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Amazing book!. At first it will be slow paced but the plot and the characters are wonderful! I recommend this to fellow readers!
It's mediocre at best.The grammar is just bad and I cant say character design is any better. The dialogue is horrible it's just too one dimensional and the lack of simple common sense with any of the characters doesn't help.
Although I'm only at chapter 50, it only took me one chapter to get hooked on the story. The mondial context is quite mysterious which makes the reader want to continue reading this novel. The author did a good job. And is there any romance in this romance ? Please answer my question THX.
I am starting to get interested the more I read. Keep it up author! I liked the all three books! Recommend them to everyone!
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this was not executed well. The story has way too many pov's. it's horrendous it starts to put me to sleep and can't focus. I made it to ch 16 and couldn't stand the grammer anymore.
Everything is good. Characters, system, background and even the system. Overall, amazing!👏👏👏 First seven chapters are about how Yuan dies and then the real story begins. Slow pace story!
Just Amazing![img=recommend]👍👍👍 I just love it. The story, the characters and the plot. I reccomend this novel those who want to read amazing novel and have a good reading time!
Like seriously am so engage in this book..There are few grammatics errors but aside from that, you can’t stop reading once you start reading. goodluck author
This book is so intriguing to read. A few misconceptions in the grammar but doesn't really affect the overall flow. Continue to do your best man!
This book is a very interesting one, but with good writing and story development. It keeps me intriuged as I continue to read.
One of the most intriguing books I came across here. You just can't put it down once you start reading. Greatcharacter building, smooth descriptions and the plot has a nice feel to it. Everything fits like a clockwork and the narrative is sleek. Going to its well earned place in my library, I will definitely be returning to read more. Please keep writing!
This isn't really my genre but the story is okay.I noticed some grammar errors in the beginning but glad that was cleared up.The mc is great and the storyline and plot is wonderful.Keep it up [img=recommend]
Interesting story. There are a few grammar and spelling errors at the start, but its still pretty easy to read so that's not really a problem. The original betrayal is quite... dramatic. Like the guy was clearly using some voodoo curses to get to that situation lol. The story seems fun enough and the new disciple character seems pretty fun. It's a decent read. Do check it out.
Very good novel. I am new to web novels but this is actually fun. I have a good time reading the book. Thanks author! Your writing style also good. Characters are well developed.
Fascinating, Engaging, Immersing😍😍😍 Really loved it. The description, actions, emotions and thoughts of the characters, all of it was captivating. Good job author! Keep it up. Waiting for more chapters🤗🤗🤗
Everything is good so far. I like the characters and writing style. Grammar is also good right now. Good luck on working hard. I think real start starts from the chapter 'Death'.
Reveal Spoiler
As the author of the novel, I will give my story the highest score shamelessly. This story is about the master who is calm, handsome, (innocent), benevolent yet cold, and revengeful at the same time. His disciples are also one of a kind. Spoiler: The story will be slow-paced in the beginning with multiple POVs from the chapter Huan to the end of "Fighting League". And from that point, it will be a little faster. Read the story while you become a disciple of Rong Yuan along the way...
Amazing book!. At first it will be slow paced but the plot and the characters are wonderful! I recommend this to fellow readers!
It's mediocre at best.The grammar is just bad and I cant say character design is any better. The dialogue is horrible it's just too one dimensional and the lack of simple common sense with any of the characters doesn't help.
Although I'm only at chapter 50, it only took me one chapter to get hooked on the story. The mondial context is quite mysterious which makes the reader want to continue reading this novel. The author did a good job. And is there any romance in this romance ? Please answer my question THX.
I am starting to get interested the more I read. Keep it up author! I liked the all three books! Recommend them to everyone!
is there harem, is there harem, is there harem, is there harem, is there harem, is there harem, is there harem, is there harem, is there harem.
this was not executed well. The story has way too many pov's. it's horrendous it starts to put me to sleep and can't focus. I made it to ch 16 and couldn't stand the grammer anymore.
Everything is good. Characters, system, background and even the system. Overall, amazing!👏👏👏 First seven chapters are about how Yuan dies and then the real story begins. Slow pace story!
Just Amazing![img=recommend]👍👍👍 I just love it. The story, the characters and the plot. I reccomend this novel those who want to read amazing novel and have a good reading time!
Like seriously am so engage in this book..There are few grammatics errors but aside from that, you can’t stop reading once you start reading. goodluck author
This book is so intriguing to read. A few misconceptions in the grammar but doesn't really affect the overall flow. Continue to do your best man!
This book is a very interesting one, but with good writing and story development. It keeps me intriuged as I continue to read.
One of the most intriguing books I came across here. You just can't put it down once you start reading. Greatcharacter building, smooth descriptions and the plot has a nice feel to it. Everything fits like a clockwork and the narrative is sleek. Going to its well earned place in my library, I will definitely be returning to read more. Please keep writing!
This isn't really my genre but the story is okay.I noticed some grammar errors in the beginning but glad that was cleared up.The mc is great and the storyline and plot is wonderful.Keep it up [img=recommend]
Interesting story. There are a few grammar and spelling errors at the start, but its still pretty easy to read so that's not really a problem. The original betrayal is quite... dramatic. Like the guy was clearly using some voodoo curses to get to that situation lol. The story seems fun enough and the new disciple character seems pretty fun. It's a decent read. Do check it out.
Very good novel. I am new to web novels but this is actually fun. I have a good time reading the book. Thanks author! Your writing style also good. Characters are well developed.
Fascinating, Engaging, Immersing😍😍😍 Really loved it. The description, actions, emotions and thoughts of the characters, all of it was captivating. Good job author! Keep it up. Waiting for more chapters🤗🤗🤗
Everything is good so far. I like the characters and writing style. Grammar is also good right now. Good luck on working hard. I think real start starts from the chapter 'Death'.
Reveal Spoiler 
As the author of the novel, I will give my story the highest score shamelessly. This story is about the master who is calm, handsome, (innocent), benevolent yet cold, and revengeful at the same time. His disciples are also one of a kind. Spoiler: The story will be slow-paced in the beginning with multiple POVs from the chapter Huan to the end of "Fighting League". And from that point, it will be a little faster. Read the story while you become a disciple of Rong Yuan along the way...