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So, this is just my honest review here. The story and the premise has potential. However, the grammar, along with how the sentences are structured in the story, makes reading it a bit of a challenge. Personally, I'd recommend you use Grammarly or an AI to help polish your story, to make it more readable and cohesive to the audience. Also, if you don't already, get yourself a proof-reader (Or sometimes known as a Beta-reader) to proof read your chapters before release. Overall, I love the idea and hope you continue it. But I'd really like to see this story become polished so it can be perfectly enjoyed :)
Uma das poucas histórias que usa a Morgan, Com uma proposta e ideia absurda de ótima e é uma delícia de ler. Desejo tudo de bom para você e sua história, que continue com o ótimo trabalho.
Realistically, I want to become a good writer and the kind with a 20.000 collection and well my dream is to become a legend, so let me be cringe in my review
good work [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
So, this is just my honest review here. The story and the premise has potential. However, the grammar, along with how the sentences are structured in the story, makes reading it a bit of a challenge. Personally, I'd recommend you use Grammarly or an AI to help polish your story, to make it more readable and cohesive to the audience. Also, if you don't already, get yourself a proof-reader (Or sometimes known as a Beta-reader) to proof read your chapters before release. Overall, I love the idea and hope you continue it. But I'd really like to see this story become polished so it can be perfectly enjoyed :)
Uma das poucas histórias que usa a Morgan, Com uma proposta e ideia absurda de ótima e é uma delícia de ler. Desejo tudo de bom para você e sua história, que continue com o ótimo trabalho.
Realistically, I want to become a good writer and the kind with a 20.000 collection and well my dream is to become a legend, so let me be cringe in my review