his mother was killed he was relocated to Babylon 3rd where he joined a mafia family called Divinity. He is now in high school and has only 3 goals, to find the person who killed his mother, turn his neighborhood into a place without fear, and lastly to find out what the government is hiding.
Volume one follows former assassin Joao.
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Monke, the protagonist immediately attracted my attention since the first chapter of this wonderful story. The development of the story is good. The author has explained in a nice way how Monke was being treated as weak among all the students and eventually with the chapters the author has portrayed the MC's character building. There are certain gaps in the story which I believe the author will correct. Apart from it the story is really interesting and full of adventures. Sorry for this late review author. I hope you'll keep writing this story and bring out more and more unique things out of this story. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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An MC named Monkey King is already enough to grab my attention. However, that was not the real reason that compelled me to continue reading the next chapters. The characters had distinct personalities and the author has also done a great job of describing the scenes. We're just in the initial chapters and I'm already intrigued. Waiting for the next chapters to be uploaded. Make sure to give us a lot more of Monke's adventures, my dear Author!!
intriguing plot, interesting characters. The writing style is good, flaws and typos here and there but nobody's perfect. I love how the story is going so far, and I'm looking forward to the next chapters! author is very generous and spoiling us with publishing so many chapters in a day❤ keep up the good work
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never a delay in updating mister author👏👏keep up the good work and I like the excellent description of characters 😉 looking forward to the adventure of monke and friends ❤️☺️
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So, here is my review after going through the latest chapters, which is ten I guess. This review won't spoil you, as I am not here to fix the mistakes, but just let you know what it has The story is not the best I have ever seen, but with enough focus, you can understand what's going on. The writting quality is again not perfect, but far better than the average, but author tends to use some uncommon words, which with enough banging will be clear. Character are good, and have some depth which is good as far as what I aim for. Update stability is the worst feature of WN, and I never understood the point of the feature. Since the book is on a contest, author would pump out chapters daily, and may get stressed, so Author can take a rest if the quality is good. Not everyone runs after quantity. In the long run, the later winns I guess. World Background was the one of the fee things I am very strict nwith, and thus book, not till the chapter satisfied my desire for world building. Ah... Here I go, fixing errors, wasting both my and my brain cells, but if it did help, then it's good for me
Very interesting novel that hooks the reader. Very good charactrr development and from what I read ot has great potential. I will definitely be back to binje read it good job jordi
Good job author .... Really made the story intriguing.. . I want to read the next chaps faster... I liked how you detailed the characters ... It's really good..
Not a bad novel in the slightest. The characters immediately get their distinct personalities which makes the dialogue a whole lot better than average. The story is still starting to pick up but I have good faith in it. I expect good things for the author and really hope he delivers! Good luck in the competition my rival!
The story itself is good but there's a few issues with spacing. A tad bit of story gaps but it's still understandable, not too many issues with grammar and all that jazz so we good there. Other than that it's a good story
This book has no reviews, and I wanted to smash one to this review section. It's good, persay. A slice of life, school novel is kinda my reading habit, so I am going to add it... Good Luck. I would review once again after I read enough chapters
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Obligatory five star review by a shameless author, this is the first time I am writing something without any magic, super powers and systems. I just hope that it doesn't fall flat because I kind of enjoy writing it.
Hi, I like your novel, keep enthusiastic about updating your novel, and also make more detailed words from your novel, that's all my advice, thank you
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