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everything is ok but i think its too fast pacing and the chapters are too short ..................................................................................................................................................
It’s a pretty good start with a nice quirk only peeve is that the chapters are short wish they were longer
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everything is ok but i think its too fast pacing and the chapters are too short ..................................................................................................................................................
It’s a pretty good start with a nice quirk only peeve is that the chapters are short wish they were longer
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