Mobile Legends: The Untold Story (515 Contest)

LV 3

Arcturus420

The story is rather long, yes... Longest MLBB FanFiction ever written, and not yet done! Feel free to support me on this contest, or simply drop a review and think about the story! All criticisms appreciated!

LV 1

aeelyte

Woah... Daebak. I was looking unto this competition and happened to see this story which is quite what i saw in fanfiction.net..ML:"The untold story.. "Good luck...It's a great idea for u to post it here too.. 😊😊

LV 2

Sequestered_Moon

I like the writing style and there are almost no grammar mistakes. I also love the flow of the story, on how natural it goes. The story isn't cliche or forced. I hope this continues and it wouldn't be like the other stories which are high on cheesy romance :D

LV 11

isharislynkia

Speechless......😶 Honestly, Idk what else to say! I'm amazed at how you made such a longggg MLBB fanfiction ever written. All our efforts are worth it! I love the way how it flows. Not too cringe. Not too shabby. Especially, the characters..weren't into relationship forcibly and how u made them interact with each other. I'm started to fall deeper into the story and learn a lot about their backgrounds.🤣 This good work novel merits to be the first on the contest. 🏅 I really wanted to make a reincarnation or transmission story about an ml player. But sometimes, it's hard to make the story flows and when u don't know which ideas u wanted to write, you'll get stuck. I know writers experienced this. And btw, even though there's a lot going on here. Never give up and keep up the amazing work!^^❤❤

LV 3

areum_mi

I'm gonna make my review now even though I haven't finished the book. Still @ chapter 10 with the lowkey fourth wall breaking intro, HAHAH. At the start, I wasn't really interested; maybe because it started with Yun Zhao, and he didn't pique my interest. But after reading the next few chapters, I found myself falling deeper for the story. How you introduced the characters with such detail made me go "wow". Ang smooth ng transition from hero to hero, and how their stories were linked had me impressed. I still have 20+ chapters to read, so I'll be continuing within my free time. Keep up the good work po! I hope you climb up the leaderboards pa, this story is much more deserving of being in the top 5, honestly.

LV 2

shiitakemushrooms

Dude, I like your writing style. I also like the way you didn't forcefully make the characters have relationships, how you made them interact to each other, building up characters and we gotta know them more. I also love the battle scenes. First time reading a ML fanfic where their personalities aren't exaggerated or "out of character" ones. I hope you made it to the top '-')/

LV 3

Nobrond

Characters we love from MLBB : Check No over-exaggerated relationships : Check Unique word choice : Check Magnificent battle scenes : Check No random crap out of nowhere : Check Stability in story : Check UNIQUE PLOT : CHECK YES !! Deserves to be on top !!

MLBB Fanfics its so nice to be here thank you for inviting me here godbless all of the webnovel fans here thank you for all the support we love you kapamilya chararan hahahaha

LV 3

Vaspt

I'm gonna shot the record here and now... If anyone doesn't knew who Yun Zhao was. He was the first name of one of our heroes on this day. His modern name today was "Zilong". The first name maybe was Yun Zhao.

LV 1

SOPEDDAENG

I am so amazed by your updates and I do love the way you write *claps hearts*. This story is more than deserving, the contest isn't over yet you managed to finish this *screams in satoori* within days. I adore you for being so passionate and being a good writer. Congratulations!!!!!

LV 3

Kennu_Demerin

Hello arcturus, I just came here from BAEPSAE's entry, she told me to notify you so that I join the group chat on facebook. Anyways, I just visited your story and I should say, both you were far better than I am 😅 but still, I want to continue even if im a li'l bit late, I know it can help me as an individual. Is it ok if I join? Anyways Godbless you and your entry I know its a sure win. :) Anyways my fb account: Kennu Demerin (wearing red polo shirt sitting above a big rock 😅)

Amazing plot! Amazing writing skills! I wish you wud just replace the 4th spot now. This story deserves a lot of attention! Keep it up! Tho im not a fan of overly long storyline. You manage to make this one very engaging and dynamic. So much greatness ahead of you! I wish I had more power stones so I could give you mine. But i already gave it earlier.

LV 2

G_dragginem

this story's chapters are longer and more interesting than my life ISTG. i dont like giving out long reviews, so ima be blunt w this 1. how the story goes is pretty smooth. life of the characters, and then conflict, and on and on. keep it up bro.

This story is really interesting. This is the first time I've read a fan-fiction story with decent character development and story line. Please support this story!

LV 5

chaosdreamfire

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LV 14

Aagnus

I dont know about the stability of your update but. OhMyGhawd!!! Theres actually a MLBB fanfic! I just hope more chapters to come dont drop this novel!!!

LV 4

Allen_Clay012

The length of the chapters, the interaction between the characters are all superb. Indeed this is one of the finest work in the contest. 👍👍👍👍

never have i seen such play of words omg. How do you manage to write this long???and so much? Very interesting. Looking forward to your next update so imma give u my next powerstone