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Things didn't go like the original. A tragic event in Denki's childhood has transformed him into a new and improved future hero.
he won't be the lazy, dumb bum he was before. Now, using his newfound capabilities, he'll become a true powerhouse of class 1.A!
this is a rewrite of a fic I started ages ago on another acc I lost access to. I've decided to try and improve upon what I made before with a more realistic rise to power.
I've still tried my best to root his abilities in somewhat real to life science, several based off of real world animals and insects that use electricity in interesting ways.
But not all of his techniques will be perfectly realistic. His stronger ones will definitely stretch that very thin line at best.
I reasoned that, in a world where a guy with metal wings can fly and a guy can punch out his fist to change the weather, it was fine though lol.
wish me luck, any support and supportive criticism welcomed.
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There are quite a lot spelling and grammatical mistakes but other that that this one is pretty decent. Has good development pace and first 3 chs were best yet. Powers are also explained in just the right amount of detail. Character development also seems to be well rounded and going at a good pace
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decent story far apart from a couple chapters adding literally nothing to the story, the female lead is momo for no reason since she literally acts like jiro aswell so i dont understand that, im guessing author like the way momo looks or something
will change the rating to what I really think later but gotta boost that score for now 😉