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Enjoyed reading it and i lve the concept, feels a little to fast paced from the beginning though. If possible slow it down and give the characters more substance. Otherwise its pretty great and i like the concept, hopefully you offer more to this story because i feel it has potential. Thanks
Enjoyed reading it and i lve the concept, feels a little to fast paced from the beginning though. If possible slow it down and give the characters more substance. Otherwise its pretty great and i like the concept, hopefully you offer more to this story because i feel it has potential. Thanks